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This is a FanFic from Mercedes Lackey... check here or here or PM me if you don't know anything about her...

WARNING -- involves a Child Rape - but no details

I will appreciate all and any help!

The first chapter I wrote FIVE years ago! The second two I have written over the alst couple of days.

this is only the first draft, so don't be too cruel...

By the way :this means mindspeech: and ~This means thoughts~

I like the emotion of it, Phoe, but for the uninitiated like myself it is hard to appreciate it until we see the whole thing in context!

Wow, Ush came into the GenFic!

Heh, well, I cannot resist a request from Phoe... I have considered contributing once or twice.

Do you want input on where to take the story before you carry on, Phoe?

I think this is very nicely done. Especially the language addition...that's always fun! I am not sure about any ideas yet though.............

yes please!

Ooh, cool! I like the switching between languages, that's really neat. I've never read any Mercedes Lackey, but she's my friend's favorite author