The Haiku Game
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Telperaca
Got this idea from another forum...
In case you don't know what a haiku is, it's a 3 line poem, and the only rules is that the first line is 5 syllables, the second line is 7 syllables, and the third line is 5 syllables.
Example:
water
Water flowing on
Down the crystal-like river
But it is wet too.
So what happens is one says a word, and the next person writes a Haiku inspired by that word.
Example:
"Water
Water flowing on
Down the crystal-like river
But it is wet too.
~ Next Topic: Sky
"Floating in the blue
Like many boats on the sea
Live clouds in the sky
Next Topic: . . ."
Next Topic: Winter
Telperaca
Did you read the first post properly?
It explains hot to play!
nitro-swicked
winter is kicking
snof is flowing
my love is growing :s
was that ne gud?
Telperaca
It's good except the second line is suppose to have 7 syllables, but yours only has 5!
nitro-swicked
winter is kicking
snow is not trickling
telpie is now thinking
better?
Telperaca
3rd line has 6 syllables!
AvP
i think i'll skip this babe, too complicated
Telperaca
What do you think of this?
Telperaca
It's not...you just have to read the first post properly!!
nitro-swicked
urgh telp ur stressin me.
ok here we go
winter is kicking
snow is not trickling
im now thinking
Telperaca
winter is kicking = 5
snow is not trickling = 6
im now thinking = 4
the second line: the snow is not trickling
Final:
winter is kicking
the snow is not trickling
my love is growing
There!!
Telperaca
~New Topic~
Star(s)
nitro-swicked
i see a silver star
its here not there we dont care
we like to play fair
Telperaca
i see a silver star = 6 syllables
its here not there we dont care = 7 yay
we like to play fair = 5
Telperaca
we saw silver stars
shining brightly as my car
radiating love...
Telperaca
FINAL:
we saw silver stars
shining brightly as my car
scattered around the sky
?
nitro-swicked
v-12 or v-8
we escape before its 2 late
into the night light
Telperaca
Middle line is 8 syllables...
Telperaca
(btw: You can pich the next topic
)
nitro-swicked
erm....grass
Telperaca
As green as the Gunk,
Is churns in the four stomachs.
Waiting to be used
Er...?
chelsea17
i'll just read these
Telperaca
*pokes*
New topic:
Sleep!
Raz
what i always like
every starry moonlit night
is heavy eye shut
Yeah, I know I'm good!
English Moosette
Second line has 8 syllables smartass
Closed them so tightly
Squeezed as if in deep slumber
Still, the bear, it knew.....
Raz
I count 7. How did you get 8?
English Moosette
ev-er-y.... pronounce it aloud....
English Moosette
But if you say it aloud, it sounds wrong like that cry I'm doing Eng Language, I know I'm wrong. But I prefer it as three.....
Telperaca
I got it as three sylabbles too!!
Damn Raz!
English Moosette
ev ~ er ~ y
big gay kirk
darkness comes slowly,
dipping above the skyline.
eyes, limbs, heart heavy.
big gay kirk
and btw, here in England (where English was invented) we say "evry"... two syllables... just as "cholmondoley" has only two syllables... its the pronunciation that counts in haiku, not the spelling...
D-Double
English people know
How you're supposed to drink tea
pinkies out, proper
chelsea17
wait, i got poked and i didn't know it
D-Double
.....no comment.....
chelsea17
whats that supposed to me?
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