Passion!
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finti
Wisdom is the accumulative effects
of fear and loss.
By the clumsy limbs of human
incapability,
the pathetic, quiet resolution
in acceptance of
the mind's nothingness being
a base solid form
of cerebral protein
And ultimately devoured
by the primordial intestines
of Nature herself!
Thus it is a ridiculous condition
to be both scared and amused by...
KharmaDog
Actually I thought it was kind of self important with a lack of true insight. It seems as though it was written in order to be a good poem instead of written with any heart. Too by the numbers I'd say.
But I still think you're a great guy Finti, it's just that your last few poems have been of rather low quality for your intellect.
Misty Girl
I really like these poems. They are intense and full of life. They exhibit a sense of deep contemplation.
Keep up your great talent, Player!
finti
something you wear on your feet, and player
Coldfire
I thought that those were good!
finti
not really, just a huge ego
KharmaDog
Originally posted by finti
not really, just a huge ego
And a pathetic desire to be recognized and revered for mediocre accomplishments.
Coldfire
You guys are soooo nice there *rolls eyes*
peterKSL
that's what happens when jealousy takes hold...
misha
sweety this work is fantastic!
keep up the good work clap
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