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the end

ohh !
it is over!
good!
great!
hehehe

Thats harsh punkyhermy! Shame on thou! The rules of the GenFic Area are that you are to not spam other writers!
Plus, I actually liked the story.

oh!
sorry!i was kiddin actually because i didn't even read it...i was just kiddin about th elenght of teh story

To be honest, it's not my cup of tea, but at least you have got the guts to show people your writings. Don't let negative remarks put you down, but don't ignore good advise .

Keep up the good work.

i liked it...but i dunno bout the ending but it was good

i thought it was great,but i'm not too sure about the ending!!

I think she might be dead......

Not my type of story, but I liked it.