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Aw! That was good! Very tragic...

brilliant! absolutely brilliant! but sad very sad but i think your a good poet i have a few freinds that write poetry i think ill get them to post here

Keep writing, keep posting your work here! It could use a little improvement but I like your style. One thing to keep in mind is that poetry doesn't have to rhyme... There're just two lines that don't really make sense, I think because you were trying to come up with a good rhyme:

"Alone I stand, forever and more.
Always alone, no more to sore."

Other than that, I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work.

Yeah, it was so awesome!