what do you think of these lyrics?

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mindbugaling

KMC
good lyrics- be great in a little smoky jazz club- piano and double bass maybe? Can just imagine it...

Kate xx

burlyman
eek! smokin' cool

mindbugaling
thanks; the smokey jazz club feel is kinda what i was longing for.

cermiestar
oh this sounds very jazzy! i am a big jazz fan....this sounds good! keep writing!

mindbugaling
thanks guys!

Sir Bob III
very nice

smittenkitten
By "furnish inside those chestnut eyes," do you mean you're decorating the interior of her eyeballs?

Maybe you're thinking of a different word.

-Smitten Kitten-

mindbugaling
wel the explanation of that comes later in the song

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