Sad Story

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Shaggy2dope
One day a girl was asked to go to a party by her best friend and her Crush was gonna be there so she figured why not so school was now over and she went home and asked her parents if she could go and her parents told her no there is gonna be alchohol there and smoking i know it not without a parent she went up to her room and cried but either way she knew she was goin to that party she called up her Crush and told him she was in love with him and would defintetly be at that party so the next day passed and then school was out after a few hours she went home and waited till night when her parents falled asleep and then her Crush came and picked her up and they went to the party the parents woke up and found she wasn't there they panicked they had to find her so the girl was now at the party hanging out with her friends but she didn't drink didn't smoke just talked and her crush got really really drunk but she hadn't known the girl was now feeling uncomfortable so she asked her crush to take her back home they got in the car and drove her crush put his hand on her leg and started rubbing it she said dont do that then her crush tried to kiss her she said stop it! so her crush got so pissed off he cranked the petal so they were goin 100 miles per hour and she said no please slow down and they crashed into another car the girl survived but the crush and the other people in the other car did not so the girl was at the hospital and had not very long to live the nurse came the girl told the nurse to tell her parents she loved them and then died but the nurse ignored her the doctor came over and said nurse why did you ignore her like that the nurse said sadly I cant why asked the doctor the nurse said sadly because the people in the other car were her parents sad Rate this story sad, very sad, or just pathetic

Shaggy2dope
sleep

nitro-swicked
sad well its pretty sad

A4E
OMFG!!! please tell me u made it up cry pelase!! crybaby

Shaggy2dope
smile

Shaggy2dope
I will be making more sad stories later wink

A4E
lol

Shaggy2dope
????

A4E
wacko i dunno

dark1365
Man that sucks...

Shaggy2dope
Hey it was a true story

dark1365
I know but oh well.

Shaggy2dope
Guess so.

Jaxx
where is the grammer......

Shaggy2dope
kinda rushed through big grin

Jaxx
yes but nothing beats grammer....now i need to breathe

Shaggy2dope
breathe?

CherryPie
too long and I am tired

chelsea17
yeah, it's very sad...sad

Ketchuptome
It was sad.Especaially the ending

Shaggy2dope
lol u brought it all the way back up

JLred
It was sad.....cry

Cid
well, that would suck.

lil bitchiness
Here you go all, a better version with punctuation and grammar as well as rhyme.

http://www.funnyjunk.com/pages/cry.htm



Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.

BackFire
IF YOU DRINK ALCHOHAL YOU WILL KILL YOUR PARENTS OMFG!!

This story is bullshit, I remember them spouting this shitty story off during High school over the intercom one morning to try and scare kids from drinking and driving.

I hate scare tactics in all of their forms, it's a nazious strategy that has no place in this world and should be disregaurded by everyone.

This is very similar to the bullshit those lame truth commercials pawn off as "fact" to try and scare people into not smoking -- "Big tobacco companies laugh sinisterly while discussing their customers dying!!!!11"

Cut the shit, people, this is propoghanda.

The Tired Hiker
Damn straight, BF. It's those damn TRUTH ads that trigger me to want a smoke when I'm just chillin watching the tube. erm

BackFire
Word.

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