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Oh wow! These are superb!! Seriously, they have such depth and seeming significance, I'm going to have to read them all again

Woooo! Those poems rule!

I especially liked the sonnets, and the riddle (was it the brain?)

Yeah, or the mind? Well done Trickster

Syren, are you serious or sarcastic about my poems?

Syren, I suppose you would say the same thing if you read a Sonnet or other poem by Shakespeare - 'seeming significance'. Just because you don't understand a poem, or because it looks complicated on the surface, doesn't meen the author is trying to make it seem significant. Shakespear's sonnets are mostly utterly hard to comprehend, but I don't say it's 'seeming significant', I try to read it a couple more times in order to understand what he wanted to say, and in the end I do and a whole new world opens up.

By your comment, you're merely exhibiting your own shameless ignorance.

I'm utterly serious, as you will find in my axpanatory PM. I apologise profusely for any offence I have caused in my unwise choice of words Although, you could have been a little more polite before jumping to conclusions, you're portraying yourself as having a complex

Um, I wasn't saying that it only appeared significant.... I probably used the wrong word. The context in which I made that comment was not intentionally negative, I apologise if you read it that way. Please try to remember that due to this being a forum on which we can only read one another's written word, there is no possible way to ascertain exactly what people mean when confusion arises over words used, or statements made.

Oh wow! These are superb!! Seriously, they have such depth and seeming significance, I'm going to have to read them all again

This comment was made in complete seriousness, if I were to find your poems unsatisfactory I would simply tell you. I believe in constructive criticism but I found no flaws in your work, I truly appreciated your talent. By 'seeming significance' I mean 'apparent' or 'obvious', in that the underlying messages in the poem were excellently conveyed. Ok?

I am very sorry for having misinterpretted your post. I appologize once again. Sorry if I maybe apppeared a bit crazy.

It's ok, though you did give me a fright, I hate it when I don't explain myself properly I do, however, have it firmly lodged in the back of mind NEVER to mess with you

Don't worry, I enjoy women messing with me...especially messing with me under the blankets, if you know what I mean. The poet should strive to be poetic in every aspect of his life, even if things get dirty

blushing Oh, you

Oh, you
Oh, me
Oh, my!
Oh, no!
Oh, yes!
Oh, yes!
Yes! Yes! Yes! Aaaaaaah!.......aaaahaaaa........

Wow! There goes another poem.

Can we call that Climax?

Climax? Yes, if you want to - you dirty mind The poetic and the erotic.....Did you perhaps meant Orgasmic, but was a little reserved in your choice of words?

No.... for me, the orgasm usually lasts a little longer The climax being the tip of the orgasm, ergo, your short but sweet poem

I bet my orgasms last longer than yours! "The climax being the tip of the orgasm, " How about The climax being the tip of the object which caused the orgasm?

Could be, could be..... hmm, don't you just adore our conversations? Nothing is taboo, it's extremely refreshing I suggest, however, that we concentrate more on our poetry..... this is, after all, a poetry forum, not a porno

But life itself is poetry!? No. You're right...back to poetry now.

The Climax

The climax is in sight!
The climax is here!
The climax has gone!

May the friction to and fro
always cure us of our woe...

Fabulous!! So quick, so abrupt, but also so goddamn true!!

Well, I don't waste time. Viva quickies! Sorry, I just had to.

Philosophicus....WOW. like honestly WOW! I cannot begin to explain how absolutely amazing your work is. I can only dream that my poems will one day come close to yours in terms of structure, deapth and meaning.
Very impressive. Keep it up.

pray - Kosta

Thanks, it really means a lot for me when someone else find meaning in my poems, 'cause not many people does. It makes me very happy when I succeed in conveying a feeling or a thought successfuly in the poetic form.

Thank you again.