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IN THE LAND OF BREE,
WHERE THE HOBBITS DRINK THEIR TEA!
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EVERY SIP THEY TAKE,
IS ENOUGH TO KILL A SNAKE!
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WHEN THE SNAKES ARE DEAD,
THEY PUT GOLD RINGS IN THEIR HEAD!
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WHEN THE GOLD RINGS DIE,
THEY PUT MORE IN THEIR EYES!
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WHEN FRODO GET'S THE RINGS,
ALL THE ELVES WILL START TO SING!
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HE MUST CHOSE WHICH RING IS GOOD,
EVEN GANDOLF SAYS HE SHOULD!
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WHEN FRODO HAS DONE HIS THING,
HE WOULD HAVE CHOSEN THE TRUE RING!
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THIS RINGS LIVES ON AND ON,
BUT NEITHER DOES THIS SONG!

*FRODO BAGGINS*

the elfs have better poems than that!!
jizzz

Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie

well, that's from the movie!

I wouldn't quit my day job if I was you Frodo, but seeing as it's better than any poem I've written...nice job

I like it!

(It repeats 'over the river and through the woods' every verse...)
Over the river and through the woods,
To Elrond's house they go,
The Elf knows the way to keep orcs at bay, all along the way.
Over the river and through the woods, to Mordor's gates they go,
Frodo and Sam, braver than man conquer all the way.
Over the river and through the woods, off to war they go,
The Elf and the dwarf have no remorse, fifty is their goal.
Over the river and through the woods, Gandalf the Wizard does ride,
With Pippin astride, over fileds they fly, to tell of what's to come.
Over the river and through the woods, some may not return,
But some do say that songs were made of those who stood so tall.

oh brother somebody needs to get a life..

if someone wants to make poems around something they find interesting, why not?

Well, I think it was a nice litle poem

Of course you did.

Well maybe once Finti actually gets a life, he will know what one is..........

Time to move on from the 80s.........

The poems are cool!!!!

What the hell?

Hell? I thought we were talking about poems.

Very.

Hey guys! That was actually a crap poem my friend made up, but what the hey! I'm gunna be a writer, actually I already am. I have written a book and had a friend illustrate the pictures for like the cover of the novel.

FRODO: hmmm... no offence, but i've seen better poems....


-Largo

and the difference being??????

Different spelling.

Well.......is not so bad.....but if I were you........I wouldn't choose writting as my day job

Hey I brought this thread up in honor of frodo baggins, that I do not specially know for he last went online 3 years before I came. Anyhow, look at his poem on the first page.

Ah! like gold fall the leaves in the wind, long years numberless as the wings of trees!
The years have passed like swift draughts of the sweet mead in lofty halls beyond the West, beneath the blue vaults of Varda wherein the stars tremble in the song of her voice, holy and queenly.
Who now shall refill the cup for me?
For now the Kindler, Varda, the Queen of the Stars, from Mount Everwhite has uplifted her hands like clouds, and all paths are drowned deep in shadow; and out of a grey country darkness lies on the foaming waves between us, and mist covers the jewels of Calacirya for ever.
Now lost, lost to those from the East is Valimar! Farewell! Maybe thou shalt find Valimar.
Maybe even thou shalt find it. Farewell!

cry snif! such an awesome poem, snif!

make it rhyme and flow better


also use a better vocabulary

but is good

can you read mine and give feedback