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Who can write the best action script for a fight scene in Episode III you can write the whole part or just a portion this is just for fun and ideas. like

36. INT. INVISIBLE HAND - CORRIDOR

SUPPER BATTLE DROIDS exit from the slide door they turn
and spot ANAKIN and OBI-WAN running up the hall. The droids
open fire on the two Jedi. ANAKIN spins around and ignites his
lightsaber using great skills he deflects the shots.....

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darth sidious rose from the shadows and shot lightning and the jedi master yoda. yoda got fried and the sith had him for dinner. the end

I could think of something better than what I just said.

Please be serious about this and use script symbols

What do you mean script symbols?

Like ... INT. , EXT.

42.INT.DULE-PLATFORM B

ob1 and anikan skywalker duled along
the stone platform.

ob1:anikan it dose'nt have to be this way

ani:it's all your fault

ob1:if you come back now you can be on the council

ani:i serve a new master now

Anikan lasses out at ob1 but ob1 forces
him back down to the rocks below.

INT. PALPATINE EXECTIVE OFFICE

DARTH SIDIOUS lashes at MACE, pushing him in
defense. MACE strikes back but SIDIOUS parries
the blow and spins around putting deadly force on
the attack, MACE stagers from the hit. SIDIOUS
takes the advantage and extends his hand, crystal
blue lightning shoots out from the tips of his fingers
MACE is thrown across the room, crashing with the
wall.
SIDIOUS
Foolish Jedi do you really think you can beat me

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all the LASSES in that DULE were so well described

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125. EXT. SENATE ROTUNDA

YODA fliped over the pillar SIDIOUS angrily swung his
lightsaber at the aged Jedi but YODA was two quick, landing
on a clearing he raised his hand just in time to block a
deadly stream of lightning. SIDIOUS jumped in a flash
of eye and landed a few feet from YODA he pursed the attack

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EXT. MUSTAFUR


Anakin hangs limply by the side of the volacano as Obi Wan tries to get some sense into him

Obi: Anakin, it doesnt have to be like this. come back to the jedi order or you will die

Anakin: NEVER

Obi: please! dont do this

Anakin: I will never return with you!!!!

Obi: then....then i have no choice

Obi wan ignites his lightsaber blade and bends down and cuts off anakins arms. Anakin falls into the volcano base screaming and is consumed by molten Lava. however anakin has tapped into the dark side to stop his damged body breaking away and to keep himself barely alive. Tears sit on obi wans eyes as he walks off toward the hanger...

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INT. The duel

Anakin continues his attack on Obi-wan. Obi-wan manages to back
Anakin off with a force push and begins pleading with Anakin.

Obi-wan: "Anakin, I order you to back down! search your feelings, let go of your hate"

Anakin: "My Hate is my alley now"

Obi-wan: " You are a Jedi!"

Anakin: (Anakin dis-ignites his light-saber) "You are mistaken I am no longer a Jedi, (Anakin throws his light-saber at Obi-wan's feet, and pulls out his red light-saber) my new master will show me the true nature of the force"

(Obi-wan has a shocked, and displeased look on his face)

Obi-wan:"I'm sorry Anakin, but I must bring you down"

Anakin: (Anakin gives an evil grin as his hate increases to an ultimate high transforming his eyes to yellow as Anakin leaps towards Obi-wan) "Aaahhh"

INT. EXECUTIVE OFFICE - SPIRES

MACE WINDU lays mortally wounded at the bottom of
a flight stairs, his left shoulder is marked with a deep
gash, he lies in a pool of his own blood. At the top of
the stairs DARTH SIDIOUS deactivates his lightsaber
and descends he stops a few feet from the hurt Jedi
Master.


DARTH SIDIOUS:Now Master Windu you shall meet your end

DARTH SIDIOUS slowly extends his hand at the fallen Jedi.


MACE WINDU:Y..You...will m...meet your..f..fate when....it..c...comes

An evil laughter fills the room and a deadly storm of lightning is
unleashed.

Um, what does INt and EXT mean?

Internet, Extended.

lol I don't know.

I thought it might have something to do with the location, Exterior and Interior, perhaps.

INT: 65. No Title.

In his sleek new starship Obi-Wan heads toward the planet Mustafar. On his radar he detects two living objects. Obi-Wn immediately suspects it's Anakin but doesn't have a very good idea of who the other one is. He decided to land near the two living objects (one of which he suspects is Anakin) but still to where they could not see him. As Obi-Wan landed on the fiery hellish planet and stepped out of the cockpit of his star ship he felt a very sickening feeling, a disturbance in the force. He immediately thought Anakin had gone out in some sort of rage. As Obi One started running toward the two living objects he detected on his radar in his starship the sickening feeling started to become worse. When he got close enough to see who the two living objects were he noticed he was right about Anakin being their but the other human was someone he did not expect to see, or at that expect to see the way she was being treated. It was padme, it was a horrible site only because Anakin was using the force to choke her. As padme fainted to the ground Obi-Wan screamed out "Nooooo"! Anakin immediately let go of padme and ignited his light-saber. Obi-Wan too ignited his light saber and ran toward Anakin and a great fight between the to Jedi friends broke out.

EXT. Mustafur (on a sandstone bridge)

the bridge was tearing apart like an asteroid hit it. obi wan felt the ground break beneath his feat. he jumped forward and got off just in time before the hard earth plummeted into the lava below. anakin put his hand up and farce pushed obi wan off the ledge. obi wan managed to catch onto the edge in time with his middle finger. he just swayed there. he brought his hand up and held onto it with both hands. he prepared to pull him self up but a foot crashed down on both hands. obi wan felt the pain jolt across his body.

Anakin: You should not have come

Obi: anakin....ani...a...p-p-p-please dont do this...

Anakin: I have a new master now. i hope your death is a long and painful one.

Obi wan cried out in pain. mustafur started shaking. obi wans eyes turned red with furry. lava started to rise above its limits and obi wan flipped onto the ledge with ease. he called his saber to him and attacked anakin with furry. so fast that anakin had trouble defending most of the blocks. obi wan jumped up and kicked anakin several times really hard. anakin fell on his back.

Anakin: but...how is that possible. im stronger than you

obi wan just realised that he was engulfed in the dark side of the force. obi calmed himself down. his eyes changed back to normal. and mustafur stopped shaking.

Obi: i dont want to fight you

Anakin: doesnt look like you have much of a choice.

Obi: then.. im sorry

lava broke through the ground behind anakin and came down on him like an avalanche. anakin was gone from the earth. consumed by the lava and destroyed. the chosen one was destroyed. or so obi wan thought...

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179. INT. STAR DESTROYER - MAIN BRIDGE

GRAND MOFF TARKIN, EMPEROR PALPATINE stand on the bridge
of the STAR DESTROYER looking out the wide triple rectangle window,
behind them a crew of IMPERIAL OFFICERS move about. A squad of
CLONE TROOPERS are stationed on the bridge, two of them stand on
either sides of a door, this door rises and DARTH VADER enters several
officers turn dumbfound at the unknown figure. CAPTAIN KANECE approaches VADER.

CAPTAIN: Only Imperial Members are permitted on the main brid...

VADER grabs the man by the neck with one hand and flings him across the room, the captain hits a computer terminal and lies motion less

DARTH VADER joins THE EMPEROR along with GRAND MOFF TARKIN the evil trio look out the construction of the DEATH STAR. THE EMPEROR pulls out a hologram of the plans for the ultimate weapon.

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EXT. SPACE

ANAKIN'S STAR FIGHTER maneuvers into the trenches of the passing
ships. Nearby a STAR DESTROYER explodes, the froce of the blast sends a wave across the surrounding area. The starship splits in two half's and breaks away.

CUT TO. JEDI STAR FIGHTER - COCKPIT

ANAKIN raises his head to observe the blast.

EXT. SPACE

A TRI-FIGHTER appears from the left hand side. It dives straight at ANAKIN'S STAR FIGHTER

Okay, here it goes:

INT. PADME'S VERENDAH, NABOO

A JEDI STARFIGHTER LANDS IN A SMALL PLATFORM, THE CABIN OPENS AND OBI-WAN KENOBI GOES OUT. PADME IS SURPRISED, SHE WASN'T EXPECTING HIM, AFTER WHAT ANAKIN SAID TO HER.

OBI WAN: Padme, i'm glad to see that you're fine. Have you seen Anakin lately.

PADME THINKS BEFORE ANSWERING. SHE TAKES HER TIME.

PADME: No, no. I haven't. Why?

OBI WAN: He is been followed by the Council.
THEN, HE SENSES PADME'S TRUE FEELING, SHE IS WORRIED.

OBI WAN: Ohh, I see. But why don't you wan to tell me the truth, if I find him on time we can stop this menace.

PADME: Menace?

OBI WAN: He has turned to the dark side, he and Supreme Chancellor are planing to strike against the Republic.

PADME: He didn't tell me that. Ok, i'll tell yu, but with one condition.

OBI WAN: Go ahead.

PADME: I have to go with you, maybe, together, we can turn him.

OBI WAN THINKS BEFORE ACTING. HE TRIES TO LOOK AT THE FUTURE, BUT HE CAN'T.
FINALLY, HE ANSWERS.

Good Work Zavin

EXT. MUSTAFUR


THE LARGE NABOO STAR CRUISER LANDS ON THE LANDING PLATFORM SURROUNDED BY LAVA. A DARK FIGURE CAN BE SEEN AT THE ENTRANCE TO A CAVE. THE DOOR TO THE CRUISER OPENS AND PADME WALKS OUT.

Padme: anakin, youve got to get out of here, obi wan come looking for you but

Anakin: obi wan? did you tell him where i was? because if you did...

Padme: no, no ani i didnt tell him anything

ANAKIN SENSES THIS IS HER TRUE ANSWER BUT SEEMS SUSPICIOUS

Anakin: why do you want me to leave then

Padme: im not sure i convinced them. Ani, ive got to ask you something

PADME'S EYES STARTED FILLING WITH TEARS

Padme: is it true youve turned to the dark side?

ANAKIN KISSES PADME ON THE FORE HEAD AND THEN ANSWERS

Anakin: Yes

PADME LOOKS HORRIFIED AS SHE TURNS AWAY AND STARTS CRYING

Anakin: im sorry i didnt have a choice, Palpatine has offered me more power than even yoda can ever feel, if i go back now theyll treat me as a todler, THEY DESERVE TO DIE! THE LOT OF THEM!!!

JUST THEN, OBI WAN WALKS OUT OF THE STAR SHIP AND STARTS APPROACHING ANAKIN

Obi Wan: anakin stop! your going mad

ANAKIN TURNS TO PADME

Anakin: you brought him here

Padme: no...NO i didnt even know he was on board

Anakin: YOU LIAR!! YOU TOLD ME YOU DIDNT TELL HIM I WAS HERE!! YOU SWORE TO ME

Padme: no i didnt know...

PADME CAN FEEL HER THROAT CLOSING IN. ANAKIN IS STARTING TO FORCE CHOKE HER. OBI WAN SENSE WHAT IS GOING ON AND HE IGNITES HIS LIGHTSABER AND CHARGES AT ANAKIN, ANAKIN THROWS PADME TOWARD A WALL AND SHE GETS KNOCKED OUT. ANAKIN DODGES OBI WANS SABER STIKE AND DRAWS HIS LIGHTSABER AND THE DUEL BEGINS...

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correction: That's the next part of my script gone

Correction: That was the next part of my script.

What?

It was a joke zavin.

INT.YODAS PRIVATE QUARTERS
YADDLE:Yoda show me that new meditation move
YODA Straddles YADDLE against himself while they make love and then ANIKAN SKYWALKER walks in and decides that because of this site of his two mentors that he should slaughter the remaining JEDI so they dont have two learn this new meditation YODA stole from ANIKAN taught PADME on his honeymoon.

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EXT. MUSTAFAR PLATFORM

ANAKIN parries a strike from OBI-WAN and charges forward
OBI-WAN goes onto the defense, he blocks ANAKIN'S hate filled
slashes with great effort due to the intense power the Sith is able
to draw. They battle to the edge of the platform a volcano crater
lies below.

ANAKIN: You should not have brought her here!

OBI-WAN: She wanted to come Anakin! she cares about you.

ANAKIN: If she did she would not have turned against me.

OBI-WAN: You turned against yourself!!!

ANAKIN swings at OBI-WAN, who parries the blow. ANAKIN stargers
from the deflection. OBI-WAN takes his chance and kicks ANAKIN of
platform into the volcano below. Before he plunges his lightsaber drops

ANAKIN: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

ANAKIN is consumed by the lava, his skin rips and his flesh molds.
The volcano erupts blocking the view. OBI-WAN runs from the deadly
lava as he runs he picks up ANAKIN'S lightsaber.

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INT. PADME APARTMENT

Here eyes filled with sadness and her expression one of
disbelif PADME turned to the Jedi next to here she was clearly
in pain

PADME: What did you say?

OBI-WAN: He...He he fell to the dark side.

PADME: Your lying. He said that MASTER WINDU tried to kill Palpatine

OBI-WAN: Yes MASTER WINDU did but only because PALPATINE is a sith!
and now PALPATINE has turned ANAKIN.

PADME bursts in tears nearby R2 sadly chirps. C-3PO lays a gentle hand on his fellow droid to comfort him. OBI-WAN looked away as a tear escaped his eyes.

PADME: Take me to him!

Nice one!!

INT. Palpatines Private Office

MACE WINDU BARGES IN WITH 3 OTHER JEDI

Mace: Palpatine this madness has ended!

Palpatine: Master Windu i do not know what you are talking about

Mace: I know who you really are! you are the Dark Lord of the Sith!

PALPITINE THEN CHANGES INTO SIDIOUS. HIS FACE BEGINS TO WRINKLE AND HIS EYES BEGIN TO GLOW WITH A POWER SO EVIL IT WOULD SHOCK THE OPPONENT TO EVEN lOOK EYE TO EYE. AND THEN HE DREW A SABER WITH GLOWED RED AND THE 4 JEDI DREW THEIR SABERS!

*Sidious hits windu's saber so hard Master Windu flys back and hits a wall. Then 2 of the jedi come at the dark lord. Sidious cut the one jedi in half and did a backstab on one of the jedi that was sneeking up on him. The last of the other 2 jedi was eletracuted to death and then it came down to Lord Sidious and Mace Windu*

*They fought until Anikan enters the room Sidious withdraws his light saber and Bows to Mace Windu pleading for his life*

Sidious: Please Master Windu dont kill me!!

Mace: Anikan he is that dark Lord of the SITH!!!

*Anikan is silent and he walks up to the Others with his saber drawn. He Faces sidious and acts like he is about to strike and then all of the sudden he stabs master windu in the stomach.Lord Sidious rose from his knees.

Sidious: Anikan Skywalker, you are now known as DARTH VADER!!

INT. INVISIBLE HAND - MAIN BRIDGE

ANAKIN and OBI-WAN run in igniting their lightsabers at entry
GENERAL GRIEVOUS turns around to face them as does COUNT
DOOKU. The surrounding crew of the ship looks on in awe as
the two Jedi approach the Sith and Droid General.

GENERAL: GRIEVOUS: Well well...who do we have here.

ANAKIN: Cut talk GRIEVOUS where is the Channcleor.

GENERAL: You dare speak to me like that Jedi!

OBI-WAN: He trying to intimidate us don't listen

ANAKIN: We! speak for your self OBI-WAN

COUNT DOOKU: Well I can see not much has changed sine our last encounter

ANAKIN: Or so you think old man.

COUNT DOOKU: Put life where your mouth is young fool and face me.

ANAKIN: Your on DOOKU!!!

PART TWO!!!! COMING SOON

INT. ROCK PLATFORM OVER LAVA

Obi-Wan: Why, Anakin? This way will never protect her. It will bring only further death and torment.

Anakin: No! The Sith way is the way of power! I will destroy those who would take her from me. I will destroy you.

Obi-Wan: And you will destroy Padme.

Anakin: It doesn't matter! Then I'll bring her back! I won't ever be a slave again! Not to the Jedi Order, and not to fate!

Obi-Wan: You will always serve. As long as you are of the Sith, you will never be your own man. Know that, and that it is never too late to come back. Remember repentance, Anakin.

Anakin: Your doubletalk means nothing to me. Now, as always before, you know nothing. You are weak. Now fight, it will be over soon.

Obi-Wan: