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Pools of Red

Where had hope gone
Did it ever exist
As the blood oozes
From both my wrists

I will soon be dead
To hope no more
Final words written
In blood on the floor

I sink to my knees
As tears are shed
A life being drained
Into the pools of red

OMG that is sooooo good!!! You want to here mine?

Luv

As sun sneaks acros the water you can feel the earth shiver.
Night is now day the light gives us life.
Clouds apear to welcome angels in.
All is peacefull.

Yo are you there?

yeah im here wow

Ya you like it... I made it up on the spot!!!

its need to be longer but it is good

Ok I'll try..

Luv

As sun sneaks across the water you can feel the earth shiver.
Night is now day the light gives us life.
Clouds apear to welcome angels in.
Al is peacefull.

Trees wisper witha soft fragrance.
Holding their true buety inside.(don't mind the spelling)
Eagles glide over the air like a feather floating down water.
The world is calm.

I don't like the last line / sentence it's to similar to the first...

I got it...
Not a sound is spoken.

Yo poetry person you there?

Anyways got to go... Bye!!!

its nice i like it.... and i have a baby so although im here sometimes im really not

This is really great; I love it.

This one I like also.

Now...here's my'n; evnthough I know this thread is about White Lady's poetry.
The End
I see pain, I see death I don't wanna die
How can it end?

Do we really die or just go to another place?
Is it really end, or just a new kind of pain?

How to react? How to escape?
I don't wanna go I really like this place.

How to stay yourself; how to trick the death?
Do I run away or should I hide from hell?

Can I live or I'll have to die?
Do I start it over or I'm finished with this space?

Am I moving forward or there even isn't a path?
So many questions and the answer comes with

The End

Nice poem.... Ya mine waz the one titled Luv!!! Did you like it?

If I'm not blind I see I already said I like it.

Oh you were talking about mine... AAAWWW Thanx!!!

ty

Hi...

Another poem!

There's so much about me
That nobody knows,
But I know it's because
I don't let it show.
But even if I did,
Would anyone care?
Would somebody ask?
Would someone be there?
I've never really had someone
I opened up to,
Never had a friend's advice
About what I should do.
I always had to hold my own
And listen to others' troubles.
But every time I help someone else,
My own depression doubles.
They don't see the other me
Where the hurt and tears all hide,
And therefore I have no one
In whom I can confide.
I cry it out to my pillow,
I write to my diary,
But there's no real person
To understand the real me.
I pray to God to hear me
And send a real friend,
I ask him every morning
And at each day's end.
There are a few I talk to
About what's hurting me,
But I'm still not sure they know,
I'm still not sure they see.

All I really want
Is someone to love me true,
And listen to these feelings
And pains that I go through.

I want someone to tell me
That they really understand,
And someone I can trust
To be there to hold my hand.
So I wait for the moment
My dream is finally found,
And go back to crying and writing
Without a single sound.

Temet Nosre

A flower dies
Does any one cry
A raindrop falls
A wasted body, a wasted trip, a wasted cycle
Where does it lead, where does it begin?

Silence, what is louder?
Darkness, What is brighter?
A shadow, a nothing, moving across a wall
Inspires, captivates and confuses

A torch, a spotlight darkening what is dark enough
Mystifying what is already strange
An orb floating drifting swaying
I mean what else can it do stuck up there

omg i was crying before i read this and no i cant stop...its beutiful

sorry for making you cry more!

no it was good

wow thats soooo goood!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey torncrawler like your sig!!!

I'VE GOT ANOTHER!!!!

Night sneaks by as quick as it can.
For it shall have the birden of doom.
No sounds are heard throughout the world.
For tonight is the night of doom.

This special night once a year.
The witches come out and play.
For it's the night of Halloween.
Monsters come by day.

Ha Ha Like it?

i made it and his avy

Very cool... Can't talk now I'm at school!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!

Can you make me an avy...I like Orlando Johnny and my name in it to... if you could I would be sooooooooooo happy!!!

ill ask arwene for those pics so it will match okay

The Darkworld
I sit here in my cold world of darkness
i sit imprisoned and i dont know why
I lay awake in silence at night and cry
sometimes i find myself in prayer, down on my knees
I prayer for a kind heart witha peaceful soul
To release me andlet me walk free.
This prison is a lonely one, I know not who keeps it
The only sounds i hear are echoes,
echoes of my crying and the mumbles when i pray
I wonder if god cannot reach me in this cold and dark world
These walls are so thick, i cant feel his hand upon me
The darkness in this world is never ending
I find no light and i feel no warmth.
I have not eaten for so long
and i drink the water that flows around me
I'll be here waiting for eternity
until my body dies or my soul ecapes
this is my cold world of darkness
This is my darkworld, made for my suffering soul

His World - The Darkworld

I saw a small shed in the middle of this field so i decided to have a look inside
it had a small window and the room inside was pitch black and in the corner a figure moved
i wasnt afraid just intrigued to find out who this figure was
i got my sleeve to wipe the window clean but it was hard to see
i banged on the window and screamed for him to look at me
but my cries fell upon unheard ears
I ran around to find a door but it was locked
somehow i knew i had to save this thing from this darkness
As i tried to fight the door handle it opened just like there that
And there on the other side was a image of a man with eyes so deep
he held out his hand and said "come with me, i want to show you something"
Once inside the door locked, i was trapped inside but i felt at ease
"Welcome to my world" he said with a half grin
"This is your world but why its so cold and dark"
"I know it aint much" he replied "But its home"
I pointed to my land and said "Thats home not this darkness"
"THAT" he said with an evil laugh "That gave me pain"
"But its still home" I replied to him
"Not for me it aint.....it offers me pain there, here i feel none"
I looked at him with tears in my eyes...
"Dont cry for me.......I 'm happy here no one can hurt me"
"But you will die here in this world of darkness"
"Maybe..........but at least you found me"
With those world i was back in my world. the sun was shining
But instead of being happy my heart ached for the guy in the darkworld

Bravo.....Ya thanx for trying to make me the avy...!!!

i have your avy

heres it

White Lady; You'r poems are really great; actually more than great...they're perfect.

aww..ty i have got some more to add

For You

I sit here as my mind takes me to the guy with no love
andI wonder why? That with his shy smile and his lost eyes does he feel like this
Then i see his pain....
As the rage builds up inside i ask myself why?
Why has the love turned to hate...
I sit there and wait for his dad to take his next blow
and i stand my ground and say no!
This is wrong! 'Look at him' i yell
This boy was made out of love not hate!!
He is not a punchbag but your son.
I know you have problems but hitting him aint the answer'
As a cold tears burns into my face i ask my daddy why?
"Why is it that i lock my heart off from all men but he has the key?
Why is it that my unbeating heart now beats?
Why was I brought to this place...was it more than an accident?
Daddy was this all your doing? Did you give him the key to my heart?
Did you clear ther path and lead me here?
Was he given to me for a reason?
If so Why daddy?"
They say love has no limits. That love can move mountains.
But how can my love save him?
Is it right to feel this way?
"Daddy will the love i feel for him help? I hope so daddy....Here goes"

Babe i give you my heart as i gift.....As a way out from all this darkness and pain.
I know right now it means so little but like a seed it will grow.
Love has no limits....Love can move mountains but deep down I hope
That my love will be strong enough to set you free and light up your life.
Somehow your in my heart and thats where your gonna stay

will you

If I call
Out your name
Will you
Come and find me?
If I leave
This world
Will you
Follow my path?
If I slowly
Die away
Will you
Try to save me?
If I cry
On your shoulder
Will you
Wipe my tears away?
If I loose
All I love
Will you
Be there for me?will you

my father...

You never loved me..
you never cared
I dont need you
i care for nothing nor no one
its because of you i feel like this
you are killing me inside
my heart is locked inside darkness
its so cold..
i sit on the ground waiting for someone to hold me
i see your eyes
i shiver...i break...i cry
you never cared for me or my sister...
to me...you are dead...my life...it has no meaning
you are no better then the one with my brothers blood upon his hands
i dont know whats worth fighting for..so why do i?
no one should be scared to dream...to sleep
but its because of you my father...that im terrifide
mother...you stand by and watch...i dont know y
all I want is for someone to free me...im traped
i cry screaming out in pain..no one hears me
i stay alone...its what i want...
i want this...so i dont end up like you
.....my father...

oh my god.....thats so sad...i can feel my eyes swelll,,runs and hugs nightskye

WL> Your poems are awesome!!! Honest!

Kof> That poem's really sad

i know it is....but its the truth...

omg....Luke.....your poem.....

hey luke...i cant read that poem no more after 5 times im all cried out..........

Have I Ever....
Have I ever told you
that if I sit really still and silent,
sometimes. I like to think
I can hear your heart beating
in time with mine?
Have I ever told you
that when I watch you speak to me
through lines and cords,
and bytes and ram,
I imagine, your voice,
whispering into my ear?
Have I ever told you
that I wait out each day
in anticipation, wanting
only an hour or two,
just a second in space and time,
to feel close to you?
Have I ever told you
that there has been times,
when I ached for you,
ached for you so badly,
that the emotions overwhelmed me..
and so I sat and cried?
Have I ever told you
that sometimes,
I will reach out,
touching your name
on this cold screen before me,
wishing I could reach in
and pull you to me?
Have I ever told you
that I would give everything up,
just for one night
to be able to lay near you,
to feel your chest rise and fall
with each breath you take,
just to know that you are real?
Have I ever told you
that I dream of you often,
I dream of you reaching out
and touching my hand,
simply to let me know
that you are there,
and everything is okay?
Have I ever told you,
have I still yet to tell you . . .
that I love you?

is this love?...

i never thought that i would find love.
i have found you
god brought you to me
my chest hurts so badly for you
it burns me
you cry for me...because you love me
your tears...i see my reflection in them
im falling slowly...
catch your tears
never let them fall
soon i will be with the one i love
soon you will see the one i love is you
i will hold you forever in my arms
crying these tears of pearls...
i weep because i chose to..
not because i have to...
tell me...is this love?...

aww lukey such a cool poem........

Ya I'm to tired to think up another poem... in Canada it's 7:30pm(Ya i know thats still early..)

Fine...

Footsteps hide the sadness we feel
For I hold the birdon of doom
Because tonight was the night of sadness
For the stars and the moon

When the police arrived to see what happened
They said I was to blame
I told them it wasn't my fault
But they said that my story was lame

Ya I know it's too short but I honestly don't care you guys can add to it if you want to...

its good jen

Thanx

I sit here as tears run down my face...
Was it just a game.was it all lies
The soft words you say to me
The poetry you wrote for me
The pictures you gave me...
The tears you shed...
Did I mean nothing! But I good laugh.
Well I gave you songs of love
and words from my heart on paper
I would have given you the world if you asked
you see all that i done was a gift.....kinda like my heart
But then i had that Pm...
that hit me like a stick.........How could you Luke
You told me your heart only beats for me....
Was that a lie too...
God im so confused
i need answers and need them now!!!
That poem you gave me...Is it mine alone
So I ask you all this........before it too late...

shocking

Broken...(my hearts last cry)

The darkness surrounds me
since you've left
but im not scared
its quite comfronting
knowing theres no pain
I look in the mirror
But theres nothing there
just a person with no face...
And then i wake
and it sinks in
That your gone
and its all over
and it hurts
so i cry. i cry for you
and then in the silence
i hear it.........
its the sound of my heart breaking

bad memories

Screaming for you
crying your name
watching me bleed
the pain is near
the pain i bleed
ripping apart
empty i feel

I wrote this after i had a miscarriage

OMG....i am so sorry.....

its okay its good to get things out plus i have my two little angels with me

Wow that waz REALLY GOOD!!!!

OMG you had a misscarrige.......I sorry........

its okay..its life............*notes dont show them other poems*

No, you must show other poems *gasps* PUBLISH A BOOK!!!!

An email from oneself

I sit here as i read you email
quite numb as tears fall from my eyes
From a little girl being raped to abuse
who had your fair share of monsters

I never cried so much like i did today
I coudn't see through all my tears
The pain stabbed me in the heart
As if some one came at me with a knife

You should have screamed for help
Your mother should have known
How could you lock all this away
didn't you even have a friend

well half way down your email
I heard of a baby and cried
Maybe that could have saved you
from trying to take your own life

But years from all that horror and pain
You have your little angels
and when life gets tough and hard
Just think of them and smile

No man is ever worth self torture
No matter what he does
So promise me Casey
as i wrote my final words

That if the pain of the past ever takes control
or a man hurts you in any way
You were look at those darling angels
and thank them in every special way

i have a poem for every mood...

You're My NightSkye

My lips quiver; your words enter my soul
Your voice so gentle; though it has the power of no other
I long for you to be my own; for me to love..
You are the reason why i dream at night
Everyday, it feels like I will not continue unless I feel your loving embrace.
Though I have learned to go on; like a hermit with no sun.
Longing for the day that I feel your starlight upon me
Restoring me; giving me a reason to continue on...
Your gentle eyes look upon me and I tremble with passion.
Your soft, shimmering skin glows with comfort that I long to embrace.
Why must you deprive me of my passion?, of your love?
You are the missing element in my life.......You are my NightSkye filled of hopes and dreams

at th emomnet abby its like this crybaby

wow, some pretty deep stuff here, good stuff WL.

Wow your poems are sooo good....... I just don't really have the time to sit and write poems because I like to sketch.....

This is a poem I wrote when I was in grade 5 it's really cheezy!!!

Cold

There once was a bear who was old
Who didn't know how to fold
He coughed and sneezed
Laughed and Weezed
Because he hada cold!!!

She I just came across my poetry book from grade five..heres another
School

School Rocks
It's the best
But every week we have a math test
Well, maths my favourite subject you see
Now leave me alone
I have to go to a spelling bee!!!

Pretty Cheezy Eh?

it takes me 30 mins to write a good poem............luke is my muse

Aha....Ya it takes me 4 minutes to make a really cheezy poem...Lol!!!

yeah well i write mine on paper.then type it in......taht way then i have my poems with me

I can't write poems

its easy.............

heres goes right a cheesy poem as we speak................

I look at my screen and wonders if he feels the same way
wonders if he can hear my heart over his typing..
wonders if he runs his fingers along my screenname..
when we depart i wonder if he touches the screen to say goodbye
i wonders if a single falls everytime i say i love you......
I wonder if he sat here wondering
if i do any of this too..
mmmmm i wonder

Nice, Casey! I love angst!

ty ying........

y wonder when u know? ...

Thats a really good poem that is for making it up on the spot heres my try......

I look at the screen and can't think what to say
The sun is shining
It's a wonderful day
My cats are asleep
They had such a hard day
So thats my cheezy poem K?

Hello..........

this is very good .........

Here is my fav. for right now...
"Swing"
The back door swings.
There's an unmarked handprint. House
is still with questions. Haunted with the
dullness of unlived lifes. They just drift
away every decade.
Blood stains the wall.
Fingers crawl.
A broken leg and a fallen chair.
A person hugs the chair and strokes the hole.
Their eyes lost.
Their mind unread.
They seem dead, but they live. Their
legs stand them up. Dishes are smashed
and a table is rolled.
This person falls into a ball.
Knees meet the head and they sit and
they sit and they sit as the back door
never stops swinging.

Tell me what u think !!!

Ya it's good....but just calm down K?

lost..

i dont want to be alone..
im so cold...
i have this heart...y wont it beat?
im so scared to fall in love..
i never want to hurt anyone
i stay alone in the dark
sitting in the corner crying for no reason
when love finds me
what will i do?
i have never felt love... im so scared
the darkness surounds me..im fading slowly
if you dont find me soon...i will be lost forever
lost inside darkness...lost inside my fears to fall in love...
just...
lost...

why do i have to calm down....thats lame

thats one sad poem luke.but ithought love has found you

*cries* this poem is so sad. Why don't you write something happy? Actually don't. I like sad.

happy..........whats happy...........okay me write happy

heres happy:-
I'm as happy as ever,
I feel so alive
I can't think straight,
My heart's in overdrive

I'm tired of pretending,
That nothing's going on
I'll take a chance on you now,
Before you are gone

I'm happier that I've ever been,
There's nothing left for me to find
I think I know why I'm like this,
Because my heart controls my mind

I used to get my heart broken,
I used to hate all men
But now that I've found you,
I won't feel that way again

This is awesome. But I still like the sad ones the best; I don't really belive in happiness.

found at last

i never thought that i would see..
for so long i have seen nothing but darkness..
you...you showd me light....you showd me love...
you showd me how to care....you showd me how to dream..
i used to dream such nightmears..now i dream of you
did i ever tell u how much you mean to me?...did i ever say that i care?
now you know how i feel...this will never die...
my past no longer scares me...you chased my fears away..
i look back now and then....to remeber the good times...theres so few
my borther was a saint..now hes brought me to you
your the angel of my darkness...
no longer shall i suffer...all i know is how i feel...
this will be for ever after...
you gave me wings to fly away....but now i chose...for you.... i stay..
i am...found at last..

Cool; you 2 write great poems

awww lukey...........awww im gonna cry!!!!!!!! thats for me.........awww

Tears
if tears weren't clear
She'd have to wear a mask
Her face would be stained
The way they stain glass
She'd be dis-
Colored and Ugly
Then they can all see...
How sick and pathetic is she
Yet, she is really me

Poem is nice; do you really think of yourself on that way or it's just a fiction?

hey be@st!! u got edge in your sig thingy whahaah >.< REY REY IS BETTER LOL ^^

wel i wrote it because we all cry and i seem to cry a lot

kof: I have no idea who edge is; and to be honest I'm not sure that I even want to find out.
WL: Why do you cry?

Aww is never enough
Aww means that you really don't care
Complain about your own problems, and disregard mine
They mean nothing to you
Aww is not sincere
Not a cure
Or little noise of happiness
Or sympathy
It's something to fill the void
Of feeling...
Anything
Three aww's are not enough
I'm spilling my heart out to you
There you are
Blankly staring, without expression
Aww!!!

I wrote this ages ago because all my ex could say was aww now i end up saying it

why do i cry.....how long have you got.......
never knew my daddy when i did he was taken from me...........had a bad life read my poem a email to one self it says it al there

To My Daddie With Love
by CaseyLeigh

You were my hero
Not like all the rest
When it came to fathers
You were always the best.

You were a teacher
Like none I've ever known
Teaching that reaping comes
From the seeds that are sown.

You were my best pal
My first real friend
You remained that to me
Until the very end.

You were the first man
That taught me about love
One pure and simple
Sent from God above.

You were the man
To all others I would compare
You placed the stars in my eyes...
And your love to them I will share.

Im sorry to hear that.
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its okay.........the end of the poem is good i have my two little angels

I cant write any poems if I tried. I would have stupid rhymes and the poem would not make sense.

poems dont ned to ryhme mine dont.......i write what i feel

im like that with my drawings..but...a lot of pain is seen through some of them... so i dont show the ones that hurt

Ok but still. I suck at poetry.

I just cant think of anything to say.

because of you...i killed myself

You'll never make me stay.. how can someone live here?
this place is so cold...so dark...it gives me such pain..
i wonder why i must suffer such pain...now because of you my fahter...
i welcome pain..i sit in the darkness of an empty room
nothing can be seen or heard but the sound of my dripping blood on the ground..
you see the relfection of the knife...my blood is dripping from the blade..
i bring ths blade close to my mouth....i tast me blood on my lips...its so sweet..
the knife comes down....down to my wrists..i want to end it all...i cut myself...
i scream out in pain as the kife slips from my grip..the wound is too deep
i stand up off the ground...sreaming...i rip my shirt and then...silence....
i look to my wrist's....and i drink my own blood...i feel so helpless...no one cares how i suffer...
this is it...look what you have done to me...
father ...its because of you....that i kill myself

(i wrote this when i tried to kill myself....it was going to be the only thing left...so my father would know it was him that drove me to this end...)

Even though life can be rough you should never try to kill yourself. Just remember that everything bad that happens to you might come out to be better in the future. I mean I get mad at my father to but I just face it and move on.

i hate this poem.......it horrible............hugs luke..........luke i know what goes on with you and that person you call your father........but there is light at the end of the tunnel..........and i know right now it makes no sense but it will it time.........i here for you hun

as jamelia says:-

For every last bruise you gave me
For every time I sat in tears
For the million ways you hurt me
I just wanna tell you this
You broke my world, made me strong
Thank you
Messed up my dreams, made me strong
Thank you....
my life was shit too.......i was abused when i was young found my daddie and lost him again and got beaten up.i tried to kill myself but now i htink im glad i never i have two wonderful kids......my heart once again now beats...so smile luke

Here's my newest poem; I wrote it in school (during the math when was bored)
It's kinda short but I think it's OK; nothing special though.

Love Hurts
Why don't you stand me?
I did nothing to you

Why do you hate me?
I have never hurt you.

Why don't you like me?
I'd like to be a friend of you.

Why do you ignore me?
When I really love you.

smile?... hehe cheesey grin ^^

aww beast has a heart.........i like that

aww see lukey smiles

i love you
From the moment I saw you my soul touched yours.
I've never been so in love in my entire life.
I feel like I'm in a dark cave.
I scream I LOVE YOU,
and in the desperate desire to hear your voice,
my heart jumps at the echo.
but then I realize,
it's my own.

pretty good

Before I met you,
I was badly hurt from relationships that fell apart,
I didn't wanna live no more
I just wanted an end,
I thought nothing could cure me,
My heart would never mend.
You walked into my problems
and made them go away,
I didn't wanna be with you,
'Cause I thought you'd hurt me someday.
I gave you a chance to see if that was true,
But something was different and you were something new.
Now, I know what your love is truly about,
your sweet, honest, and loveable,
something I can't live without.
I hope that this love will last,
Because you know I'll always love you,
I hope we'll never part,
because I know you love me too...

why do you always write about love hurting

i would think it was obvious...you write what you're feeling at that moment...

I hope that White Lady won't mind me posting here....

She is a shinging star upon the horizon
A brilliance that illuminates the night sky
Her heart filled with such emotion
Her smile filled with such beauty

As I lay my eyes upon her
I feel a warmth in my heart begin to grow
She touches my heart so softly
She touches my soul so tenderly

I look into the eyes of this Princess
and I hope that my eyes tell her so
this moment I am lost in
this moment I am with you

our world...

the night its so dark yet so peaceful
people look to my eyes they see fear
i have fear in my eyes from falling in love
i thought i was the only one to be left in darkness
the darkness sooths me
as it also frightens me
i dont want to fall in love again
but i have
i have too many tears falling in love again
how can i look to your eyes when i feel i should die
this was my world, but somehow you have found your way in
i dont know what to do

you found your way into the darkness with me
no one has ever done that
you put your hand on my cheek as i cry
you begin to cry with me
i ask you whats wrong
and all i hear is the soft gental beating of you heart
it scares me to think i have found someone
to think i have surched long and wide for someone
now that i have found you i don't know what to do
im so scared of hurting you

you told me how you feel
you said you love me
i feel so weak yet my heart beats so strongly
i finaly decide to look up to your eyes
i look away as they are so beautiful
you hurt me in a way that i have never felt
yet its in such a beautiful way
love is cold, it making me shake
you hold me in your arms to warm me
i place my hands on your back to say im sorry
i kiss your soft lips just so you know im here
this was my world...now the darkworld
its our world

love does hurt!!!!!
every wanted someone so bad and beong away from then killed you

wow skinner i have a rough idea who this poem it about...........lets just hope it dont take her a 100 yrs to wake up and find her prince........she is one lucky gal......

awww lukey im sure that the girl in this poem feels the same way......love is kinda scary......but can be very good..you should hold on to this love as it just might help with things right now.love is a key luke use it to unlock all your pain

* uses the key and makes the suffuring go away *

My final promise

i am your friend when the darkness takes you
yell for me and i will come running
when you have no one left to call
use your last breathe and call my name
when the pits of hell take over your soul
use my love to set you free........
When the tunnel shows you no light
use the love i gave you as a beacon
when you feal weak from your father strike
remember my soft words and your tears will dry
Whenever you need me just listen to your heart
Cause it will always guide it to me

As i sit at my pc and take in the news
I cry a soft cry..
Wasn't my love good enough
I think of the guy who loved me
Think of the girl he has chosen
Think of the time they now share
And i fall to the ground in floods of tears
The smile you gave me has now gone
the heart you made beat has no stopped
the girl you once loved is an empty shell
and the terror of it all sinks in......
I am a face with no smile
A body with no heart
and a soul with nowhere to go
Am i completely lost..........

walking away..

she gave me everything
her love, her heart, her soul
i didnt want it at first
i fell for her
now i must crush her
i dont wish to but you must leave my darkworld
i will be ok..darkness is home to me
you dont belong here with me
its because i feel in love that i cry
i didn't want anyone to get hurt
im a fool to belive that love is wonderful
all it brings is pain to the ones i care the most
i will never forget what she did for me
never forget she was the first to love me
never forget that i returned her love
and never forget that i broke her
if you go
i wont forget you
can't you see
that you will always be with me
even though i had to let you go
when theres nothing left to do
but..
walk away..

that poem was sad luke.........that all i have to say

omg casey thoses poems made me cry.. The last one from that kofmaster guy was different from the others. One moment he is saying to this girl hey i love you and now its all... Oh well you loved me and now i must crush you.........no offense but why are you so up yourself? Is it fun to break a girls heart. Lets hope one day your heart isn't the one being broken. God i hate men like you

Of course I have a heart; everyone have heart; but the thing is that my heart is hidden most of the time.
Here's another of my poems.

Rage
Rage is rushing through my soul
Thoughts mean nothing anymore
Legs are moving with their will
Fists are flying; they sense no fear

Blood is boiling in my veines
Heart is colder than ice cold tear
Someone is screaming can't you hear
Forgive me; I don't have my own will

Rage is a feeling you can't contol
And now is more powerfull than ever before.

btw: I like all the poems written in time from my last post.

This is one of White Lady's poem its called the blackiest of skies

I see the sun in your smile,
but you're as blue as the emotion
you sit in to show
your heart seems cold
dishonesty is as vivid like
the untruth that wraps your bone

there's a time to forgive and forget
the burns will heal from your sunset
sit by me a million miles away
what's wrong with the sun today?

I see the stars in your eyes,
but you're as black as the ocean
you swim in a pool of lies
I see a spotlight on the shadows
you've allowed yourself to be
I say hello to the sad goodbye

your heart seems cold tonight
open up my eyes
do not say goodbye
to fidelity's valued cry
run a razor through it... now forgive
throw it in the blackest sky... now forget

Any ideas?

I sit here and watch you
laugh and joke around
do you know that i'm here
do you even care
have you any idea what you do to me

I open my mouth and nothing comes out
what a fool i feel
do you have any idea that you fill my dreams
do you have any idea that you invade my thought
have you any idea what you do to me

what if i told you
would it seem foolish
you see i'm trepped in a whirlpool
with visions of us together
how come you have no idea what you do to me

Trapped

with all these feelings trapped up inside
i feel like a bird locked in a cage
will anyone ever let me out
or just stand there and watch
asi sing quietly my dying song of love

The confrontation

"look at me" I yell..." dont walk away, face me like a man dont run off like a boy.You say you love me...well here i am. What are you waiting for, an open invitation?I told before how i feel and i know you feel the same. So take me while you can....why must you play these games? Isnt my love enough for you? do you need others? So lets just cut the crap...........do you want me? yes or no?

Rain
Rain
Making its mark
Not knowing when it will come
Dripping slowly
Soon to be pouring without stop
Continuously it falls
Falling onto the world
Rain being peace
Peace being rain
Both seem to appear
At either the wrong or right time
Never in between
Never expected or expected nevertheless

Waves Of Memories
Waves upon waves crashing to make no sound
I sit on the ledge
Staring into the silver water
Cast by the luminous moon
I see- See a memory
Memories of the past
Engulfing my mind, my reality
The waves continue
Another memory: another wave
Thoughts flood my mind
Visions of the one
The one that I love
But can never have
My only memento-a dream
A dream lost so long ago
To think it will return but never it shall be
Only will it stay
Stay with the waves
The waves of memories

opposites

For sheer beauty becomes her
Ounce upon ounce of pure enduring devotion
Deep within a soul of grace, susceptive to a
remote world
Faithful. Loyal. She was what she was.
Contrary to her love outwardly.
Powerful and majestic, he willed her to his soul
No defense could be taken.
Now she met her match
Love became her. Everything was lost.
All she knew was owned by another:
Her complete opposite.

Heartache

Love drifted in
As any other emotion would do
But this emotion was not at all expected
It filled me with joy...with pain...with hope
Unimagineable feelings now controlled my
whole existence
never had I ever experienced such things
before
But soon they were stollen away from me
You loved another as well as I
But she did not return those feelings
I did
Without realizing what I was doing
And now I know my mistake
This love that drifted in was fake
Just a faux sensation now killed
That love however remains intwined in my
thoughts
Cant you see what youve done?
Just take it back and let me be.

I watched "Ten things i hate about you" last night i couldnt stop crying so i got my note book out and wrote this:-

I hate the fact that you're not here.
I hate when I think of you because it brings these tears.
I hate the fact that you're not around.
I hate it when I'm alone because I get so down.
I hate the fact that you are gone.
I hate thinking there's a chance I've done something wrong.
I hate the fact that you need your space.
I hate that there's no one else who can take your place.
I hate the fact that I let you slip away.
I hate that you're not my last call of the day.
I hate that you're the only one I let myself get close to.
But most of all, I hate all these things because I still love you

I thought of you today
And today i cried
I thought of things were
And how things should be
I cried because
I've never looked into your eyes
I've never felt you
Your arms around me
Or tasted you lips upon mine
I cried today because
I've never felt
Your hands touch my body
I cried to today
Because i love you and i cried
Mostly because i want you
In my life and close to me.