you're somebody, i'm not

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silentsuicide16
hey peoples...i havent been here in a while...but anyways....i wrote this poem called you're somebody, i'm not and i wanted to know what you think about it....love it, hate it, anything else....peace <3 Kelly

you're somebody, i'm not

you're just like them.
you know that, right?
you look the same, dress the same, look the same and even think the same.
it makes me cringe just thinking about it.
you are just another one of those mindless clones.
you're programmed down to every last hair flip and giggle.
if it weren't for them, you'd be nothing.
just like me.
you'd spend your life at the mall doing nothing.
maybe watching kids master the art of ddr if you are privledged enough.
they dance infront of all the ooing and ahhing people.
enchanted by their moves.
but i just sit and watch.
oblivious to all things around me.
but still, that doesn't change the fact that you are not like me.
you're somebody, i'm not....

Time Of Evil
Poet section.

Clovie
*cough poetry forum cough*

Englishpin@pple
oh................................

Time Of Evil
erm sorry mate, we don't hsow much interest here. This is o-f-f t-o-p-i-c

Clovie
i just have no knowledge about poetry messed

Time Of Evil
Well I write a few poems, but I don't exactly have a talent. no expression

Time Of Evil
How do you do that smilie clovie?

Englishpin@pple
um....

Kharhmah
Dont be mean guys.

Clovie
so: *shows* messed

: S without a space

Time Of Evil
Aha.... messed big grin

Don't be mean! We're just giving directions, not being mean!

Fearnix
I'm a mean **** eek!

Time Of Evil
laughing Wannabe.

ladygrim
blink

Fearnix
wannabe Gangstar

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