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i came up these in my head in like 5 seconds do the same and put em down!

Old dog sitting and loving
Its face growing white its eyes dim
Old dog sleeping and dieing...

In time we shall tell
will you be there at my bridge
Lets cross together as one

there are just two i came up with in a snap of my fingers crit all you want it wont do you a bit of good

Ok, first of all, well done..... Haiku's are short but stubborn Depending on the structure you decided to use I can't really give a fair comment.... and also, no need to get so defensive straight away, the point of criticism is that it's constructive.

There's another thread like this alreadY!

Where? Can we have the link please Telpz?