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anyone???

dont make me beg

Good intro...lets see about the rest. I'm not a fan of first-person, though.

its pretty good... keep going

I like it. Like dark I'm not a big 1st-person person, but it's forming up well.

im interested keep going

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Thats what i think about your story!

Very good beginning. Please continue.

so wait stealth... is that supposed to mean bad or good?

maybe you should re-read what i said, god are you slow????

okay.. bad but funny? or its so bad that its funny? u have people laughing....

Thats completley the opposite of what im saying here read this

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Sike hotsauce im just playin keep going. post more i like it. I also like the title alot it sounds so........ cool

okay good... i was getting jus a bit confused...

Good. Keep going.