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Rain

As the water flows down my face,
I wonder what the cold feels like.
The thoughts I have are forever,
but forever won't seem to come.
The rain has served me well though,
the water that flows washes away my blood,
the blood is washed by the tears I hold.
I lay away just waiting for death to come,
my life is over
everything is gone
for she has died,
and we were one.


Tear

I have lived a life of horrible unluck,
my luck has sent me more pain then most.
This luck is killing my mother,
and destroying my father,
and I fear it will come for me.
I have scars all across my tattered body,
and my eyes have seen more pain then most,
and I know,
I know in my heart,
that this pain is just beginning.
I fear for the day when my worst fears come true,
the day my life when the one I love,
the one thing I hold dear,
turns away or dies.
I have a way to show great sorrow,
though most may consider it sad,
I cry one tear,
that's all I have,
one tear to show my pain.

Malice

One word to describe a life
all you need to life in spite
You hate that one
you live only to hate
And now I shall reiterate:
If you live to hate
you have to live
pain is all you will receive
pain is all you give



Hate

"I hate you"
You hear it all the time
but does anyone even know
know what they mean to say
What they say is that there's something
so cruel and twisted in the hated
that when you see their face
you reel inside
wanting to kill them
make them just die

So listen kids,
before you go play
Listen to what Dark Horn will say
The word you use mean nothing at all
this world is build to crumble, that 's all
Go have fun, live your life
but when you're old, you'll all die
To hate will give you only one thing to live for...
To hate

Ask me personally, why I could put this up?
Because I know why someone can hate,
but for that same reason, why I can love.

Cool poems... nice and dark. Just the way I like them. But you need to be more descriptive! ^_^ Make the reader feel what you're feeling, or what the characters in the poem/narrator of the poem are feeling... descriptions are key-- so describe away!

Don't take my criticism too harshly; I still think your poems rock. ^_^


Okay... didn't see the last two poems... but they rock, too! Just be more descriptive and you'll be a sensational poet