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I made up this dance party rap. Tell me what you think:

Ra ra a boo ra say what?
Ra ra a boo ra?
My name is James.
And they call me Jimmy.
And when they see me
They say:

Shake it! Don't break it!
And when you roll it, control it!
And when you pop it don't stop it.
And when twist it don't miss it.
And when ride it don't hide it.
And when you groove it don't loose it.

So, come on, tell me what you think. I can take it!!

(you should see my moves with this)

Yo! Yo yo, yo!
My name is Justin
Your head will be bustin
Metal is rustin
STEP BACK!
STEP UP!
LOOK TO YOUR LEFT!
YO! Yo yo, yo!
Roses are red
Violets are blue
step back right now
or I'll spank you
STEP BACK!
STEP UP!
RIDE A PONY!
YO! Yo yo, yo!

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Syren's the name, seduction's the game,
Y'all know my skills are never the same,
I've freestyled in public, alone and silently,
In my mind it sounds good, but please judge me gently.
I'm messing right now, no seriousness intended, but,
Gauranteed there'll be members who'll take this and say shut,
up, be quiet, you'll never have fame,
But I know my limits, and I show no shame,
I'm rockin', got style,
I chilled for a while,
But I'm back and I'm sizzlin', I'm badder than ever,
KMC brings out sides that I swore I'd never,
Show to the world, through insecure notion,
All this takes is talent and massive emotion.
Rogue, you got skills, and Myth, you're comedic, still,
I'm number one, I've proved it, I thrill........

shake that ass!

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curse again and ill hurt u

ass ain't a curse, is it?

still its not a good word.....

ok, I'll never say ass again

thats the third time...im gonna steal your allowance

cry

so how much do u get?

umm..... none

I thought your father gave u an allowance....

raz is a stingy bastard

This was soooooooooooo good!! I loved it!!
The rhyme is the chime and I can't get it out of my mind!!

I was actually snapping my fingers when I read this.

I think this did out do me!! Go go!
You show, you go, you know??

Your better than 50 cent.

i am sick
its not a trick
lick my ****

Yo check it homie
you dont know me
I get some many hoes
that they have to wait in line to blow me

^ please sxcuse my pathetic attempt to rap.

please just sit
cuz this is it
i gotta take a shit

lol

Aaaw, guys.......

*is all flattered and stuff*

while having sex:
gonna drink some rum
do you want some
oh, i am gonna cum!!!!

While drinking beer
dont get to drunk
you might run into a deer
while driving like a stupid f*ck

the future is bright
i feel no fright
ow *****!! dont bite!!!

*sigh*

Boys will be boys, there's no changing that,
I've given up trying to work with those tw@ts,
Hell, they think I'm crazy, that I'm mouthy and wild,
But that shit don't bother me, coming from a child,
You think I'm listening to you when you whine?
I don't hear my mother, she moans all the time,
So listen up guys and listen up good,
Syren's your Queen, that's the way that it should,
Be and will stay, so forget all your messin',
This B!tch won't take crap, take this as a lesson,
Carry on "rappin", or whatever you call it, boys,
You'll only ever be minions to me, just my toys.



Mwahahahahahaa!!!!

boys rule!!!! girls drool!!!!

Yo dont be hatin
us guys just like mating
sex isnt the only thing on our minds
all the time
well mabey I lied

Now that was lame.

No, actually LF, that made quite a clear point.

There's nothing worse than when some rap artist puts their long words together excellently, but chats shit.

You made a point, very simply, but still clap

Well thanks syren but that rap that I made sucked.

we aint exactly run dmc, are we?

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We????

*cough*

diva

GO MINIRAZ!!!!!

this one won't glow

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its time to blow

Yo check it homie
nobody can hold me
Ill punch people in da face
and Ill let da girls blow me

http://www.world-of-smilies.de/html/images/smilies/tiere/tiere61.gif < this guy likes my rap

boo bo chi va boom chi b boom chi

My name is speidi

too all the playas in the house

We bringin it back from back in the day but thats okay.

yes..

please stop some of you (not mentioning no names)

I be spittin spattin

All full of it.
Switching dashing, pull up to the atm whack it
drive at it. peace I am done.

nice and original

thanks.

Original, yes......

I like some of the stuff you guys do, but it's so simple.

In the words of the Rap God HockeyHorror "I know you can make it more complex"........

rhyming aint easy.
sounds kinda cheesy.
gonna go home and watch george and weezy.

oh jeezuz..........

Fo' sheezy ma neezy Force..........

Bounces back bounces back.
The beat is back. VA!
VA!

Ive gots some gold crowns on my teeth
24 karat gold on my toilet seat
Ive gots bling blings all ova my room
Im rollin in cash
all yall stupid mo fos
can kiss my ass

We get down
Get vitamins from the Sun
Pearls from the North
Got some heat from the South.

wanna tap some ass
break it like glass
oh my god...i have no class!!!

You have no talent either, but keep it coming, Mr Entertainment

Behind no.

Young in the game just ain't the same
Rough in the burbs

testing my mettle.

It could be

wasn't nor should it/

Clouded fully shrouded open
with a top pulled back.
Aint a piece of crap.
But a tap on that ass.

Yo my name is Robbie
watchin syren grind a pole is like an everyday hobbie
I eat p*ssy like a cookie
I like ta hear dem moan
Ill hit ya so hard
that you will think your home

* hopes syren will give credit for using her name *

At least again ho!
unsheats dagger
Not ready to stagger

but to do battle again
nope. To floss.

Goes out to toss.

Eats meats

spits it out
pounds it down.
damn! I ain't no clown.

I cant rap worth a crap.

I be
real in the game

no claim to fame.
got weakness.
no I ain't speaking dis.

go on, tupac!!!

I am da one man show

got a chick who can blow

I don't know


Its survival of the fittest
Damn I can't go wittest.

boogie boogie
i want some noogie

^ thats da rap yo.

hands mic over.

But not b4 nodding slower.

hey yo trick
suck my ****
give it a lick

Robbie --> That was good babe, you used longer sentences etc.

((didn't need to name drop to get credit ))

Speider --> Why don't you try using words that have more than one syllable? Or words you might actually find in the dictionary

RJ --> Rude Boy

Oh aight syren.

Yo Im da man wit da flow
cant ya see
Ive gots at least 30 hoes
in da bed wit me
all I know that Ive gots ta see
is hoes taking dey bras off
so dey can show me their p*ssy

I cant rap.

Syren be muttering that I am stuttering.

Looks post haste and yells

***** u know what I want!!!!!!

w00p w00p!!

Syren's outtie,
Give me a shout, gee,
Gotta get some shut-eye,
Else I'll die,
From pure exhaustion, my eyes are half closed,
Though when in my club my body's exposed,
See y'all tomorrow coz there's no doubt I'll be here,
So raise up your arms and give Syren a cheer!!



That was shit. I am so sorry. I will try harder next time.

I'm so ashamed

Dats coo syren
goodnight
sleep tight
and don foget to turn off da light

*huggles the Badman*

I'm sowwie, want me to kiss your broken pride??



Night fella, and I was playin' wit ya.

Word pimpdiva

Nighty night.
Sleep tight.

Have fun tonight,
In the morn' it'll be alright.

Bye Syren.

That's cool.

yeah. and the smilie goes good with it too.

bump

Everything is good in the hood, yo

Yo yo. Yo. Yo-yo, ya know, yo?

da hood? are you actually in da hood?

of course, yo. straight up.

mhm..sure.

Now The Syren's back and she's banging out style,
Ain't been seen in this thread for a while,
I've been hangin' out with my b!tches and boys,
But I had to bounce home just to play with my toys.
Been checkin' out lyrics slammed out by y'all,
You got nothin' on me, coz I make you look small,
If you can't take the pace stop chattin' such shit,
But if you got skills then come on and show it.
Nobody else ever does it like me,
It's about time you learned so listen carefully,
I'll blow you away with my words, so hold tight,
Only The Syren can get it so right.
I'm sorry, I'm braggin', but you know that I'm good,
So raise up your voice, show respect like you should,
I'm done with this rap, better read it and weep,
One finger up to those who say I'm cheap.

Great job syren.

what a bunch of crackers!!!!!

lol

Why thankye kindly fellas......

*starts to line dance*

what the hell is this place?

dance central.

Uh Ill try...

Ive gots gold crowns on my teeth
airforces on my feet
Ive gots da beat
to make you get on yo feet
Ive gots a lamborgini
Ive gots hoes in bikinis
Im like a ghost
cause you cant see me

Sorry I cant think of anything right now.

peek a boo!!!

as usual, great job Syren!!!