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*this is not a sequel of any sort, i just put 2 because there was already a sith war 1000 years before ep 1 so this is the 2nd war and this takes place 4 years before the clone war*

Night had fallen on corusaunt the only light shone from the buildings and speeders. Obi wan and Anakin were in the jedi council doing some late night saber training, being examined by yoda and mace. "i think we were wrong about him being to old to be trained" said mace windu to yoda, "his skills have grown far beyond his obi wans". just as he said this, obi wan disarmed anakin and used the force too send him flying to the other side of the room. Yoda came up to anakin. "much to learn, you still have". A roaring noice filed the air, a huge cruiser was landing in the bowls of Corusaunt it speed accross to the deserted plains and landed in a rusty looking building. "what was that", obi wan asked. "cargo haul" mace replied. mean while, in the deserted plains of corusaunt , something bad was going on that even yoda had no idea of, something bad as a sith council was operating...

"has everyone arrived" said an elderly man in a black cloak and hood. "yes master" replied a man with a disfigured face. "good, we shall strike tomorrow at dawn"

the next day obi wan was standing guard for the night. he felt a dark pressence near by, he ignitened his lightsaber and was imedintly knocked unconcious by a dark figure. "lets move" said the dark figure as they entered the jedi temple...

Why isnt anyone replying?

We're waiting to see what happens next!

you could atleast comment

Well it's good, but if you used new lines for dialogue and speech, it would make it easier to read

thanks for the tip