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Greetings, this is my Matrix story that i wrote one night, please feel free to critique it or post a comment, or post your own story. Enjoy:
"hey, you're not suppose to be in here!" yelled a security guard to a mysterious figure. "How'd you get past the front desk?"
"Like this!" the figure replied as she drew two Night Hawk pistols out. She sent three bullets into the guards stomach. He flopped over dead as the figure reloaded her two pistols. Suddenly her phone rang.
"Yea?"
"Niboe, we got a problem"
What is it sparks?" the figured replied.
"they know you here, they've got the whole building sorrounded, and they called in SWAT, you've gotta get the file and go!" expained Sparks.
"Got it, whats the plan?" Niobe asked as she looked outside a nearby window and saw cop cars and SWAT trucks parked outside. "shit" she said under her beath.
"Look to your right, there should be a door, go through it, and head up the staircase to the ninth floor."
"okay." replied Niboe as she followed sparks orders and hurried out the door.
"I'll inform you of any further changes, oh and Niobe?" sparks asked
"Yea?"
"Watch you back."
At this Niboe turned around just in time to see a guard that had crept up behind her. She lept at the guard and kicked him hard in the jaw. The guard went hurling towards a wall. He hit the wall and fell to the carpeted floor unconscious.
Niobe started the climb up the to the nineth floor. When she reached the sixth floor, she started being fired upon. Three SWAT members stood on the stairs inbetween the second and third floor. Niobe quicly hurried up the remaining stairs.
"We got her. she inbetween the 7th and 8th floor at staircase D. shes headed for the ninth floor,we need to ambush her!" yelled one of the SWAT members into his security walkie-talkie.
Niboe's phone rang. "Yea?"
"We got more problems!"
thats it so far, i gotta go do some stuff, ill write some more when i get back, i hope you like it so far.
"hey, you're not suppose to be in here!" yelled a security guard to a mysterious figure. "How'd you get past the front desk?"
"Like this!" the figure replied as she drew two Night Hawk pistols out. She sent three bullets into the guards stomach. He flopped over dead as the figure reloaded her two pistols. Suddenly her phone rang.
"Yea?"
"Niboe, we got a problem"
What is it sparks?" the figured replied.
"they know you here, they've got the whole building sorrounded, and they called in SWAT, you've gotta get the file and go!" expained Sparks.
"Got it, whats the plan?" Niobe asked as she looked outside a nearby window and saw cop cars and SWAT trucks parked outside. "shit" she said under her beath.
"Look to your right, there should be a door, go through it, and head up the staircase to the ninth floor."
"okay." replied Niboe as she followed sparks orders and hurried out the door.
"I'll inform you of any further changes, oh and Niobe?" sparks asked
"Yea?"
"Watch you back."
At this Niboe turned around just in time to see a guard that had crept up behind her. She lept at the guard and kicked him hard in the jaw. The guard went hurling towards a wall. He hit the wall and fell to the carpeted floor unconscious.
Niobe started the climb up the to the nineth floor. When she reached the sixth floor, she started being fired upon. Three SWAT members stood on the stairs inbetween the second and third floor. Niobe quicly hurried up the remaining stairs.
"We got her. she inbetween the 7th and 8th floor at staircase D. shes headed for the ninth floor,we need to ambush her!" yelled one of the SWAT members into his security walkie-talkie.
Niboe's phone rang. "Yea?"
"We got more problems!"
thats it so far, i gotta go do some stuff, ill write some more when i get back, i hope you like it so far.