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There was a loud knock at the door, Elizabeth turned to see Wills head popped through the big door.

"Good morning."

"BAH! go away, sleep now." She through a pillow at him "actually i have to use the bathroom." she shuffled past will, blowing him a kiss on the way and sat on the nearest toilet. (her thoughts are in italics) I feel so guilty running away from home but i can't leave Will...not now at least beside i think he's having fun working on the pearl with jack. She then quickly changed into a dress, not nearly as fancy as the ones her father had gotten for her and went down to the pier where the black pearl was, when she got there she saw a suprise, it was a girl a brunette dressed in what seemed to be an attempt at looking fancy she was talking with Will. Elizabeth just stood there watching the two talk. But before she could intrude Jack came walking down the pier.

"Blimey! It's capitan Jack Sparrow!" she shireked. She seemed to forget about the manners she was trying to with hold and went running up the dock. Jack was surprised he was about to say hello to Elizabeth this seemed to be delaying that. The girl jumped on Jack and gave him a hug. When she got down Jack winced with confusing.
"Jessie?"

"Hmm...you remember me, you must not be drunk yet." she joked. Jack laughed and gave her a kiss on the cheek.

"Which ones your new ship? the one i've been hearing about?" She clasped her hands and looked around at the ships. Jack looked at her suspiciously

"Why? does your mother know you're here?" He asked. Elizabeth tapped him on the shoulder.
"am i missing something here?"
"Oh, this is my neice, Jessie." Elizabeth put out her hand but Jessie ignored it her eyes were swelling with tears.
"Mom...you haven't heard?" She said looking down.
"What? what's happened?"
"She's....dead...shipwreck, no survivors." Jessie looked up at her uncle And a few tears rolled down her cheek. Jack embraced her.
"Uncle Jack there's nothing else to do, Please help me."
"Anything, love." He said wow, "uncle jack" i'm sure "capitan uncle jack" would work better. Wait what?! she never calls me uncle Jack...this must mean something.
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now someone add on.

sorry, we already have a sequel going on and having two on here might make it confusing. when we are finished, post this up there and we will start a new one.

awww shuckers i'm having fun

please lemme keep it?????? *attempts at a sad puppy dog face*

i like this one just keep it

here, try our sequel, see if you like it. if you really dont like it and you cant think of anyting to post(ur good on this thing, just kinda confused about the first part), we can try and keep this thing going, too, K?

k i'll try yours. What's confusing about the first part?

i dont know. it's just like, where is she? what happened? i thought she was up on some tower kissing orlando bloom? is she married? why did she run away?

ah i see. makes sense. give us a tick

hey, use some of these idea's and maybe post them on the other sequel going on. i'll go and post really quick so it'l be at the top of the list.

Elizabeth didn't like the idea of Jessie being on board there was something fishy about the way she was talking to Will.

Elizabeth went after her but Jack stopped her.
"I understand darling. I'll talk to her, let her be for awhile she's not in the best condition for something like this."
"NOBODY LISTENS TO ME ANYMORE!" Elizabeth stormed outside and ran out on the beach she started pacing on the sand and muttering to herself.
"I have to go back home...no! i can't...dad would be horrified with me running away with a pirate, a blacksmith was bad enough, this might kill him." Elizabeth threw her arms up in frustration

"AHH! WHAT NOW?!" she sat on the sand and felt it in her finger tips she closed her eyes. She remember how it felt when she was stuck on the island before with Jack she laughed at how much she despised him then. Wait...why was she thinking about this now? Is this the reason why she's on the pearl? Jack? she looked back on the pearl and saw his cabin light on her mind was wandering as to where he was and what he was doing.
"Snap out of it Liz, stick with logic." She sighed and fell onto her back. There was Jack hoovering above her. She gasped and sat up.

"Sorry Elizabeth." He looked at her and was puzzled by her smile. She quickly changed it into a frown
"How dare you spy!"
"I was trying to tell you-"
"And it's Ms. Swann FOR THE LAST BLOODY TIME!"
"Ms. Turner." he corrected, she looked away.
"....Not ms.turner?"he asked
she laughed "and you wonder why i ran away..."

hmmm post that one too

okay' you do that!

.

did that one cover up why she left?

Jack was confused.
"Your not married?" he asked.
"You know," Elizabeth said," you arn't making this any easier."
"Wow, luv. I didn't know." He said sympitheticly.
"yeah, you didn't. and if i'm going to be stuck here with you, i dont want to hear anything about it. i'm mad at Will, your niece is hovering over every word he says like she's his best chum and i'm stuck here without anything. I even ran away from home so there is no way i can go home. Your niece is going threw some tough times,i'm sure, but what about me? Why is will going after her and ignoring me?" She was standing up now, yelling at the ship, not jack.
"Well then..." Jack said," we best be getting on the ship."

wow you are good top of the line!!!!!!! i shall assit your sequel

Thank you. yours isn't bad eather.

Maybe we can keep this. I'll post some every once in a while. I guess that 2 sequels are good so we'll have a better chance of haveing one be so good we can send it to the producer.

ya!! i added something to yours, you appeared to be stuck

by the way i have the producers adress

yeah, i posted after you did. Good part, you did.

yeah, is it the one on the dvd cd? thats the one i have. what's yours?

i actually sent him a letter asking to be an extra.lol

The walk back to the ship was strange that night. Elizabeth was enjoying Jack's company. Even his horrible smell was okay. He never stopped smiling and she never stopped blushing. When they got back on the ship Jessie was talking to Will, obviously Jack hadn't spoken to Jessie yet. Elizabeth glared at him he shrugged.
"oh, you're back what were you two doing out there? " Jessie joked. Elizabeth went straight over to will, sat on his lap and kissed him. She tossed her hair back triumphantly and looked at Jessie.
"Nothing." she smiled. Jessie looked away. She opened her mouth to say something but Jack took her by the arm and lead her into the capitian's cavern.
"Jess, if your going to stay here you have got to get it through your head that Will is taken."
"First of all jack, drop the arm" Jack obeyed. "Second of all it is very stifly through my head, thanks. thirdly because you are the captian of this ship doesn't make you my bleeding dad. Finally and most importantly go away!" she pushed him through the door.
"Jessie." he started.
"Goodbye Jack." She slammed the door and locked it.
"What happened to uncle jack? I don't understand teenagers...."

hahaha thats a good idea i should try it. I have the one off the script i bought. is yours in Santa Monica?

oh god did you read that german sequel one eyed monster thing? it was SO stupid hhahahahahahahahahaha

um, no.
OH NO!
i sent it to the wrong person. whats his real address?

yeah, really! i think that orlando was just trying to get them away so he made up some story.

hahaha ya. I have 1631 10th street santa monica. it's his company maybe you have his personal or something

i'll be back in 45 minutes okay???

once jessie left, Elizabeth got off of his lap and looked him straight in the eye.
"What is wrong, will? Last i checked, I was yours. What's all this with Jessie?"
"Elizabeth, settle down! me and jessie were just talking, thats all. Our mom's have both died on boat accidents, you know. I still love you."
"Well, your not showing it very well, Will. You havent kissed me in ages!"
Elizabeth was shouting again.
"What's happening in here?" Jessie came in.
Elizabeth about burst.
"None of your busness! Just leave me and my feonce' alone, will you?"

okay

"Elizabeth, stop shouting. Jessie, me and Elizabeth are just having a little argument."Will said.
"Look at you! your defending her! I give up." Elizabeth pushed passed jessie and out the door.
Will put his head down in his hands.
"She doesn't understand, will. Thats all." Jessie said.
Will looked up.
"Yeah, i guess..." He said.
"Don't worry, Will. Besides, it's not like she can understand how you feel about your mother. I do. She will probebly never understand, Will. And the way she was yelling at you? That was uncalled for."
Will nodded.
"She doesn't give you much privacy, does she. She can go galavanting after Jack but you with me? She about made the ship turn over! All i'm saying, Will," She sat down in Wills lap, "Is that maybe she doesn't love you anymore..."
"She does, too!" Will stood up, "She loves me and I love her and I'm not going to waist my time listening to you tell me otherwise!"
He ran out the door after Elizabeth, leaving Jessie on the floor.

That's really good! It adds some flare to the story. Now, if only Jessie was a little older, she could be played by... Kate Bosworth! *evil laugh*

Jessie sat on the floor. She put her head in her hands.
"UGH! what are you desperate or something? Afraid to loose someone else? wanting to regain your mom?" she asked herself she started to tear.
"You promised yourself this would never happen...you promised." Jack appeared.
"AH!!! NOT YOU AGAIN! WHAT DID YOU NOT GET THE MESSAGE?!?!" Jessie slammed the door without letting Jack say anything she didn't lock it though she just threw herself on the bed and started to cry. When she woke up in the morning her nose was stuffed from all the crying. She sensed something was wrong, she turned around and Jack was laying next to her. She was a little surprised but not mad. Jack was awake he sat up.
"Jess, i'm sorry i'll leave."
"Nah Jack, it's okay." She leaned against his chest and sighed.
"You remind me of her."
"mom?"
"I see it when you smile." He smiled.
"I don't know if I'll be doing that alot anymore..." she said lightly. That morning Jack, Will and Elizabeth were all eating breakfast. Jessie had changed into pants, a v-neck button down shirt and a navy general jacket. She didn't eat breakfast, instead she sat by the rail and looked out on the ocean. Jack and Elizabeth went to get supplies, Will went to get food leaving Jessie alone on the ship. Will came back early and puttered about for awhile until he came up and put his hand on her shoulder she took her hand and pulled it off.
"jessie i'm so sorry, please forgive me." Jessie immediatley grabbed onto a rope ladder and started climbing up to the crows nest she sat there for awhile watching will and the town eventually Jack and Elizabeth came back. Then something weird happened, Jessie had a calling to go to the ocean it was like she couldn't stop herself or something. She stood up and jumped off. Jack turned around.
"Oh no, not good."
"What?"
"She can't swim!" Jack said sounding worried. Elizabeth rolled her eyes
"I suppose she wants will to save her."
"I don't care what she wants, i'm saving her." Jack took off his gun and coat and jumped into the water. Deep under the water Jessie came across a stone, it had many pointy things sticking out of it, she reached towards it, she put her hand on it and the pointy things dug into her skin leaving an odd pattern, almost like a map.

Jack pulled Jessie out of the water and onto the deck. Will and Elizabeth were arguing. Jack looked at her bleeding hand. He hugged her.
"WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU!? YOUR MOTHER CAN'T SWIM AND YOU BLOODY WELL CAN'T!" he bandaged up her hand ignoring will and elizabeth's fighting. She stood up
"Elizabeth please lay off Will FOR ONCE!"
"Jessie come here!!" Jack yelled. Jessie ignored him.
"You have nothing to do with this Jessie!" Elizabeth yelled.
"You have no right to be doing this to him you're not even married! she taunted." Elizabeth looked at Jack.
"NAmes make no difference, Swann, Turner it could be bloody Sparrow for all i care i'll still always love Will."
"Ah yes a whore by any other name does smell just as cheap." There was a long silence Elizabeth's eyes were buldging. Jack was laughing under his breath and Will was blushing. FInally to break the silence elizabeth slapped Jessie.
"You deserved that one." Jack laughed. Jessie smiled, the slap had done nothing. Elizabeth turned and ran off the ship
"Elizabeth, wait" Will caught up to her
"What do you want, Will?" She asked, looking away from his face.
"Elizabeth, i'm sorry, all right. I'm sorry." Will said.
Elizabeth's anger melted and she gave Will a kiss.
Jack was watching from a distance.
"Uncle Jack," Jessie popped up behind him, "What are you doing?"
"Jessie, I'm...nothing, luv. go fetch me some rum, will you."
"Uncle Jack, where will we sleep tonight?" she asked, as innocently as possable.
"In the captain's quarters. Now, the rum-"
"All of us? in the same room?" She asked again, halo shining.
"Yes all of us, now the ru-" Jack cut him self off when he realized what he had just said.
and when he realized Jessie's plan.

(Elizabeth and Will scene and "halo" seen were donated by Orlando_lover45 LUV YA!! thanks alot!)

orlilover42: does that mean that Jessie is going to kill Elizabeth in her sleep?

When Will and Elizabeth returned Elizabeth pretended like the whole thing with Jessie hadn't happened. Jessie pretended like it didn't happen either. Jack however was very frazzled he was drinking his rum and muttering to himself. The night slowly dragged on until Will and Elizabeth said they were going to call it a night and Jessie agreed. Jack's hand started shaking.
"So you'll putter about then Jack?" jessie asked.
"actually i am a tad tired meself i'll squeeze in there mate." Jack went into the Cabins quaters. Will and Elizabeth were on a blanket on the floor, Jessie was beside Will. Jacks eyes buldged.
"So you'll be sleeping over there then?" Jessie inquired
"What? on that side?! of course not.....horrible feng shui. Ah but right in there between You and Will looks perfect."
"You can have a whole blanket to yourself, here take mine i could share with Will." Jack's hand started shaking more he had to rest it on his belt loop to make it stop.
"OR! You and I could share a blanket and will and elizabeth could have there own!"
"Well actu-"
"IT'S SETTLED THEN!" Jack took off his shirt, as did Will. Will and Elizabeth cuddled together. Jack turned around to Jessie who was very irritated and looking at the celing.
"I don't think so love."
"Don't think what?"
"Never mind." Half way through the night there was a loud bang it woke Jessie up. Her hand was having a funny tingling feeling. She looked at it and through the bandage it was glowing blue. Jessie took off the bandage, the markings had become a clear map. It had a picture of a burning palm tree that started glowing blue as the rest of the map faded then the W on the compass began to glow. Jessie flicked herself, but she wasn't dreaming. She just thought it was a late night hilusination she heard a bang and cautiously peered out the window, nothing. She was about to go back to sleep but she saw Will asleep. Elizabeth was further away from him and had her back turned to him. The blanket was down and was revealing his chest. She bent down and went to touch his shoulder, a drop of blood fell on his shoulder from her hand and then someone grabbed her and bound her arms and legs together. She let out a
"Hey!" but it was not enough to wake Will or Jack She had a hood over her head but she could hear some talking
"Capitian said it was a girl so which one?" a pirate whispered
"I dunno, take both." Jessie heard them bound Elizabeth and gag her she let out a little peep that was all. They were then put in a small row boat and taken to a large ship they could barley tell where they were. They finally took the hoods off to see they were at a table sitting across from a tall some what handsome man in fairly nice clothes.
"Ladies alow me to introduce myself, My name is Capitan kidd and this is my ship the dead sky. One of you possessess a key, in a way. This key leads us to the treasure of the lost abyss."
"The abyss?" Jessie asked.
"First ship to sail the Caribbean, full of gold, captian and crew killed by natives. But rather than spending the gold, the natives locked it up in a huge underwater cave of some sort. There is a map but it can only be read on the hand of a virgin." Jessie felt her hand with her thumb. She looked up and noticed that almost everyone was looking at her."
"What?! are you sudgesting that i'm the virgin?!?! Elizabeth could be a virgin for all you know."
"But they don't know...now give them what they want and let's go."
"Hey! i would have lost my virginity tonight if it weren't for these fools dropping in." Jessie yelled at Elizabeth. Elizabeth caught on and started jerking around in the ropes she was in.
"HE DOESN'T LOVE YOU AND HE NEVER WILL YOU CHEAP CHEATER!"
"CHEATER?" they kept yelling. Capitian Kidd rolled his eyes.
"LADIES! ladies, until you can decide what happened i'm afraid it's to the irons in the drakers for you."
"OH, great." Jessie said under her breath

no it means that Jessie wants to do a little more with Will than she should.

but Will wouldn't, he loves elizabeth

I know who will play Jessie!
her name is amber tamblyn. she's in the ring and she's also in Joan of Arcadia, my favorite show.

or actually, even though jessie is evil, Michelle kinda looks like Jack

interesting story ...... BAD jessie ... umm I don't know if it is just me but i think elizabeth is a little too snotty.. but I like it

yeah, it's pms

lol

umm i don't know but it sure seems like u r talking to yurself .. again

i kno

*it's these little voices*

bad voices bad bad ... ok back to the story ... i am not going to write anything .. cuz i have like a funny frame of mind now .. so i would like make things super random the whole time!!!

me, too! lets make a new sequel thread that's really funny and random and makes no sense and kinda present tence.

continue with this story. it's really good!!

(i'm at orlando_lover45's house) orlilover42: Ok, nobody write on this exept orlando_lover45 and MissesDepp?!. They are REALLY good and we don't want to mess it up for the third time!

haHIAIHA umm I don't think it is fair .. but it is a good IdeA

works for me i just wanna kno wut happens next

me to!!!

"Will, where's Jessie?" Jack asked.
Will opened his eyes.
"I dont know, where's elizabeth?" He looked around.
They searched below deck and above deck.
"Jack! Look what i found!" Will shouted acrossed the deck.
"What is it, mate?" Jack said.
"It's a ransom note. They have taken Elizabeth! We have to save her!" Will looked determined.
"AND Jessie," Jack added,"Who took them?"
Will looked back over the note.
"The Abyss. What is that, Jack?"
Jack gasped.
"The Abyss the first pirate ship ever sailed in the caribbean, mate."
"We have to go after it." Will said.

On the dead sky, Elizabeth and Jessie were facing opposite walls in the cell.

"Why can't you except the fact that Will is mine?" Elizabeth spat, suddenly.

"Because he isn't. You arn't married." Jessie spat back.

"But he is! He loves me and I love him!" Elizabeth's face was hot.

"Really, I couldn't tell with all the arguing and fighting going on." Jessie shot back at Elizabeth.

"Because of you! Before you came into the picture, we were so happy!" Elizabeth shouted.

"Before I came into the picture, Will had nobody to talk to about his mother. I understand, you dont!" Jessie was shouting, too.

"I dont? has anyone wondered what happened to my mother? she was the daughter of the first captain of the Abyss. Once married to my father and after they had me, people assumed that she commited piracy and hung her. I was five years old, Jessie, five! Do you know how hard it is to watch your mother hung when you are only five? Do you?" Elizabeth was on her feet, screaming.

Jessie was speechless.
So was Elizabeth.

Back on the Pearl, Jack was steering the ship.

"Jack, I'm wondering if Elizabeth still loves me anymore. She said some nasty things to me." Will came up behind him, leaning out of the side of the boat.
Jack chuckled.
"Will, I have been threw many relationships and if there is one thing I have learned it is this. Love only passes you by once. If your blinded by other distractions, you could miss it."
Will thought about this.
Will knew that Elizabeth still loved him, as he did her.

Back on the Dead Sky, Elizabeth was crying in one corner while Jessie was thinking in the other.

(jessie thinking)"i'm ruining this girls life. She has run away from her life to be with this boy and then I try to take him from her. It would leave her with nothing to hold on to, nothing to live for. The only thing she has is Will. I'm ruining this girls life taking him from her. I just cant do that."

"Elizabeth?" Jessie said aloud.

"What?!" Elizabeth's eyes were puffy and red from weeping.

"I-I'm sorry. Will is all you got and I can't take him away from you. So, I'm sorry. Truce?"

Jessie holds out a hand to Elizabeth.
She takes it.
"Truce."

"Now then" jessie said looking around. "How do we get out?"
"Will would know."
"Aye....that he would......unfortunatley we are neither a blacksmith nor a drunk so this might be difficult. Damn it's annoying how usless women are!" jessie said looking at the bars. Elizabeth laughed.
"That's the first time i've heard you laugh Elizabeth."
"It's Ms. Swann." elizabeth smiled, jessie smiled back.
"Maybe if you weren't so stuck up then-" Jessie didn't finish, she sat down because at that moment two pirates came down into the gallows.
"The daughter of Samantha Swann? NOT stuck up?! it's impossible." one said, they both laughed.
"Look her mom is dead she was hung, she's pissed, she's tired and she wants to see her fiance just back off."
"I know you!" one said "You're Sparrow's daughter."
"I'm CAPITAIN jack sparrow's NEICE!"
"You look just like him." Jessie looked away and grit her jaw. Both pirates laughed and went back on deck.
"You're very protective of him..." Elizabeth said.
"We both have something important on that boat Ms. Swann, it's worth fighting for." Just then Elizabeth looked at Jessie's hand, they were very scard up. Old wounds, tattoos they covered her fingers wrists and arms.
"A lot of adventures huh?"
"Ironically all with Jack, you can't go for a normal visit with Uncle Jack, your a fool if you think you will." Jessie's hand started glowing blue, it was still the burning palm tree and the W.
"Virgin's hand eh?" Jessie said lifting it up and looking at it.

can i write in it too or just u guys

Just then, the two men came back down.
"The captain wants you 'bove deck. Come on."
The men took Elizabeth and Jessie above into the open.
"Now, ladies. I need the map. Tell me where it is or i'll have you walk the plank." The captain said, with pointing hand twards the long board.
"We don't know." Jessie said again.
"Aye, that's what you said last time. You know where it is, your hand shows us. Tell me where it is!" The captain insisted.
"I-I know where it is." Elizabeth spoke up.
Jessie looked over at Elizabeth with a confused look on her face.
But then she understood.

"Jack, we're coming up to the Dead Sky." Will shouted over his shoulder.
"Good." Jack said simply.
"So, what's our plan?" Will asked.
"Our plan? I thought you were comeing up with a plan?" Jack said. He smiled, "I'm kidding! I have a plan mate. A bloody good plan."
"Well, what is it?"
"Our plan is to rescue Jessie and Elizabeth nomatter what." Jack said.
"THATS our plan?" Will was not impressed.
"So far, yes." Jack kept steering the boat closer to the Dead Sky.

hehe, i love this so far man you guys are great! keep it going its WIICKED!!!

take care

luv AS!!!
xxx

Thank you! Me and Orlilover42 thought up the whole part from Jessie's big fight with Elizabeth to the part where they have the truce last night at like, 2 o'clock. We snuck downstairs and posted it!

lol hehe kewlies, its great! keep it up i cant wait to read more... Post, Post, Post, Post... lol hehe

Yeah, and now I'm really tired!

HA! i want missesdepp?! to read it first before i post. besides, it keeps you on your toes!

Well, hurry! The suspense is killing me! lol.

i kno

lol

Will and Jack caught up to the Dead Sky.
"Now we fight?" Asked Will.
"Sure, why not?" Jack said back, grabbing his sword.

hehe. that's all i'm going to post. hehe.

Oh, gee, thanx.

welcome!

"Write something!"
"No!"
"Please write something?"

"i dunno it's been awhile jack."
"Oo...suck it up boy!" Meanwhile on deck Capitian kidd was asking Elizabeth where it was. Suddenly jessie realized she didn't have a plan she rolled her eyes.
"Uhh....errr...the map is uhh...."
"I didn't think so Ms. Swann..." Elizabeth bit her lip and looked at Jessie.
"It'd be the plank for you two."
"But...then you can't take the map."
"Aye, it'll be easier to take from a lifeless hand. Clap her in irons you yellow belly slackers!" The pirates jumped and put irons on Jessie's hand. She started to walk on the plank and looked down into the deep dark ocean.
"Kidd! she can't swim!" Elizabeth protested.
"Your point being?" Kidd laughed. The pirates bound her hands in ropes and held her back. Jessie sighed and debated all that could happen down there.
"STOP STALLING!" A pirate yelled. Something that jessie would suspect the least was about to happen a bullet fired and put a hole in Kidd's hat. Jack sparrow came out.
"sorry jessie, the saftey was NOT on."
"Who are you?"
"I'm her uncle." he gestured to Jessie two pirates broke out in laughter.
"I TOLD YOU SHE LOOKED JUST LIKE HIM!" Jessie rolled her eyes. Jack smiled and shot one of the pirates in the leg. Suddenly a fight broke out, Jessie just stood on the plank watching eventually Jack trotted out on to the plank, Will went over to Elizabeth and kissed her then went back to fighting, Elizabeth was fighting too. jessie felt a sting of jealousy that slowly faded knowing she was doing the right thing. Jack hugged her.
"Ya nice to see you too Uncle Jack...you can let go Jack...JACK WATCH OUT!" a pirate snuck up behind Jack and pushed them both over. Jack grabbed on to the plank Jessie was dangaling from Jack's hand.
"I'm not going to let go jess." jessie looked down.
"If you do...remember that i love you Jack....you're a dad to me." A weird feeling came over Jack's heart...was this love? He couldn't say anything back
"I love you too Jessie." Just then a pirate went flying off the boat. Will pulled Jack and Jessie up.
"So...you love me eh?" Jack asked Jessie who punched him in the stomach, joinkingly
"Don't flatter yourself Jack."
"...UNCLE jack."

Aww... how sweet!

Will was suddenly distracted by Captain Kidd comeing up behind him. But Will was a good swordsman. They faught back and forth. up the stairs, down the stairs, and around the wheel.
Will was fighting hard and didn't realize where he was.
inches away from the railing, he continued fighting.
and all it took was one good sweep from Captain.Kidd to have him lose his balence. he fell, fell into the dark merky waters. it was raining now.
Elizabeth rushed to the railing.
"Will!" but all she could see was the dim reflection of her face.
"You Bastard!" she screached at kidd.
"Elizabeth, let me handle this.
Jack had snuck up behind kidd and stabbed him in the back.
into the waters he, too, fell.
Jack took off his effects, handed them to elizabeth and dived into the waters to save will. Jessie and Elizabeth quickly retreted to the pearl.
Jack came bursting up, with a limp will in his arms.
once on deck, jack pumped out water from his lungs.
nothing happened.
"Will!" Elizabeth nealt next to him.
"He isn't dead, Jack, is he?" Jackie wispered to her uncle.
"I-I dont know." Jack was dumfounded.
"Will. I'm so sorry" she was sorry for everything. she was sorry for being so misunderstanding, so sorry for invading his space, so sorry she hadn't beleved him when he said he was sorry. So sorry.

Who's this Jackie? Is it someone I should know about!

Is ununderstanding a word?

oh, shut up casey.

okay, MissesDepp?! time for you to wrap this thing up!

lol hehe awww i LOVE Jack too hehe

this is sounded pretty kewl guys keep going..

Ooo! do some kind of kiss in the end!

yeh with mayb ME and JOHNNY *sigh... goes into dream world*

okay guys? ready for the ending ARE YOU READY?!?!

nothing, no breath at all. Elizabeth started to cry, Jack didn't know what to say, Jessie didn't know what to say. She wraped her arms around Jack and they hung their heads.
"What am i going to do without you?" she cried as she kissed his forehead.
"come on lass, back to the pearl."
"I love you." she said to will for the last time. Jack lead Jessie and Elizabeth off the ship and made their way back to the pearl. That night Jessie stayed with Elizabeth until she went to sleep. Then Jessie went back up to the crows nest and looked out on the ocean. She cried. She cried for Elizabeth, for her mom, for Jack and for Will. Meanwhile Jack was in his quaters. He was reading up on The Abyss. He took a sip of rum until he read something quite disturbing he swallowed cautiously eyes buldging her ran out on the deck and called for Jessie.
"JESSIE! JESSIE!!! JESS!" his calling broke her thoughts.
"Ya jack?"
"COME DOWN HERE NOW!" Jessie slid down a rope and was standing next to Jack.
"LET ME SEE YOUR HAND!" Jessie unwrapped the bandage again and showed it to Jack. The burning palm tree and the W started glowing again.
"JESSIE...."
"What? what is it? Jack what's wrong?"
"It says here that he who wears this mark is doomed to be a human sacrifice at the cave of the abyss."

What! What happened to Will?

Is that the end?! Change it! I demand that you change it!

If Will is dead, then you HAVE to change it! He can't die, it's imposible!

Thats great! Keep going!

you killed off Will? CHANGE IT! CHANGE IT RIGHT NOW! EDIT IT OR SOMETHING!

okay, here's MY ending;

Jessie wanted to help Elizabeth. Will was the only thing she had. He couldn't die. He just couldn't.
(now, think beginning of the first movie and see if anything's fimilure)
Elizabeth brushed will's wet hair out of his face.
Will's eyes shot open and he sat up.
"Will!" Elizabeth cried.
Will caughed up water and layed his head on the side of the boat.
She smiled and kissed him.
"He's alive, Jack!" Jessie clapped her hands.
"Wow! the boy made it." Jack was impressed. the fall from the boat to the water was a long drop.
"Will, I'm so sorry." Elizabeth looked at him, "I'm sorry for everything."
He smiled and kissed her, almost to say 'I forgive you.'
Will got up, brushed himself off, and hugged Elizabeth.

Now, MissesDepp?!, you can post about the treasure. Will's not dead so Elizabeth's happy.

and so am i

Before:

after:

lol it's so good guys!!!!!!!!!! we need to start more and keep making them until the second one comes out lol!

yeah, we really need to send this in so they don't decide to make will do the whole gladiator thing. it's really stupid.

seriously! the sequel as that one page says it sounds kinda dumb but it's not the real sequel...hopefully...

Oh, I hope so!
*starts to pray*

Jack was in his quaters. He was reading up on The Abyss. He took a sip of rum until he read something quite disturbing he swallowed cautiously eyes buldging her ran out on the deck and called for Jessie.
"JESSIE! JESSIE!!! JESS!" his calling broke her thoughts.
"Ya jack?"
"COME DOWN HERE NOW!" Jessie slid down a rope and was standing next to Jack.
"LET ME SEE YOUR HAND!" Jessie unwrapped the bandage again and showed it to Jack. The burning palm tree and the W started glowing again.
"JESSIE...."
"What? what is it? Jack what's wrong?"
"It says here that he who wears this mark is doomed to be a human sacrifice at the cave of the abyss."

(that was from MissesDepp?!)

(that was also from MissesDepp?!)

if you didn't notice, i'm cutting and paisting so it'll make sence with my add on

okay dudes ready for it?

yes now write

I MUST see what happens! I feel like i'm really watching a movie.

I would like to thank:
Orlando_lover45 My writing partner we shall be starting ANOTHER one haha
orlilover42 for assisting our decissions
really_bad_eggs for being cool
kamikaze for being a great reader
SamIam for being a good audience and sitting through suspense
and JackieSparrow for sitting through it all! LOVE YA GUYS!

And I think i speak for everyone when i say
"Thank you also, MissesDepp?!.

I must say, i doubted you in the start, but you pulled it off. Good job!







and you didn't kill off will.

That... was... FANTASTIC! This sequel is GREAT! I'm going to save it to a word document right now!

i saved it too. Ya a lot of people doubt me, i need a push by a certian someone *COUGH*you*COUGH* hahaa. ok now on to another sequel shall we??

What's it about?

We can't tell you, or else it would ruin the suspence, wouldn't it, MissesDepp?! ?

i'm so cool!




awwwwwwwwwwwww thankies! i hope i can help you guys better with the next one! i didn't want to ruin this one!

yeah I a s uspense sitter !!!!!! I love my new title .. u may all call me CAPTAIN SUSPENSE SITTER!!

OMG!!! woahhh that was awesome love it love it LOVE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh man you guys are the best

take care

luv AS!!!
xxx

here's a printable version. it's on like, 4 different posts though.
There was a loud knock at the door, Elizabeth turned to see Wills head popped through the big door.

"Good morning."

"BAH! go away, sleep now." She through a pillow at him "actually i have to use the bathroom." she shuffled past will, blowing him a kiss on the way and sat on the nearest toilet. (her thoughts are in italics) I feel so guilty running away from home but i can't leave Will...not now at least beside i think he's having fun working on the pearl with jack. She then quickly changed into a dress, not nearly as fancy as the ones her father had gotten for her and went down to the pier where the black pearl was, when she got there she saw a suprise, it was a girl a brunette dressed in what seemed to be an attempt at looking fancy she was talking with Will. Elizabeth just stood there watching the two talk. But before she could intrude Jack came walking down the pier.

"Blimey! It's capitan Jack Sparrow!" she shireked. She seemed to forget about the manners she was trying to with hold and went running up the dock. Jack was surprised he was about to say hello to Elizabeth this seemed to be delaying that. The girl jumped on Jack and gave him a hug. When she got down Jack winced with confusing.
"Jessie?"

"Hmm...you remember me, you must not be drunk yet." she joked. Jack laughed and gave her a kiss on the cheek.

"Which ones your new ship? the one i've been hearing about?" She clasped her hands and looked around at the ships. Jack looked at her suspiciously

"Why? does your mother know you're here?" He asked. Elizabeth tapped him on the shoulder.
"am i missing something here?"
"Oh, this is my neice, Jessie." Elizabeth put out her hand but Jessie ignored it her eyes were swelling with tears.
"Mom...you haven't heard?" She said looking down.
"What? what's happened?"
"She's....dead...shipwreck, no survivors." Jessie looked up at her uncle And a few tears rolled down her cheek. Jack embraced her.
"Uncle Jack there's nothing else to do, Please help me."
"Anything, love." He said wow, "uncle jack" i'm sure "capitan uncle jack" would work better. Wait what?! she never calls me uncle Jack...this must mean something. Elizabeth didn't like the idea of Jessie being on board there was something fishy about the way she was talking to Will.

Elizabeth went after her but Jack stopped her.
"I understand darling. I'll talk to her, let her be for awhile she's not in the best condition for something like this."
"NOBODY LISTENS TO ME ANYMORE!" Elizabeth stormed outside and ran out on the beach she started pacing on the sand and muttering to herself.
"I have to go back home...no! i can't...dad would be horrified with me running away with a pirate, a blacksmith was bad enough, this might kill him." Elizabeth threw her arms up in frustration

"AHH! WHAT NOW?!" she sat on the sand and felt it in her finger tips she closed her eyes. She remember how it felt when she was stuck on the island before with Jack she laughed at how much she despised him then. Wait...why was she thinking about this now? Is this the reason why she's on the pearl? Jack? she looked back on the pearl and saw his cabin light on her mind was wandering as to where he was and what he was doing.
"Snap out of it Liz, stick with logic." She sighed and fell onto her back. There was Jack hoovering above her. She gasped and sat up.

"Sorry Elizabeth." He looked at her and was puzzled by her smile. She quickly changed it into a frown
"How dare you spy!"
"I was trying to tell you-"
"And it's Ms. Swann FOR THE LAST BLOODY TIME!"
"Ms. Turner." he corrected, she looked away.
"....Not ms.turner?"he asked
she laughed "and you wonder why i ran away..."
Jack was confused.
"Your not married?" he asked.
"You know," Elizabeth said," you arn't making this any easier."
"Wow, luv. I didn't know." He said sympitheticly.
"yeah, you didn't. and if i'm going to be stuck here with you, i dont want to hear anything about it. i'm mad at Will, your niece is hovering over every word he says like she's his best chum and i'm stuck here without anything. I even ran away from home so there is no way i can go home. Your niece is going threw some tough times,i'm sure, but what about me? Why is will going after her and ignoring me?" She was standing up now, yelling at the ship, not jack.
"Well then..." Jack said," we best be getting on the ship."
The walk back to the ship was strange that night. Elizabeth was enjoying Jack's company. Even his horrible smell was okay. He never stopped smiling and she never stopped blushing. When they got back on the ship Jessie was talking to Will, obviously Jack hadn't spoken to Jessie yet. Elizabeth glared at him he shrugged.
"oh, you're back what were you two doing out there? " Jessie joked. Elizabeth went straight over to will, sat on his lap and kissed him. She tossed her hair back triumphantly and looked at Jessie.
"Nothing." she smiled. Jessie looked away. She opened her mouth to say something but Jack took her by the arm and lead her into the capitian's cavern.
"Jess, if your going to stay here you have got to get it through your head that Will is taken."
"First of all jack, drop the arm" Jack obeyed. "Second of all it is very stifly through my head, thanks. thirdly because you are the captian of this ship doesn't make you my bleeding dad. Finally and most importantly go away!" she pushed him through the door.
"Jessie." he started.
"Goodbye Jack." She slammed the door and locked it.
"What happened to uncle jack? I don't understand teenagers...."
once jessie left, Elizabeth got off of his lap and looked him straight in the eye.
"What is wrong, will? Last i checked, I was yours. What's all this with Jessie?"
"Elizabeth, settle down! me and jessie were just talking, thats all. Our mom's have both died on boat accidents, you know. I still love you."
"Well, your not showing it very well, Will. You havent kissed me in ages!"
Elizabeth was shouting again.
"What's happening in here?" Jessie came in.
Elizabeth about burst.
"None of your busness! Just leave me and my feonce' alone, will you?"
Elizabeth, stop shouting. Jessie, me and Elizabeth are just having a little argument."Will said.
"Look at you! your defending her! I give up." Elizabeth pushed passed jessie and out the door.
Will put his head down in his hands.
"She doesn't understand, will. Thats all." Jessie said.
Will looked up.
"Yeah, i guess..." He said.
"Don't worry, Will. Besides, it's not like she can understand how you feel about your mother. I do. She will probebly never understand, Will. And the way she was yelling at you? That was uncalled for."

Will nodded.
"She doesn't give you much privacy, does she. She can go galavanting after Jack but you with me? She about made the ship turn over! All i'm saying, Will," She sat down in Wills lap, "Is that maybe she doesn't love you anymore..."
"She does, too!" Will stood up, "She loves me and I love her and I'm not going to waist my time listening to you tell me otherwise!"
He ran out the door after Elizabeth, leaving Jessie on the floor. Jessie sat on the floor. She put her head in her hands.
"UGH! what are you desperate or something? Afraid to loose someone else? wanting to regain your mom?" she asked herself she started to tear.
"You promised yourself this would never happen...you promised." Jack appeared.
"AH!!! NOT YOU AGAIN! WHAT DID YOU NOT GET THE MESSAGE?!?!" Jessie slammed the door without letting Jack say anything she didn't lock it though she just threw herself on the bed and started to cry. When she woke up in the morning her nose was stuffed from all the crying. She sensed something was wrong, she turned around and Jack was laying next to her. She was a little surprised but not mad. Jack was awake he sat up.
"Jess, i'm sorry i'll leave."
"Nah Jack, it's okay." She leaned against his chest and sighed.
"You remind me of her."
"mom?"
"I see it when you smile." He smiled.
"I don't know if I'll be doing that alot anymore..." she said lightly. That morning Jack, Will and Elizabeth were all eating breakfast. Jessie had changed into pants, a v-neck button down shirt and a navy general jacket. She didn't eat breakfast, instead she sat by the rail and looked out on the ocean. Jack and Elizabeth went to get supplies, Will went to get food leaving Jessie alone on the ship. Will came back early and puttered about for awhile until he came up and put his hand on her shoulder she took her hand and pulled it off.
"jessie i'm so sorry, please forgive me." Jessie immediatley grabbed onto a rope ladder and started climbing up to the crows nest she sat there for awhile watching will and the town eventually Jack and Elizabeth came back. Then something weird happened, Jessie had a calling to go to the ocean it was like she couldn't stop herself or something. She stood up and jumped off. Jack turned around.
"Oh no, not good."
"What?"
"She can't swim!" Jack said sounding worried. Elizabeth rolled her eyes
"I suppose she wants will to save her."
"I don't care what she wants, i'm saving her." Jack took off his gun and coat and jumped into the water. Deep under the water Jessie came across a stone, it had many pointy things sticking out of it, she reached towards it, she put her hand on it and the pointy things dug into her skin leaving an odd pattern, almost like a map.
Jack pulled Jessie out of the water and onto the deck. Will and Elizabeth were arguing. Jack looked at her bleeding hand. He hugged her.
"WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU!? YOUR MOTHER CAN'T SWIM AND YOU BLOODY WELL CAN'T!" he bandaged up her hand ignoring will and elizabeth's fighting. She stood up
"Elizabeth please lay off Will FOR ONCE!"
"Jessie come here!!" Jack yelled. Jessie ignored him.
"You have nothing to do with this Jessie!" Elizabeth yelled.
"You have no right to be doing this to him you're not even married! she taunted." Elizabeth looked at Jack.
"NAmes make no difference, Swann, Turner it could be bloody Sparrow for all i care i'll still always love Will."
"Ah yes a whore by any other name does smell just as cheap." There was a long silence Elizabeth's eyes were buldging. Jack was laughing under his breath and Will was blushing. FInally to break the silence elizabeth slapped Jessie.
"You deserved that one." Jack laughed. Jessie smiled, the slap had done nothing. Elizabeth turned and ran off the ship
"Elizabeth, wait" Will caught up to her
"What do you want, Will?" She asked, looking away from his face.
"Elizabeth, i'm sorry, all right. I'm sorry." Will said.
Elizabeth's anger melted and she gave Will a kiss.
Jack was watching from a distance.
"Uncle Jack," Jessie popped up behind him, "What are you doing?"
"Jessie, I'm...nothing, luv. go fetch me some rum, will you."
"Uncle Jack, where will we sleep tonight?" she asked, as innocently as possable.
"In the captain's quarters. Now, the rum-"
"All of us? in the same room?" She asked again, halo shining.
"Yes all of us, now the ru-" Jack cut him self off when he realized what he had just said.
and when he realized Jessie's plan. When Will and Elizabeth returned Elizabeth pretended like the whole thing with Jessie hadn't happened. Jessie pretended like it didn't happen either. Jack however was very frazzled he was drinking his rum and muttering to himself. The night slowly dragged on until Will and Elizabeth said they were going to call it a night and Jessie agreed. Jack's hand started shaking.
"So you'll putter about then Jack?" jessie asked.
"actually i am a tad tired meself i'll squeeze in there mate." Jack went into the Cabins quaters. Will and Elizabeth were on a blanket on the floor, Jessie was beside Will. Jacks eyes buldged.
"So you'll be sleeping over there then?" Jessie inquired
"What? on that side?! of course not.....horrible feng shui. Ah but right in there between You and Will looks perfect."
"You can have a whole blanket to yourself, here take mine i could share with Will." Jack's hand started shaking more he had to rest it on his belt loop to make it stop.
"OR! You and I could share a blanket and will and elizabeth could have there own!"
"Well actu-"
"IT'S SETTLED THEN!" Jack took off his shirt, as did Will. Will and Elizabeth cuddled together. Jack turned around to Jessie who was very irritated and looking at the celing.
"I don't think so love."
"Don't think what?"
"Never mind." Half way through the night there was a loud bang it woke Jessie up. Her hand was having a funny tingling feeling. She looked at it and through the bandage it was glowing blue. Jessie took off the bandage, the markings had become a clear map. It had a picture of a burning palm tree that started glowing blue as the rest of the map faded then the W on the compass began to glow. Jessie flicked herself, but she wasn't dreaming. She just thought it was a late night hilusination she heard a bang and cautiously peered out the window, nothing. She was about to go back to sleep but she saw Will asleep. Elizabeth was further away from him and had her back turned to him. The blanket was down and was revealing his chest. She bent down and went to touch his shoulder, a drop of blood fell on his shoulder from her hand and then someone grabbed her and bound her arms and legs together. She let out a
"Hey!" but it was not enough to wake Will or Jack She had a hood over her head but she could hear some talking
"Capitian said it was a girl so which one?" a pirate whispered
"I dunno, take both." Jessie heard them bound Elizabeth and gag her she let out a little peep that was all. They were then put in a small row boat and taken to a large ship they could barley tell where they were. They finally took the hoods off to see they were at a table sitting across from a tall some what handsome man in fairly nice clothes.
"Ladies alow me to introduce myself, My name is Capitan kidd and this is my ship the dead sky. One of you possessess a key, in a way. This key leads us to the treasure of the lost abyss."
"The abyss?" Jessie asked.
"First ship to sail the Caribbean, full of gold, captian and crew killed by natives. But rather than spending the gold, the natives locked it up in a huge underwater cave of some sort. There is a map but it can only be read on the hand of a virgin." Jessie felt her hand with her thumb. She looked up and noticed that almost everyone was looking at her."
"What?! are you sudgesting that i'm the virgin?!?! Elizabeth could be a virgin for all you know."

"But they don't know...now give them what they want and let's go."
"Hey! i would have lost my virginity tonight if it weren't for these fools dropping in." Jessie yelled at Elizabeth. Elizabeth caught on and started jerking around in the ropes she was in.
"HE DOESN'T LOVE YOU AND HE NEVER WILL YOU CHEAP CHEATER!"
"CHEATER?" they kept yelling. Capitian Kidd rolled his eyes.
"LADIES! ladies, until you can decide what happened i'm afraid it's to the irons in the drakers for you."
"OH, great." Jessie said under her breath
"Will, where's Jessie?" Jack asked.
Will opened his eyes.
"I dont know, where's elizabeth?" He looked around.
They searched below deck and above deck.
"Jack! Look what i found!" Will shouted acrossed the deck.
"What is it, mate?" Jack said.
"It's a ransom note. They have taken Elizabeth! We have to save her!" Will looked determined.
"AND Jessie," Jack added,"Who took them?"
Will looked back over the note.
"The Abyss. What is that, Jack?"
Jack gasped.
"The Abyss the first pirate ship ever sailed in the caribbean, mate."
"We have to go after it." Will said.
On the dead sky, Elizabeth and Jessie were facing opposite walls in the cell.

"Why can't you except the fact that Will is mine?" Elizabeth spat, suddenly.

"Because he isn't. You arn't married." Jessie spat back.

"But he is! He loves me and I love him!" Elizabeth's face was hot.

"Really, I couldn't tell with all the arguing and fighting going on." Jessie shot back at Elizabeth.

"Because of you! Before you came into the picture, we were so happy!" Elizabeth shouted.

"Before I came into the picture, Will had nobody to talk to about his mother. I understand, you dont!" Jessie was shouting, too.

"I dont? has anyone wondered what happened to my mother? she was the daughter of the first captain of the Abyss. Once married to my father and after they had me, people assumed that she commited piracy and hung her. I was five years old, Jessie, five! Do you know how hard it is to watch your mother hung when you are only five? Do you?" Elizabeth was on her feet, screaming.

Jessie was speechless.
So was Elizabeth.
Back on the Pearl, Jack was steering the ship.

"Jack, I'm wondering if Elizabeth still loves me anymore. She said some nasty things to me." Will came up behind him, leaning out of the side of the boat.
Jack chuckled.
"Will, I have been threw many relationships and if there is one thing I have learned it is this. Love only passes you by once. If your blinded by other distractions, you could miss it."
Will thought about this.
Will knew that Elizabeth still loved him, as he did her.

Back on the Dead Sky, Elizabeth was crying in one corner while Jessie was thinking in the other.

(jessie thinking)"i'm ruining this girls life. She has run away from her life to be with this boy and then I try to take him from her. It would leave her with nothing to hold on to, nothing to live for. The only thing she has is Will. I'm ruining this girls life taking him from her. I just cant do that."

"Elizabeth?" Jessie said aloud.

"What?!" Elizabeth's eyes were puffy and red from weeping.

"I-I'm sorry. Will is all you got and I can't take him away from you. So, I'm sorry. Truce?"

Jessie holds out a hand to Elizabeth.
She takes it.
"Truce."
"Now then" jessie said looking around. "How do we get out?"
"Will would know."
"Aye....that he would......unfortunatley we are neither a blacksmith nor a drunk so this might be difficult. Damn it's annoying how usless women are!" jessie said looking at the bars. Elizabeth laughed.
"That's the first time i've heard you laugh Elizabeth."
"It's Ms. Swann." elizabeth smiled, jessie smiled back.
"Maybe if you weren't so stuck up then-" Jessie didn't finish, she sat down because at that moment two pirates came down into the gallows.
"The daughter of Samantha Swann? NOT stuck up?! it's impossible." one said, they both laughed.
"Look her mom is dead she was hung, she's pissed, she's tired and she wants to see her fiance just back off."
"I know you!" one said "You're Sparrow's daughter."
"I'm CAPITAIN jack sparrow's NEICE!"
"You look just like him." Jessie looked away and grit her jaw. Both pirates laughed and went back on deck.
"You're very protective of him..." Elizabeth said.
"We both have something important on that boat Ms. Swann, it's worth fighting for." Just then Elizabeth looked at Jessie's hand, they were very scard up. Old wounds, tattoos they covered her fingers wrists and arms.
"A lot of adventures huh?"
"Ironically all with Jack, you can't go for a normal visit with Uncle Jack, your a fool if you think you will." Jessie's hand started glowing blue, it was still the burning palm tree and the W.
"Virgin's hand eh?" Jessie said lifting it up and looking at it. Just then, the two men came back down.
"The captain wants you 'bove deck. Come on."
The men took Elizabeth and Jessie above into the open.
"Now, ladies. I need the map. Tell me where it is or i'll have you walk the plank." The captain said, with pointing hand twards the long board.
"We don't know." Jessie said again.
"Aye, that's what you said last time. You know where it is, your hand shows us. Tell me where it is!" The captain insisted.
"I-I know where it is." Elizabeth spoke up.
Jessie looked over at Elizabeth with a confused look on her face.
But then she understood.

Wow i did the same thing i made up a story along the same lines as your except the girl i placed in mine wasn't jack's niece. it was a pirate that he had sailed with when he was the captian of the black pearl, before barbossa took it over let me know how your story turns out, but i heard that they already had a POTC 2 title, so i hope yours goes along with it.

ooo that's cool.. I love how you guys ended it the same as the first that's really great I hope they do that in teh real movie

I hope you guys do you more because that was really good, i heard another title that was called the lengend of devil's throat. I guess it is supposed to be for POTC 2 because i saw it in a movie poster, but you never know.

yea.. I saw that too.. I'm thinking that they're revolving around those two titles they just have chosen which one yet

I had an idea on a way to bring back Barbossa's character, At the end of the movie way past the credits it shows that the monkey takes a piece of gold out of the chest and turns all skeleton like. Well i was thinking that the monkey could put a piece of the gold in to Barbossa's hand turning him in to a skeleton, and making him alive. I was also wandering if you guys were going to making another story of POTC because the first you made was great.

AGAIN..........see rules for policy on fiction stories!