Baylin
Well I've finally plucked up the courage to start this. It's my first ever effort at writing and it's an idea I've had rattling around in my head for years now but have always felt... as if no one would be interested.
I'll write a few paragraphs at a time as and when I get chance. Feel free to comment or not as you see fit.
Chapter 1 - The Awakening
"Urgh!" groaned Telamin as he finished his first coffee of the morning. It was early, far earlier than he would normally have to get up but then he'd not slept properly again. Every night for the last 3 weeks now he'd woken up after being assaulted by strange, bizarre dreams that left him feeling awfull, the kind of awfull you'd feel if you'd been rolled down a hill in a barrel. "I can't do it, I can't take another night of this!" He mutters to himself as he gets up from the table.
"What? Mor a them dreams then?" came a rustic voice from behind Telamin "I towld you, ya ought ta go see that Mirim. I knows what folks say 'bout 'er but she knows things!" It was Bullar the cooks assistant and long time friend of Telamin "She'll be able to fix your sleep I reckon."
Tela turned to look at his friend "I know but when do I get time to see her? What with seeing to the Barons stables an all." Telamin sighed and sat down again "It's no use, I work all day and then I'm too tired when my chores are done."
Bullar came over and sat down next to him "I tell you what. This affernoon I got go pick up some bits for cook, I'll call in see if she'll come an see ya 'ere."
"I dont know, the Baron would be pretty upset if he found out" Tela replied.
"Yeah well if she dont mind comin through the woods I'll let er in from cooks garden."
"Ok then, see if she'll come" Telamin replied tiredly. He got up again and put his hand on Bullars shoulder "Thanks Bull I appreciate it!" With that Tela headed out the door towards the stables.
I'll write a few paragraphs at a time as and when I get chance. Feel free to comment or not as you see fit.
Chapter 1 - The Awakening
"Urgh!" groaned Telamin as he finished his first coffee of the morning. It was early, far earlier than he would normally have to get up but then he'd not slept properly again. Every night for the last 3 weeks now he'd woken up after being assaulted by strange, bizarre dreams that left him feeling awfull, the kind of awfull you'd feel if you'd been rolled down a hill in a barrel. "I can't do it, I can't take another night of this!" He mutters to himself as he gets up from the table.
"What? Mor a them dreams then?" came a rustic voice from behind Telamin "I towld you, ya ought ta go see that Mirim. I knows what folks say 'bout 'er but she knows things!" It was Bullar the cooks assistant and long time friend of Telamin "She'll be able to fix your sleep I reckon."
Tela turned to look at his friend "I know but when do I get time to see her? What with seeing to the Barons stables an all." Telamin sighed and sat down again "It's no use, I work all day and then I'm too tired when my chores are done."
Bullar came over and sat down next to him "I tell you what. This affernoon I got go pick up some bits for cook, I'll call in see if she'll come an see ya 'ere."
"I dont know, the Baron would be pretty upset if he found out" Tela replied.
"Yeah well if she dont mind comin through the woods I'll let er in from cooks garden."
"Ok then, see if she'll come" Telamin replied tiredly. He got up again and put his hand on Bullars shoulder "Thanks Bull I appreciate it!" With that Tela headed out the door towards the stables.