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Smodden
Shake the splintered hand of despair
Hold tightly the precious, giving repairs
To others you'll find, something important
In a thousand ways, /living each day,/something enormous
Something to hold, something to give
You give it all...to risk it all...and receive it all...
How do you breathe? the only thing that keeps you alive
is keeping to much? Take back from me, all you took away
I'll just fight back harder anyway.
This test we face, each and every day,
makes you stronger, in every way.
They'll break you down in your weakest days
they'll shake you down in your concrete cage...
You'll see you again, when your back to the start
and finish in the silence, to the rhythm of your heart
Always an exit a way to choose,
don't have to let it be the only one who rules...
You can take this time, to reflect on now...
and how your so much better with a smile than a frown.
When the dark in your room seems better than the light
and the person inside beats yourself in a fight...
When your alone and everyone isn't there
and the thought of pain seems like an answer to prayer
Give yourself another chance, to be ok,
and pray to God almighty for another day.
-Smodden


Not a very recent one.

Trickster
Didn't know you were religous, Smod. I did like the poem, and I really liked how you ryhmed it.

drunk_nazgul
Hey, that was great!

Captain REX
Very good, Smodden! I liked it *puts approval stamp*.

Smodden
thank you, thank you....big grin

shadowy_blue
OMG..that's so great. cry

You're really good at this, and I mean it. *wipes away tear*

*saves to favorites* big grin

*decides to visit this forum more often* shifty

That's great. thumb up I love it. Keep up the good work. happy

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