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not that I know much about poetry, but I thought it was good.

Interesting, BG....does this come from deep within ?

the name is Lara, not BG

Written during PMS?

Ooops, sorry yerss.....sorry Lara.

Uh, my scroll went too fast. Yup, thats it. Not my fault.

IT'S NOT MY FAULT !!!!

i sense that Gundark is quite frightened at theis point

Hehehe. Just my best Lando impression.

and the moustache

No dont panic!
its cool Gundy, we all make mistakes some times.
no queeq it wasnt writen during PMS.
I'm just feeling a bit down lately thats all.
any one else got any thing to say?

you bet ya, but sometimes it is better not let it pass

hey! come on talk to me. I'm bored.
tell me whats on your mind!*note to self* I dont hink I should have said that! but never mind.*sigh*

right now I am thinking about how the clock can move faster. I am bored at work and the shitty weather is annoying

I thought you Gods with those metal helmets with horns liked bad weather...

we only make it

And give the rest of us frizzy hair...

no vidal sasoon

Bad hair days. Bald guys never have that problem. *gets clown gun, goes hunting bald guys*

but look at the other problems bald guys have

Like ?

you go hunting them, must be pretty tired of shampoo commercials. Wax aint to cool to bring to sleep overs ....

I never had a sleep-over with a bunch of bald guys.

ok guys heres another one which I was inspired to write by an emotional event that happened at school today.

Indescribable anger!
theres nothing like,
an indescribable rage!
nothing seems right,
not even my age!
the time,
the date,
the place I'm in,
all I can think about is whats within,
the anger,
the rage,
the page,
or the stage!
drama seems right for the mood I'm in,
to hurt some in frustration,
is the way out of my tempremetal distillation,
potent is my temper,
although now its worse than I remember,
but what incredable control I have over myself!
is that why I'm always left on the shelf?

sorry lara i cant b bothered to read it but i can guess wot it is about!!! ahhhhhh baby!

I still cant believe that she that to me though!
and all that over a lowsy smoke!

be a sport gund have a wax shower with a bunch of baldies

i no baby u shld have done it back!!! all ur sister is is a ponce!

Sorry finti - Gundy ain't that kind of sport.

Me no speak Brit teen talk.....

it sure aint english

well you are talking complete and utter giberish!
lets get back to the literature thanks!

her sister slapped her round the face and it upset her i was consoleing her!!

thanx for the consolidation BG..........................
........as I was saying, the literature?

kj isnt this great!! ive finished both my compositions!! i just need to upgrade them to get a higher mark!! and a new composition dosent have to be literature!!!

but the aim of the thread is english literature not music!
anyway I'm sure other people have something to say about my little writting spats!

English literature "Treasure Island"

NO! finti, I meant Poems! MY POEMS!

first its called new compositions hich can mean anything then u say eng lit which can b any type of eng writing starting from the scrawl u and me r writing to olden day mythalogical childrens stories and now u say YOUR poems!!!!! change the thread name if thats wot u want it to be love!!

actually, BG, it's just a title so people will recognise it, it's actually the first post that has meaning...

but the title must be correct anyways

and the title is correct: it's a new composition of Lara

but it can be a new composition by anyone

read the first post mah!!!

too lazy

Not too into poetry, but I thought the poem was good.

dont av a ggo at him *hets out large industrial water hose and sprays yerss stops and finds him cowering in the corner crying!*

your crule!*grabs yerss and locks him in a cupboard away from BG, then runs and jumps on to trampoline and start to do swivel hips*

Ow! so lock me up while you will have all the fun ???

swivel hips is borin trying doing front summies like i av 2!

no thanks, I dont think I wanna chance fallin' off of the bastard comtraption.

well then!

huh! not funny darlin'.

well dont try bein flashy den!

dont have a go at me for practicing, you've had more practice than I have any way so!
anyone wanna sing? feel free I'm bored.

how about in the end by linkin park!

go on then, give me a good long song! maybe several of their songs joined together?

a very cool song

i love it!

tres bien!Finti! go on then BG!

i tried so hard and got so far but in the end it dosent even matter...

I put my trust in you, pushed as far as I can go...

One thing I don't know why
It doesn't even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind I designed this rhyme
To explain in due time
All I know
Time is a valuable thing
Watch it fly by as the pendulum swings
Watch it count down to the end of the day
The clock ticks life away
It's so unreal
Didn't look out below
Watch the time go right out the window
Trying to hold on but didn't even know
Wasted it all just to
Watch you go
I kept everything inside and even though I tried it all fell apart
What it meant to me will eventually be a memory of a time when I tried

that is my fave song of the whole world well done mah!

oh walking on my turf are ya

huh??

i hope your having fun i thought i would write you a note to say hi

The jukebox has spoken...

*waits for fire & brimstone*

you wont be waiting long then!

The jukebox rules and so do I

SAD!

nah everything would be so cool with me at the wheel

hopefully we won't find it out

ditto wi that 1