"Tomorrow" - A Short Story of my own creation

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Phoenix

ElmStreetFan01
Amazing reading rock Happy Dance thumb up

Captain REX
I think I'm gonna cry, it's really sad, Phoenix...no, not your writing abilities, the story! smile

Dexx
it's a tad sad. I think you'd better writye a 'revenge of melisa' episode. I want lisa's blood..argh evil face

Captain REX
Yeah, same here. wink

"Melissa, fed up with Lisa's taunting and beating, took out her violin and started wielding it like a quarterstaff..."

laughing out loud

Great writing though, Phoe. smile

airangel429
GOOD WRITING PHOE! big grin

hotsauce6548
yeah... "Melissa bashed Lisa over the head with her violin and then threw her unconsious body into a lake near her house..."

hotsauce6548
lol... im not takin the story from u... keep goin its good

Mordecai
Amazing.

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