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here are sum short poems.......very..short poems.....



As time will pass, so will the years of my life, slowly melting away to a loveless death.....


Time: an enemy of all, most painful to the weak at heart, these are the souls of solitude.....


Her eyes gleam with sadness, as tears begin to fall, she stands alone, as if she is a rose surrounded by thorns. Her sadness will immerse her already broken heart.....

Her eyes rimmed with darkness, her heart cursed with pain, a slight whisper can be heard, for the soul that dared to leave her nightmare, to cross her path and enter the ominous lands.....


( i got heaps more....so if they are wanted to be seen.,den i can post them......)

are they poems? or proverbs? dun matter...i cant write symbollically at all

um..kinda poems, but dey too short to b poems, so mebbe quotes........

aww......i'm sure u cood..........

Know your pain. Know it, as this is your life. A forever pain of deceit,
(sp?) of lies. Greed, it surrounds you, much as the evil in this world that has corrupted your soul.


Stand alone. You are alone. A thorn amongst a bed of roses. You are forever seeking relief, a relief to bring you to your desired happiness. Yet you are holding on to a false hope.


Sorrow is your world, forget hope, forget dreams, for you are lost.

good quotes in that lasst post vera! you started a new poems thread, cause the other one that i subsribed to didn't pop up as newly posted.

tankies Boppy.........

ohhhh.......how come?

cause you started a new poems thread. how come?

oh, actually, it was a suggestion from you........u sed to start another thread for poems.......

i did? when and else did i say about that?

um, u sed it a while back, yet i do remmeber dat it was your suggestion, although i do not remember the specific details....

oh well...you didn't have to, but too late!

.....true true....

i'll try to update my outsiders fic tonight...

cool.......

damnit...bop, youre reminding me that i oughta update my story as well. but im too damn lazy and out of ideas...god help me.

.....i'm lazy too..........

heres sum more poem tingys......
if ya wan hear em dat is..ah well......

Inside your poisoned heart,
their dwells a demon,
forever haunting your spirit,
forever staining your heart with shadow.


These tears we cry, of falling rain,
from all the lies you told us, the hurt, the blame.


A blind man shall see more than the greedy,
for they only know of their own fortune,
not the perils of others.

Beauty: a forever desire, yet many would not,
or do not see its truth, for beauty although wondrous
and desirable, is not shown under the light of truth.

Gollumm's song, Two Towers...

.....i wondered if anyoine wood pik up on dat....
altho tha rest r my own.....

heres another.......longer dis time.....


Of what you will never know,
of what you will never see,
is the darkness of a girl,
hidden within.
All the demons she must face,
all the sorrow she must endure.
She wuill, in time, wilt, as do
the crimson roses, for she is weak,
as weak as the flower, covered by
the depths of Winter.
But as her days will pass,
so she shall succumb to neverending
grief.
Yet a hope remains, for hope is all we have in this perilous world.

If i can put in my two cents about lovely poems...

"they dont wear pants
on the other side of France."

....

which story is that spear?

vera: great new poems! some of those would go great with my new fics!

heres two more .......


From the fires that have burned your very soul,
from the poisoned tears you have forever cried,
here you shall stand, bound to your grief.
Seeking only your deepest desire.
So you shall seal yourself away from this cruel world,
as to keep from a far greater darkness.


For eternity,
you shall bear a mask,
so as to hide the shadows that have cursed your mortal beauty.
You shall never see the true peoples of this world, nor they see you.

is me starcraft one...and i finally updated it!

vera...your poems are so depressing. im all sad now.

I'm not much of a poet but I got one it's called "I know":

I know this road
I go down it and
They whisper as I pass
I can't hear what they're saying
But I know their words
Hard, like steel
And cold, like ice.
I see a mirror on the ground
I look into it and laugh
I know myself.

SH>>>>>.....*nods yes* yes, as they are related to me.......
aww.....*cuddles*.....


Darth>>>>*cheers* ..dat was a good one!....good job

um, 2 more poems.......

So as to escape your harsh reality, you shall linger within your dreams, for they comfort you in bad times, and protect you from truth. Yet your eyes, so many lies they have told you, for all you know is dark. You are forever blind.


Your sadness, such a burden to bear.
Yet you shall wonder your reality,
as to search for your freedom.
The wise shall do well not to hinder you,
for you have become a dangerous soul,
to oppose the ones who shall stand by you,
watching as they weep.

thanks

your poems are great but they're a little... dark...

no prob......

dey meant to be lyk dat, dey reflect on my own feelings, if i were happy, den de poems wood be 'happy' too sorta thing......

I've got that song stuck in my head...

I like Pippin's song...

Home is behind, the world ahead
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadow, to the edge of night
Until the stars are all alight
Mist and Shadow, cloud and shade
Hope shall fail, all shall fade

Billy Boyd has a good singing voice

......yer he does......so does Eowyn she sang in de extended version of de 2 towers, for de funeral of her cousin, Theodrid....
Rex>>>>>catchy song..

all ur poems are so...evil.

Another one...

I will leave when the time comes
Without saying a word
Ready for what the world gives me
But you,
You don't care.
When the sky crashes down around us
When the earth splits in two
When the end of all things will come
There you will sit, up in your perch on the cliff
Away from it all,
Locked up in your reckless indifference.

*claps* very nice poem Darth...

...why cant i write poems at all?

...dont say dat baby.....
i'm sure u cood.....u just av to put ur heart into it...........



um..heres another one........


Forever crowded, yet never seen,
so this soul shall wander in solitude,
forever plagued with sorrow,
resisting an ultimate temptation
to enter the ominous......

alright here goes nothing...

It's the feelings within that no one knows
Sometimes you'll wish it would come to a close
But then, at the end, you'll waiver and end
Since you realize that you have more life to spend


Its about suicide, btw

SH dat was fantastic ........good job!......

Darth>>>>>tanks...

.....yer, i cood tell........so was my poem posted above too......about entering the ominous....because death is suspicious..you dont know what will become of you once you do die.....or, if you take death into you own hands and find it youself....

SH----> very good.. depressing topic though...

*nods yes* it is...although..i tend to lyk topics lyk dat..i dunno why....
they jus seem more interestin, rather than sh*t bout ponies..well....ok not ponies..but u know what i mean, happy stuff......it jus seems false to write bout happy stuff, coz the world aint lyk dat, the people aint either.....

here's another one... Literally it's about a tsunami but more figuratively about anger

Slowly it rumbles in towards land
Set off by a violent earthquake
Moving two hundred miles an hour
Leaving death and destruction in its wake.
The water pulls back lazily from the shore
Further than it ever does
Exposing fish
And all manner of other things
And then it hits
A wall of terror ninety feet high
Crushing all in its path
Leaving nothing standing

ooh, nice imagery...to the both of you: i wwas kinda feelin suicidal and thats what was comin to my mind. thats what happens i gess

*claps* very nice

......*hugs*
i'm sorry you've had to feel like that.....
i went thru it too.......i'm kinda in the middle of it now.......

Never thought about suicide... Guess that's a good thing...

*nods yes* 3 ppl in my immediate family have had depression.....one was a very serious case.....so i dont know where that will lead me to.....

well the suicide thread in the otf reminded me of a few things...

i looked thru dat a little...

I have a second cousin or something who tried to hang herself 3 times... not good...

.....is she better now.....?

i hope so...

I saw her at a party about a month ago... Hard to tell if she's gotten over the depression thing or not...

ugh...depression, one of the elements of the earth

*nods yes* such a common thing...

thats a song, in't it?

*cheers* nah man...dat was sik as!.....

SH---> yep
V---> thanks

thought so. pearl jam? creed? neither of them?

Darth>>>>>>awww......no prob.....

SH... no idea... don't think it's creed though the guy's voice doesn't sound quite right

well i always get those two bands mixed up

um heres 2 more poems....

So dark was the blood which once stained your skin,
so cold were the tears you once cried.
Now a new day has dawned,
& you shall now look to a hope,
your only relief from this fallen life you lead.


You see a person,
you would wonder of their name,
their hopes,
their fears.
So as you stare into their lifeless eyes,
your gaze is frozen,
frozen from a fear that this is another soul,
as lone as you.

*applauds*

....tanks Darth...

nice... these depressing poems are starting to crack me up though

.......um....really?......depressing poems crak u up?....
or mebbe cuz my poems r jus sh*t.....i dunno.....

Nothing against the skill of them, its just the vast amounts of them start to numb you to what's really being said...and I find it funny that I was that depressed so recently and im not kidding

oh i c......

well i was gun post one more...but now.............i'll proly send u into a laughing frenzy.....

maybe, im about this close *indicates with finger* from being a legal schitzo, so post away, maybe later i'll find myself in a more...depressed mood.

.........i dont want u to feel upset.....but i guess what u sed jus made me feel..stupid....lyk my poems were sh*thouse......
but......
heres de poem......


Now the rain of darkness has fallen upon you,
& your everwatchful eyes shall gaze enviously upon the joyous souls that have passed you by.
You are immortal, as dark knows no death, no peace, but only a lust for everlasting torture.
You are the shadow, walking down an endless path.

Bah...there not shit...i just change my mood frequently, so i cant tell ya how ill react to it...good poem by the way!

...tanks.....

Welcome!

..omg.......i'm de biggest wanka....i jus realized dat on ur sig, it had spearhead, on de dudes sword.......woh, talk bout being slooooooooooooow

ROFL!!!!!!!!

sorry.

.....for what?

For laughing at your expense.

........ah well........i dont care.....its cool......i was basically makin fun of myself neway....so...yeh......

um.....


waiting, waiting to bleed your pain,
a sorrowed heart, scarred with poisoned tears,
lying broken,
frail,
die this darkness

That's good...

I'm on a sugar high!!!!
I believe that I can fly!!!!!!!!

uh...yeah.

tanks.....

*pats ur bak.....*
no harm will come to u now.....

ooh! this i love! kind of describes how jake starts out in my x-evo fic, steve randle, and some other characters from my fics! right on with the darkness, vera! *thumbs up*

...tanks Boppy.....

Can I post a poem? Sorry if it sems dumb and silly, but I'm new with the whole poem thing...

My cat talks in her sleep
And I've tried counting sheep!
But every time
I start to fall
asleep
She makes a peep!

I'm almost asleep,
then she growls.
I'm almost asleep,
then she howls.
I'm almost asleep,
then she purrs.
I'm almost asleep,
then she grrrs!

And then there are her meows
They sound like dieing cows!
If her nose is clogged,
She'll snore!
I'll want to leave her
on somebody's door!

Because every time I start to fall asleep, she makes a noise.
And sometimes she'll chew on my fingers
As if they were some tasty chew toys!

Now I really must confess,
When I try to sleep with that cat on my chest
I do not sleep a wink!
And neither would you, I would think
I do not get no rest
With that terrible talking cat on my chest!

.......

..ey, dose were good poems.......

i thought it was short poems...nevertheless, those were good.

oops... I guess mine was kind long wasn't it?

hey, datz s'ok..........

um, i made another.....

The lone road you walk down,
The tears that have broke your skin,
The hope you have lost,
The suffer you leave,
Now all is silent,
The raging quiet.

is this quote about having a breakdown or suicide? good job again, vera! ^.^

suicide*nods yes*.....
thankz Boppy
i got another, shud i post it?

you shouldn't even have to ask! ^.^

.............k i'll post it......



A soul screaming, to be noticed, to be heard. Yet this world stands still, as they pass you, they do not see. So as you close your eyes, cry to dark, as darkness is your only friend, listening to your falling tears.
Not a sound, not a hope, not a freedom within your heart.

good one Boppy

*claps* dey were great Boppy!yes:

i can picture default or fuel singing that!

You keep saying the band default...I've never even heard of them. Whaat are they like?

they are a rock band. have you heard their songs "wasting my time" or "taking my life away"? if not, look them up at mtv.com!

I've heard default

Here's a really, really, really short one
It sort of goes with the spoon theme from the Matrix (the spoon doesn't bend... It is only yourself that bends...)

Time stands still
It is only ourselves that pass

i like the phrase "no one ever really dies", that would make a cool theme for a poem. now woudn't it vera? ^.^

.....

Darth>>>>dat was good .....

i got a short quote.....


Dreaming the light, to seek the freedom,
Waiting the time, to hold the tears.

ooh! good one!

Darkness falls on me
Follows me around and I don't know why
I sight down and look at this beautiful life of me

i kind of based that bit from the lyrics to stereophonics's "maybe tomorrow". love that song!!!

i meant sit not sight! ack!!! lol

lmao!!..hah!..

but Boppy, dat was great!.......good job....

.another...

Save me from my tears,
Rescue me from the sadness,
And from the pain of knowing darkness.

why do you always have to tear me down?
makes me feel so bad inside
at night, i can't sleep and feel empty
what do you have to say to that?

Why do you cry for me?
You need not waste your tears on this lone.
Leave me to the darkness, so it may consume my soul,
luring me deep within its perilous depths.

oh, maybe tomorrow
i'll find my way home

love that song!

lol.....
coolies.....

this is not for real
afriad to feel
i feel like i'm wasting my time
Wasting my time once again

Stain my lips, blood red,
Curse my heart to darkness,
Watch the sadness,
Cry the tears.
You are my evil.

You know you can edit posts, right?

no shit sherlock! but i can't anymore. not allowed. stupidly kept accidently clicking edit on other ppl's post when i meant to quote long time ago and now i'm not allowed. i really need to ask raz to fix that.

........chillax Boppy.......lol....

it really sux that i can't edit my posts!! i got to be careful on my grammar and shit. esp. with fanfiction, rpg, and more.

...ey, its cool......dat happened to me too a while abck....

it's not cool! i still need to pm raz!

lol.......no, when i say 'cool', i mean, 'its ok'......lol..my own language.....i'm special.....

no, i know. duh.

ooooooooooooh, k deeeeeeeennnn..soz, i tought u were being serious wit ur other post.....

anyways....got any new poems?

um, i posted other ones above..u never responded to dem....

hey vers, there's a small chance i'll catch ya later today, but in case i dont...hey there!

vera, i meant new ones since then!!!!

...!


hey Spearhead!.....

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......well yes i do mon ami!.....


here dey are:.....

Now I know your suffer. I can see it in your eyes.
Now I will hold you for eternity,
Never to let go.


Let the rain fall,
Let the sadness immerse me,
Let my tears be lost amongst the dark,
So none will see.


The dripping blood,
the distant cries of sorrow.
The forgotten face,
the lost memories,
the lone soul.

please read my new poem!

yet you do not bother with mine.........and you asked to see them.....

HEY I JUST READ YOUR NEW ONES! IT'S NOT LIKE I CAN ALWAYS GO AND READ YOUR'S! I DIDN'T FEEL LIKE SCROLLING BACK! I WAS GOING TO READ THEM LATER!!!!!

HOLY SH*T RELAX!!!!!..CR*P BOPPY.......
I DIDNT SAY THAT YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO READ MINE......BUT YOU ALWAYS ASK ME TO READ YOURS, AND YOU NEVER COMMENT ON MINE, NOT THESE ONES, AND NOT THE ONES BEFORE IT......

it's not like fanfiction, i can't always give a lengthy commentary. besides, i don't normally get to review poems.

sorry i was yelling, i was having a pissy week and that earlier comment just hit the wrong nerve. gomen.

no problem,...........geesh.......i feel like cr*p......*lies down*

i'm sorry, i've been going off like that on and off this week. so much damn paper work at school and lack of sleep. i can have such a bad temper sometimes. it just depends, it can be over something huge or nothing at all. savvy? i'm sorry vera. it's not you.

no, no, its ok Boppy, i apologise too..........

i'm just...*sighs*.i dunno...school is a b*tch, lets jus say dat......

let's just say it's a pain the ass week that we all can't wait for to end. you, me, and spearhead both.

.......that is agreed.....

why is this week so bad? what's the source? hm...

I have a couple of purposely stupid poems to lighten the mood in here a bit:

Mushroom pasties
They are so tasties
We eats them up hasties
And washes them downsies
With a gallon of daisies

Flapjacks, flapjacks
Flap 'em flat, Jack
I just got this knack
That I might like a snack
So flap 'em flat, Jack!

it's okay, vera and i made up. but that's funny, the poems!

..good poems boppy!..........

the new one?

Hey guys can you see my sig image

cos I can't