Haiku for all
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Imperial_Samura
Just thought I would see if anyone felt like doing an odd spot of Haiku, or talking about it.
"Haiku is a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables."
The moment two bubbles
are united, they both vanish.
A lotus blooms.
By - Kijo Murakami
Mr Zero
That first line is not haiku material.
The-mo-ment-two-bub
Imperial_Samura
I know, its a Japanese translation, it is more difficult translating into English, or doing it in English due to the very different word structure and syntax........... this is more correct........
First autumn morning:
the mirror I stare into
shows my father's face.
Mr Zero
Thats great. Thats a peach.
Imperial_Samura
Yes, its always impressed how monumental concepts and emotions could be so skilfully condensed.
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