The Marvels

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Punker69
Introduction:On Jan 1,1990 five kids where born across the town of Lodi.They all where born with superpowers.They all where friends and they became aware of each others abilites at 10 years old.Now there 13 and they fight villians for a living.The only people that know about there abilities are there parents.Max can have lazers coming from his fingertips.Eric can teleport.Donna can morph.Ross has super powerful hands.And Amy can freeze time.They think there mutants and they want to go to this special school for mutants they`ve been hearing about.But there parents dont want to send them away.So for now they fight crime and call themselves The Marvles.

Punker69
Post your thoughts on how good this part of the story is and if I should write more.

hotsauce6548
i think it sounds cool... but i dont get Ross's powers. super-powerful hands???

Punker69
YUP what dont you get?

hotsauce6548
well... wut do super-powerful hands do? is like super strength or sumthin?

Punker69
yup.

Captain REX
Is this going to be a story? If not, I'll lock it.

Punker69
What do you mean?

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