Split Personality Track...rap

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This is another one of my songs, i made this about 4 days ago....it's undergone some lyrical changes in order for it to flow better, i've got an original beat for it and everything...please review this, any reviews are appreciated..good or bad...anything....thanks


Title: Split Personality Track

Intro:
113 and ObNOX is together at last
The first collaboration will no doubt last
Don't think to hard, don't go to college like shaq
Get your education, don't party, or you'll get lax
All this confusion, your time has past
Kinda like mase in the song 'welcome back"
Lines on top of the world, weight on atlas back
Call this right here 'Split Personality Track'

Verse1:
Do you hear pits of despair in this rap
Do you see me crying out on this track
I think i should, talk about more of elections
That is my base, i can't ****ing rap without them
I should thank Bush, for all he's done for this country
Dug it out a hole then dug it a new one
I like this war, i think it'll make some progress
Next up the palestinians verse the jewish
You think you god? Doing his work, being his buddy, being his crew?
Like crusaders, spanish terminate jews
Take a lesson from the textbook of history
But you failed that class, high school, yale, and now the country.
Bush/Cheney 04 roll with punches, throw some back
Avoid healthfare, welfare, jobs, tax
Break from the issues but be sure to mention iraq
This war wasn't supposed to be a monstrosity
I supported your war, but i should of voted for diplomacy
Now I see clearly, and spent time to looked at this
Bush your ****ing good at one thing, being a coke addict
Oval office, disgraced with the Mary-Jane
Pipe it up, hemp, weed, columbian cocaine
Born under the sun, under the stars, under the shade
Blow some fire, breathe it in, breathe it this way
that's the ****ing world, realizing your agenda is meant to sway


Chorus:
Mixed up, ticked off, fast stunner, a road runner
A sheetrocker, bank invester, a hostage standoffer
A murderer who likes to kill the rhymes
A black kid, with no ****ing street ties (aren't you suprised!?)
A political, an encyclopedia master
A dominant figure, histories Alexander
A testament to a loud obnoxious rap
Call this a 'split personality track'


Verse2:
So nigga you wanna cry out, express your rage by the double team
Like bush and laura, killing a man with their chrysler sebring
Can't you hear em now, a mother forced to give birth screams
You'll never win our hearts, soldiers lives cannot be redeemed
You ****** *****, i bet you liked that word huh
cause you wanna use it lot and in your acceptance speech dubya.
Haters will hate, and political players will play
The soft money white house taking over tragic campaigns
You've got a fan, lay out your freedom 'PLAN', spell it out
Cause those negros, poor people, and latinos
Would like to know, how you plan on treating the ghetto
I'm fortunate enough to quietly live through the dark times
I can't say the same for my folks, my gramps is about to die
Maybe i can't speak for the streets, but i'll find my way around
I'll deliver rhymes with intellectual sounds
I'll beef up these lines, can't conform, no bounds
I won't pretend i grew up in the ghetto and stood tall
I'm glad i didn't, i'm glad i won't smoke crack and fall
Hey i guess it was worth it to have an education after all


Chorus:
Mixed up, ticked off, fast stunner, a road runner
A sheetrocker, bank invester, a hostage standoffer
A murderer who likes to kill rhymes
A black kid, with no ****ing street ties (aren't you suprised!?)
A political, an encyclopedia master
A testament to a loud obnoxious rap
Call this a 'split personality track'

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6 views and no responses....please people...any crits are welcome

<<Solo>>
hmm....not bad....it's good enough to be better then a lot of rap.

113
Thanks...can i get anymore reviews ..please...it only takes a few seconds....

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