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Title: Mistakes
Author: Neobi
Spoilers: Jedi Apprentice 6 and Jedi Apprentice 16, very minor spoilers.
Summary: Lets just say it is going be a long line of mistakes.

// = Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan bond
italicized = thought
** = From the book (beginning and ending)

Disclaimer: All names and planets, except Tikatee and a few others, are part of Lucas Books.

Hope you like it.

~Neobi

Hello? Anyone there? Any comments?

~Neobi

Good story !!!

Thanks for sharing it with us !

uh...interesting, but I don't see the point (to put it bluntly) ...is this just some of your fanfiction?????

Yep, pretty much. It did ok at another forum and thought I would try it here. So far I'm not to sure I will keep putting it up here.

~Neobi

Nice story.

You like to type a lot in one post don't you?

Kind of at the other forum the fans that read your story would eat you alive if your posts are short.

~Neobi

What forum?....and is that a threat?...a promise?...or just an observation?

Well, then I'll have to make sure to be longwinded

Force.net, and I don't quiet understand, is what a threat or a promise?

~Neobi

Being eaten alive b/c of posting short......anyway I was J/K...I tend to be sarcastic at times..don't mind me

Don't worry I won't and yes, if you are not careful they will eat you alive.

~Neobi

hmm...remind me to steer clear of them....
so when the next chapter of your story come out?

When ever you want, I want, you know when ever. I could put it up now if you want.

~Neobi

So how many chapters is your fan fic?

it's very impressif, but I'm not going to read it all, I'm too lazy for that, sorry

Its a work in progress.

~Neobi

Oh, so it could get to be around 50+ chapter's if you're not done with the story and want to explain more?

actually it could go on forever if Neobi wants to keep it going that long.....I hope not, but so far I like it...errr most of it

What part don't you like?

The part where Obi wan is not the innocent little boy....

Oh

yea....I was like "oh MY"

Obi-wan wanted a child

How could he want a child? He knows that's against the code.

I never said he wanted a child. But he knows he can't change the past and what he did. He is willing to accept the bad in order to make it good.

~Neobi

I'm glad this is just fanfiction.....no offense to the author....I do like the story....

Same here.

No offence taken. And thank you. So when would you guys like the next part?

~Neobi

Right now if possible

ohhh...a cliffhanger....what's next?

You'll see...

~Neobi

go on....

What's "//"

// = Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan bond

oh...talking throught he force?

Yep

Interesting......

It's been awhile Neobi.

Yep, sorry about that. If you want the next part just tell me and I'll post it as soon as I can.

~Neobi

Good story. I like writing stories myself, although I don't write Star Wars.

This reminds me of the Witch in the LOTR forum here...

So, who wants me to get back to making a second thread about my story where every body says "Wait till later, I'm too lazy to read it" ?

Good story ! I'm enjoying it.

Back when people cared about what was important.