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part but any feedback would be loved . Please no one add anything to the story.

I walked over to the door and found it to be unlocked.
"Kash the door is unlocked" I said confused
"What unlocked well where is everyone?" Kash questioned
I didn't have the answer. I was worried however, what if something had happened while we were late. I looked out the window by the stairs and saw cars but no people. Something was wrong there wasn't anyone about.
"Kash what are we going to do..where is everyone?" I asked trying to not let my concern come out of me
The door one floor below us slambed open. I jumped as kash looked down to see what it was.
"Kantar....Kantar wh-whats that?" She whispered
I looked down the stairs and saw a man covered in bited and cuts, he groaned and roared but mamaged to walk normaly. His cloths were mudded and covered in blood as well and torn and riped.
"I donno but i ain't gonna wait and find out" I whispered " Come on lets hide"

i voted not to go overboard about only because there were some grammar mistakes and i had no idea what you were talkin about. maybe you could write a sort of preface or prologue that explains a little bit more about the sample.

The same. Perhaps if you used longer setences? You've only really given us examples of your ability in writing dialogue, so maybe some descriptive parts of the book as well?

What is the storyline of the book, btw?