dark1365
This is another one of my books, based on a video game. I chose Max Payne, because it has a unique thing about it..the film-noir thing, and the comic book scenes. Very good plot. Would make a good book.
Part One:The American Dream Prologue
Max Payne was a happy-go-lucky man, one of many in the United States of America. He considered himself lucky, because he had many friends, a beautiful wife, and a wonderful baby daughter. Max lived in a spacious home on the suburban side of town, or as the folks there referred to it, the "Jersey-side" of town. He had a steady job at the Police Department. The prospect of having such a great life, here in the 'States, was called the "American Dream".
One glorious day, he was at the Department, sorting out a case, when his best friend, Alex, came up to him.
"Hey, Max, want to come play cards tonight?"
Max smirked, and nodded."See this, Alex? Last cigarette. Bad for the wife and kids."He lit it, and took a long puff.Life was good, he thought.
The rest of the day was like any other, and he returned home in the evening. Night sewed its dark weave over New Jersey. He got home, and dumped his briefcase by the hat rack. Michelle, his wife, didn't hail him as usual today. Thinking that she might be upstairs, Max called. "Hey, honey, I'm home!" No one answered. He walked into the parlour, and swallowed.
A syringe crossmarked by a "V" was spray-painted on the wall. It was a poison needle, full of diabolical meanings. And it caused a horrible gut feeling to climb into his abdomen.
He took out his gun, a light Beretta, and strode forward cautiously. The kitchen and dining room had been blockaded off. The phone was ringing. Max picked it up.
"Hello? Who is this?"
"Is this the Payne residence?" A snooty female voice said.
"Yes...look, my home's been broken into. Call the police!"He said.
"I'm sorry, but I'm afraid i cannot help you now." She hung up.
Max slammed the phone down. It was obvious that his home had been broken into, so he holstered the handgun, and groped in the nearby closet for his Pump-Action shotgun. Michelle knew where it was, and the idea that she hadn't bothered to use it, and the idea of it nagged at him. He could only pray that she had grabbed the baby and ran to safety...somewhere.
Part One:The American Dream Prologue
Max Payne was a happy-go-lucky man, one of many in the United States of America. He considered himself lucky, because he had many friends, a beautiful wife, and a wonderful baby daughter. Max lived in a spacious home on the suburban side of town, or as the folks there referred to it, the "Jersey-side" of town. He had a steady job at the Police Department. The prospect of having such a great life, here in the 'States, was called the "American Dream".
One glorious day, he was at the Department, sorting out a case, when his best friend, Alex, came up to him.
"Hey, Max, want to come play cards tonight?"
Max smirked, and nodded."See this, Alex? Last cigarette. Bad for the wife and kids."He lit it, and took a long puff.Life was good, he thought.
The rest of the day was like any other, and he returned home in the evening. Night sewed its dark weave over New Jersey. He got home, and dumped his briefcase by the hat rack. Michelle, his wife, didn't hail him as usual today. Thinking that she might be upstairs, Max called. "Hey, honey, I'm home!" No one answered. He walked into the parlour, and swallowed.
A syringe crossmarked by a "V" was spray-painted on the wall. It was a poison needle, full of diabolical meanings. And it caused a horrible gut feeling to climb into his abdomen.
He took out his gun, a light Beretta, and strode forward cautiously. The kitchen and dining room had been blockaded off. The phone was ringing. Max picked it up.
"Hello? Who is this?"
"Is this the Payne residence?" A snooty female voice said.
"Yes...look, my home's been broken into. Call the police!"He said.
"I'm sorry, but I'm afraid i cannot help you now." She hung up.
Max slammed the phone down. It was obvious that his home had been broken into, so he holstered the handgun, and groped in the nearby closet for his Pump-Action shotgun. Michelle knew where it was, and the idea that she hadn't bothered to use it, and the idea of it nagged at him. He could only pray that she had grabbed the baby and ran to safety...somewhere.