er...sorry, my intent is not a cheap bump here.....
I thought i'd check back in and see what people thought. i see about 200 reads on this so far, but no one's commented. so one of two things here: either it isn't worth commenting on, or when i asked people to please not add to it, people took this as a "do not add a reply here" request. er.....either opinion is legit, don't get me wrong. but....just wanna know how I should interpret this. is it crap? or decent? anyone? thanks!
the author.
ps, i have added to it a bit, but once again, i'm lousy at finishing stuff, especially longer stories like this one probably would be.
