Elm Street: First Murders (My Version/Add On)
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Elm Street: First Murders
1847 Elm Street: Springwood, Ohio 1971
Freddy walked out of his house then climbed into his '70 Corvette.
Freddy stared at a little girl then pulled off.
Freddy played some James Brown.
Freddy: That little girl is mine.
Freddy speeded until he reached the Springwood Power Plant.
1267 Elm Street: Springwood Power Plant
Freddy climbed out of his Corvette.
Manager: Mr. Krueger.
Freddy: *Looking Up* Mr. Daytona.
Mr. Daytona: Get to Work Krueger.
Freddy walked inside of the Power Plant.
Worker: Hey Freddy.
Freddy turned and look.
Freddy: Hey Charlie.
Freddy walked to his station.
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DeNiro
Mr daytona walks into freddy's station- freddy if u r late again u r fired from this plant for good
Freddy-well my daytona i had some car toubles i cant help that
Mr Daytona-dont get smart with me Kruger, ur pushin it
Fredd- sorry sir wont happin again "says it in a revengful voice
night time getttin dark freddy on his way home sees lil girl again
Freddy-hey hun, wow u r very pretty whats ur name
lil girl- my name is, "pause" umm sorry mister i cant talk to strangers
Freddy- well my name is freddy,, soo so techinliy i am not a stranger ne more
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ElmStreetFan01
Girl: Name's Megan, Megan Daytona.
Freddy: Hop on in.
Freddy pulled off.
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DeNiro
freddy; u r a very pretty young ladie arnet u
megan; giggels and smiles at freddy
megane what do u do for work
freddy; i work for a very mean man
megan;well my daddy is a very important person at the power plant;freddy; is he now
megan;but he talks horrible about his workers he isnt very nice when it comes to them
freddy; no, no he isnt "evil smile"
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ElmStreetFan01
Freddy drives Megan to the boiler Plant next to the Power Plant.
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DeNiro
car stops by boiler plant almost dark now sunsettin in the distance a very cold day for the summer but very hot in the boiler room,
megan why r we here
freddy this is where i take all lil pretty girls
megan ummm sorry mister i have to go home or my daddy will be mad
freddy o he will be mad just not at u, raises hand freddy's glove apperas on his hand swings down splash of blood on the wall
next day at the power plant asdd on
ElmStreetFan01
Freddy walks then sees Mr. Daytona staring at a body in a body bag.
Mr. Daytona: I'm going to find the killer.
Freddy walks over to Daytona.
Freddy: What happen?
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DeNiro
mr daytona still lookin at the boudy bag tunrs away for a moment gives freddy a very evil eye. go to work this doesnt concerns u does it kurger.
freddy walks away laughs under his beath lightly
next day freddy is watchin over mr daytona's wife shoppin at the supermarket
freddy walks up to her looks at her the women has eyes bloddshot from sobbing all night
freddy glansces at her and she glances back
freddy- arnet u mrs daytona the wife of the girl that was killed
mrs daytona yes yes i am
freddy- and how r u recoving about the news about ur husban
mrs daytona-what news
freddy- o u will find out soon enough
freddy walks away wavin a wave without looking back at mrs daytona
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ElmStreetFan01
Mrs. Daytona walked around the corner then found her husband hung and clawed.
Mrs. Daytona: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Freddy climbed into his Corvette then pulled off.
Freddy sees a little bblack girl.
Freddy: Hey there.
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DeNiro
hey u come her i want to show u sumthing i made it is shinny
lil black girll no i cant talk to strangers in a loud voice
lil girl runs away runs to her house right down the street tells her dad the dad comes out
dad- yells at freddy hey u com here i want to kick ur ass
freddy gets out of his car glove exposed
lil girl runs in the house freddy approachs man takes a swing at his neck
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ragesRemorse
hey can i add on
DeNiro
his neck opens up wide enough were u can see threw it
then the man with the neck turns towards the door to look at his lil girl one last time as he turns the lil girls face gets sadder and more frighten by inch when he finnly is raviled to the lil girl she screams a god awful scream as her dad falls in the screen door and falls threw infront of her feet
ElmStreetFan01
Freddy shoves his blade intoher stomach then lifts her.
Little Girl: You ****er.
Freddy: **** you *****.
Freddy grabs her by the neck then cuts her head off
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DeNiro
this is who ur reall daddy is refferin to his glove has the lil girl is about to die
freddy at home by himself one light over his head lookin down and his glove on his hand
says to himself in a very pealse and almost laughin voice
now this,, this is power and he moves the blades against tthe light causeing the light to shudder on the walls
freddy heres somthing out side it is two cops walkin up to his front door add on
ElmStreetFan01
Freddy: What do you want?
DeNiro
cops we have reported by wintnesses that u were involed in two murders of a a one mike ferrtil and his daughter lizzy ferrtil u will have to come with us now to be intergated cops start to read him his rights then freddy turns slithgy and one of the cops sees the glove on his hand
ElmStreetFan01
Cop #2: What's that from.
Freddy: Halloween costume.
DeNiro
cop one looks pretty real can i see it closer
freddy sure u can
freddy brings glove up to his face then rams it into the cops eyes looks over at the other cop and ripps the first cops head open while taking a swing at the other cop
freddy thinking to homself what to do with the bodies add on
ElmStreetFan01
Freddy Throws them in a Boiler.
Another cop whiped him over the head.
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DeNiro
then u hear over the cops raido that the two cops r mising freddy panics and he heres a big mob comin to his house cause sumone saw what happend
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ElmStreetFan01
The mob burned down the house.
Freddy ran to the graveyard.
DeNiro
freddy looks down to the ground praying but not praying to god to give him power freddy then meets his dream masters/sprits that control dreams add on
ElmStreetFan01
Voice: You got the power.
DeNiro
the mob then comes over to freddy gets him and throws him into the boiler room as it burns downs freddy then turns into the burnt dead killer but soon will come back to get his revenge add on
ElmStreetFan01
Shows previous scenes from A Nightmare On Elm Street to Freddy's Dead.
Springwood, Ohio 2003 a month after Freddy Vs. Jason.
DeNiro
people think they r safe now that the two have batteled and r still shocked that two monsters like that actulyly exitseted moves location to hell u see freddy workin across from jason and pinhead up on the podeum type cliff lookin down at everyone freddy starts to **** with jason jason comes up to him hits him with a shovel in the back freddy knocked on his ass
pinhead-moves his hand the shovel flies out of jasons hands and jason looks up at pinhead pinhead then moves his hand again and both freddy and jason r thrown into a wall
pinhead says in his evil voice no one will **** in my house freddy jason decide to team up to get out of hell against pinhead add on
ElmStreetFan01
They get out.
A kid walking to his girlfriend's house.
Rowan: Maggie?
DeNiro
they get out hahaha that was quick but ok
maggie appers from the bushes
rowan hey what r u doing here i was going to go to ur housr right now
maggie i though i would meet u here giggels
rowan well ok then what do u want to do
maggie come with me
zoom to maggies house maggies is in her room waiting for rowan so who can the other maggie be add on
ElmStreetFan01
Maggie turns into Krueger.
Freddy: My there buddy.
Rowan gets in a fighting stance Kenpo Karate style.
Rowan winds up in a Tournament against Freddy.
Rowan: Eat this.
Freddy flew then he hit a tree.
Rowan ran up to Maggie's room.
Carry On
DeNiro
maggie and rowan r in their room and u can hear a laugh "my laugh cause that was funny"
they look around hmmnothing then he tells the story about freddy they both go down stairs and as they r running down them freddy comes out of no where and is standing at the end of the stairs freddy looks up at rowan that was some sneaky shit there boy how bout we do sum real fighting freddy style as he flings his glove up
ElmStreetFan01
Rowan did a flying sidekick then Freddy went flying.
Rowan: Welcome to m nightmare *****
DeNiro
freddy completely confused that rowan can kick his ass transforms into a giant freddy and picks him u and says supper time but then maggie
ElmStreetFan01
Maggie tripped him then Rowan flipped on to his feet.
They both flipped out of a window
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DeNiro
both run to one of there friends house to hide from freddy then rowan gets ready to fight he is putting on all of his shit to duel and elm street what is ur sn jw and then freddy comes and rowan turns around and says ready ***** add on
ElmStreetFan01
Freddy: Karate ****er.
Rowan punched Freddy in the mouth then tripped kicked him.
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DeNiro
hey elm jw whats ur sn i asked that in the last post u prolly didnt get it
but freddy gets up finnly gets a lick off of rowan and opens his right arm with his glove blood everywhere add onn
ragesRemorse
Rowan: with blood pulsating furiously out of his wounded arm, realizes he wont be much of a match for krueger much longer and screams for maggie to run, and again defies odds to engage in battle with krueger ounce more, so maggie can get to some kind of safety
Maggie: bewildered in confusion she acts on instict and runs, until emotion kicks in. No more than several steps out of the house maggie starts back to rowan and krueger, on her way she picks up a kitchen knife on the conter. She comes to where Krueger has a wounded Rowan at the bottom of the stairs, and with his glove raised high ready to give the fatal blow Maggie plunges twords kruger and impales the kitchen knife in krugers back, she falls on the ground.
Krueger: turns away from Rowan, giving him a new lease on life, or atleast a few seconds more. Krueger turns his attention twords Maggie "patience child there is plenty of pain to go around" . Turns back to Rowan, who has regained himself
Rowan: mustering what strength he has. He surprises freddy with an outside crescent kick to kruegers arm and knocks his glove off his hand and several feet away..............ADD ON
ElmStreetFan01
Rowan: Welcome to my nightmare.
Rowan punches Freddy in the face ten times then Roundhouse Kicks him over the railing.
Maggie ran over to him.
Maggie: You're bleeding.
Maggie ripped out off a piece of her shirt then tied it to Rowan's arm.
Try ran to the police station.
ragesRemorse
running twords the police station in the darkness of the night
Maggie: how is it possible krueger is outside of the dreamworld again?
Rowan: I dont know, but it seems we can hurt him and thats all that matters. We have to find a car though ,krueger could be right behind us and im losing blood fast.
Maggie: is it possible that were dreaming?
Rowan: no if we were we'd be dead by now;
As Rowan walks a bit ahead of maggie he turns to await her to catch up and sees that krueger is standing behind her with his razor claws at her throat (Krueger) " you want a nightmare i'll give you nightmares boy, forget the boogey man YOU GOT FREDDY to worry about" with that krueger slides his claws across maggies neck slpashing warm blood across rowans face, Using his free hand freddy puts his fingers into the slit across maggies neck and tears the fleash from your skull revealing bloddy tissue and muscle. He drops her lifeless body to the ground and holds her face up (Krueger) "this is what you call a face to die for"
Rowan awakes at the police station with loud arguing going on with maggie and the cops. He realizes then he was only dreaming, and remembers after they made it to the police station he sat down because he was getting light headed and was feeling week from loss of blood...ADD ON
ElmStreetFan01
Rowan: Die ****job.
Rowan blast fifteen bullets into Freddy.
Nancy Thompson walked.
Nancy: Rowan!!!!!
Rowan: Mom!!!!
DeNiro
damn i posted a long ass thing after rages response and now i erased it and elm u really got me confused umm freddy gets up add on lol
ElmStreetFan01
Rowan: Mom help me.
Nancy: Why?
Rowan: Krieger's here.
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DeNiro
kruger comes out of nowhere kills mother maggie in shcok runs away once again add on
ElmStreetFan01
Nancy pult a shot gun out of her jacket then balst Freddy.
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Captain REX
*Runs in screaming*
ELMSTREETFAN!!! Do you remember where THIS thread is suppose to go, you ditz?
ElmStreetFan01
Ditz? Ok ****er no one calls me Dirz *****.
Captain REX
Yeah, and no one calls me a ****er.
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