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Blair was dreading this day, she had to leave her friends, her family, and to what go live in the middle of nowhere with her Aunt and Uncle, uhh life was so un fair sometimes. "Get up Blair, dear, you have got to be at the airport soon."
"okay mom go away!" i said as i stumbled out of the bed bearly awake at 5am. as i made my way to the bathroom i was thinking about how by the end of the day i would be in Mobile, Alabama away from her beautiful NewYork. "I wonder what the people will be like?" i thought as i stepped out of the shower. "What should i wear? hmm O hell who cares" i said out loud as i threw on my jeans and a plain white shirt. i grabbed my purse and carry on and shuffled down stairs with my 2 big suitcases, yeah i was only staying the summer but hey that atleast 2 months. "Okay ready!" i said as i abroached the kitchen. Mom and Dad were already there finishing there coffee. God, they look like they get up at 5am everyday. Dad helped me put my stuff in the car and we said our goodbyes. i would have driven, since i was 16 but mom insisted. At the airport i got my tickets and had everything situated said my goodbyes again with my mom and finally boarded the plane..
O.A.R21
Ohhh looking forward to reading more! keep going trackchk i think you have something! GREAT writer!

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After the 4 hour plane ride i had watched Shark Tale twice and i think i no every episode of "The Oc" made. I was so happy to finally hear the captian on th eover head speakers, "We will be landing shortly please put your seat back and tray tables in there upright and locked pesitions" "yeah, yeah" i thought i no the routine. As soon as we landed i imediatly wished i had worn shorts. It was atleast 100 degrees and the misquitos are horrible! "Blair, Blair! over here" i saw my little 4yearold cousin, Adalaide, jumping up and down waving her arms. Even though she barely could see over the railing, i could still see her cute, curly brown hair, bobbing up and down. Behind her were my Aunt Becky and Uncle Frank. Aunt Becky i have always liked shes real young and fun to hang out with, uncle frank well..he is more like my dad, the protective type. By the time we got to the car it was almost 5 and traffic was horrible. "Wait i thought you lived out in the country. Well, we did but we decided that wasnt for us so we moved to the beach. "Hmm maybe this won't be so bad after all"
bookworm4lyf
Originally posted by O.A.R21
Ohhh looking forward to reading more! keep going trackchk i think you have something! GREAT writer!

I sssssssoooooooooo AGREE!!! Keep Goin girl!!! (Girl rite...i made that mistake before...lol)
HPfanatic
sounds good. hope you write more.
trackChk890
"Wow this really is gorgeous" i said in awe as we road down the streets lined with big, old, magnolia trees. "Yeah the downtown area is but the city is just like anyother." my aunt informed me. "Really, whats the beach like?" i asked wondering what living on the beach full time would be like. yeah i have gone to the beach before but never actually stayed in a house, house there or for more that a week." You picked a good day to come here," Uncle Frank started in his deep gruffy vioce,"not too hott, the suns out, and the humidity is at a fair amount today."how can he say its not hott its like 110!! okay so actually its only 88, i saw on a flashing bank sign, but it feels like it."It sure does feel hott!" i said. "Oh, honey thats just because your not used to the humidity, dont worry it wont take long"Aunt B said. i hope not cause if it doesnt i think im going to shrivel up. "Guess what!!,"said Adalaide escaping from her car seat, "i got my room painted!.""really what color?" "Yellow, my favorite color." she said proudly, as she snugled into my lap. "where are we now?" i asked as we were going over some long flat bridge. "Oh the causeway." My uncle informed me. i looked out the window and saw losts of marsh and wetlands. "the beach water isnt brown like that is it?
HPfanatic
wow! you haev graet detail. i really like it.
trackChk890
"No, no, its crystal clear on a good day, but never brown like that." okay good. So why exactly was i sent here, oh yeah to get a job for the summer to teach me some work ethic, like i couldnt have gotten a job in NY. "we have made arrangements for you to have your interview at BlueGill on Thursday, so you have several days to rest up since its only Sunday," Aunt B was saying, " if all goes well you will be hostess or waitress." "What do hostesses do?" i asked. "they keep the tables straight on who has clear tables who doesnt, stuff like that mostly." Didnt sound that bad. just hoped i didnt become a waitress who had to carry a big tray full of food on roller blades.
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"THIS is your House??" i said in amazement. "yeah come on i wanna show you my room!"Adalaide said as she grabed my hand and was pulling me inside. "My god just this room you could prolly fit at least half my appartment into." in NY there isnt much room as most of you no so i live in a 3 bedroom apartment with my mom and two little tyrants of brothers. Have you ever tryed living with 2 twin 3yr old brothers, its HELL.
trackChk890
G'night yall post more tomorrow
trackChk890
sorry couldnt sleep....so im going to post more Now!
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But, anyway the house is fabulous. Its 2 storys, with a wrap around porch, its a light shade of torquise, with big rectangle windows that have white shudders, and in the back...beach!! wow its been so long since i have been to the beach. I change into a big t-shirt and shorts and Adalaide and I went to the beach. Now, its around 7 and i still need to unpack. So i come in from splashing in the water, which is not brown and surprisingly isnt that cold either, and walk into the den with Adalaide on my hip. When i make eye contact with the most gorgeous guy i have ever set eyes on. "PJ!," Adalaide screams and wiggles free from me to rush over to hug him. For a few minutes i just stand there staring, untill Adalaide takes his hand and drags him over next me. "PJ, this is my big sisssy, Blair" "UHhhmm uh Hi im actually her cousin, but whatever." Just then Aunt B comes in a cute summer dress,"Oh yess well it looks like yall have already met, Blair, Pj is our babysitter when you werent here because he lives right next door, and i guess we forgot to tel him you were coming down, but i am soo sorry Pj we probably wont need you for the summer." Im standing there pretending to listen to Aunt B but i heard was hott guy here lives next door. Pj started for the door but Aunt B stopped him. "Now, Now its are fault for not telling you and well Blair here doesnt no anyone here so why dont you stick around adn yall can hang out." YES, i looove you Aunt B you rule! "but just remember you are still babysitting," says Uncle Frank "take good care of my babies." he says giving a little chuckle like he knows he is embarassing me and thinks its funny. "Uncle Frank we will be fine, okay, now dont be late." i said trying to get them out the door and me alone with Mr. hottie. " okay, yall be careful. we will be back by 11, there is money on the counter for a pizza or something. Bye." Finally me and Pj and oh yeah Adalaide.
bookworm4lyf
cool!!!!! is this probably like every girls fantasie type thing with the gur next door and all? Just wonderin! Love it!!! Keep goin!
O.A.R21
Cant wait to read more keep it comming! Woohoo!
xXLauriëXx
v good

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HPfanatic
i'm really likin it. good job!
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"this is soo cool i have my 2 favorite babysitters with me for the whole night!!"Adalaide said as she ran over to me and grabed my legs. "im going to get something from the kitchen want something?" i asked PJ who was over locking the door. "yeah, sure, if you dont mind,"
"no not at all im going in there anyway.." "okay then a sprite please"
"okay 2 sprites and juice box comin right up." i said. Adalaide went over to Pj and they started picking a game to play. On my way to the kitchen i made a pit stop in the bathroom to check my image. Wow where do i start my usually none frizz brown hair was going crazy, i was still in my soaking wet t-shirt and shorts, and my blue eyes looked like i had 2 bad cases of pink eye. "Damn humidity, damn salt water," i hissed under my breathe. Well, i brushed threw as much as i could with my hair and washed out my eyes and put a little eye liner on. After i had changed into my scrub pants a t-shirt that was my size i went back down with the drinks. "Oh hey thanks," PJ said as he got up from the couch to help me carry them. " so, how old are you?" "Sixteen."i said while sitting down on the couch next to Adalaide. "Really? me too, do you have a car down here?" "unfortunately not" i said as i looked into thoughs deep green eyes. "Bummer,...hey you could come out with me and my friends sometime?" "Umm..yeahh sure thatd be fun!" i said trying not to blush. "So what peice do you wanna be?" Adalaide said up to us as she slid onto the floor to set up Monopoly. "i'll be the dog" Pj siad "Yeah but me as the car so i can beat you all." i said with a sly smile to PJ "ohh so we have a competition do we?" Pj said returning the sly smile. After about an hour of Monopoly PJ was winning, Adalaide in jail, and i was on GO. "Okay can we pick a new game Addy?" i asked i really was a bit tired of landing on Pay For Taxes. "UhOh looks like we have a sore loser over here."PJ remarked "No," i started "I am just sick of paying you money cause you own like pretty much everything." With that i gave his arm a little play punch, and got to feel his rock solid arms. PJ was faking a broken arm, while, Adalaide and i cleaned up. "I'll go order the pizza, peperonni okay?" "YEAh!" Adalaide said."sounds good to me." I said puting the box in the game cabinet. There house was great, it had that nice lived in feeling, but it wasnt crowded or toys everywhere. "So what do you wanna do now?" i asked Adalaide as we climbed onto the couch. "
O.A.R21
wooo i wonder whats gonna happen with Pj? ohh! cant wait to see!
HPfanatic
ooooo...... i like!!!

trackChk890
"Uhh i no, i no." Adalaide said excitedly as she ran off to her room. By the time i got up to follow her she was back with another game. "Twister? uhhmm okay," i agreed "you and pj can go first." "Noo, i wanna go with you."She said. "Okay, Okay." i said as we started to clear the carpet to set the mat out. "okay pizza should be here at 830 so we have like half an hour," Pj said coming into the den, "uh oh what are we doing now?" "Me and Blair are gunna play twister!!" Adalaide said as she handed the spinner to Pj "oh okay i guess im just not cool enough for you then am i, Adalaide?" Pj said starting to tickle her. She ran away screaming and laughing. Once we got her calmed down and ready to play she changed her mind. "I tink you and Bwair should play." she siad as she pointed to Pj. "Um okay you up for it Blair?" he asked me. "Well, i guess i should regain my pride from Monopoly, oh what the heck, sure." i said thinking about how much of a physical contact game this was and looking forward to it. We started opposite of each other and in no time are bodies were entangled together. He had one hand on the mat, and both feet at oppisite ends. But, it still wasnt as bad as me i had one foot on one dot and both my hands on the opposite side of the mat over his body. We eventually fell but who knows who fault it was. For the rest of the night we ate pizza, goofed around, and watched Blue's Clues. When we put Adalaide to sleep it was around 930 so we had atleast an hour and a half. I went over to the movie stand to see what they had. "Hey you want some popcorn while we're watching this?" Pj asked at the begining of the movie.
HPfanatic
more! more! it's so cute.

bookworm4lyf
i agree...awesome!!!!!!!
O.A.R21
ahh dont stop keep going!
trackChk890
k i will thanks yall
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Pj came back in with popcorn, and 2 chocolate milks. (god, is it just me or is he perfect?) "okay ready, start the movie." So, we started watching Finding Nemo. The next thing i know someone is tapping me and trying to wake me up. "HEY, Blair, wake up Blair?," Pj said tapping me on the shoulder."sorry, its just your Aunt and Uncle are going to be home anyminute so im just going to go." I sat up trying to focus on what he was saying, but instead a huge yawn came out of my mouth. "uhhhuuuhhha, yeahh sorry about falling asleep i guess im still kinda tired from the time change." "Oh, no dont worry about it, remember if your ever bored here you can just come by next door im usually home." Pj said as he was heading out the door. "Oh okay sounds good. See you around." I got up and saw that the movie was stopped and put back in its place, the dishes were clean, and the room was back together. "Wow hes good" i thought to myself. I went to check on Adalaide, still sleeping. Good now i can get some shut eye, too.
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The next week flew by. I remember getting up to the smell of pancakes on Friday. "Yum it smells good" i said as i stumbled out of bed and down stairs. "Oh well thank you,"Aunt B said i came into the kitchen." Okay so today i was going to go into town and maybe do some shopping wanna go?" I really am not a morning person. Okay so its like 11 late morning, whatever. "Umm, yeah sure sounds funn!" i said trying to sound enthusiastic. "what about Adalaide?" i said. "on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday she goes to day care so i can get some stuff done." Aunt B told me. As we were leaving the house i was in a pink ruffle tanktop, jean skirt, and flip flops. We went to almost all the shops here, I got lots of new tops and bathing suits. After we had gone by and picked up Adalaide at 4 my feet were killing me, and i was ready to go home. "oh hey Blair could i get you to take this over to Pj," Aunt B asked. "its his money for babysitting?" "Yeah, sure." As i was headed over there my stomach started turning into knots. Calm yourself..calm..breathe i repeated in my head. I rang the door and a pretty, blonde, curly haired, girl about my age anwsered. Oh god, "Um is uhh Pj here?" i asked nervously. "oh yeah, sure thing come on in." the girl said. "Im Anna, by the way, im this things twin sister. You must be the Marble's neice, nice to meet you." She siad flicking Pj as he came down the stairs. "Yeah, thats me, but you can call me Blair." "Okay, see you around."then she walked into the other room. "Hey Blair whats up?" i held out the envelope with the money in it. "Its money for babysitting the other night. They wanted me to come give it to you since they didnt have a chance to before." "oh okay, well tell them thanks," he siad as we stepped outside and he shut the door beside us. "and if you arent doing anything tomorrow night my parents are going out of town, and a few of my friends are coming over you wanna come?" Yes, yes, yes, yes,and YES. "Umm, ill see what im doing and call you, whats your number?" i said trying to play alittle hard to get. "Here he said as he grabbed a pen and wrote it on my had...6418144. "Its going to be fun, i really hope you can make it."
O.A.R21
Ah cant wait till the party! YOU ARE A AWSOME WRITER!

bookworm4lyf
si si senorita
HPfanatic
whew! i though Anne was gonna be his girlfriend. i was like "NOOOO!!!" but it's ok now. good job. you doing so so so good.
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Okay, its the day of the party, and I got to get outfit, call Pj, and make sure i can go. I thought to myself as i was watching Adalaide on the beach. i had layed out almost everyday this week, i swear its the only thing to do around here. Well, it prolly would be different if i had a car! "Hey Adalaide, come here," i yelled "your face and shoulders are looking kinda red we better head in, so you dont get sunburned." I started gathering my stuff and shaking out the towels. "But, im still having fun!" Adalaide insisted. "Im sorry Addy, but im not allowed to let you get sunburned. Now, here take the towel dry off and we will go make milkshakes inside. Sound good?" "Yeah i guess.." she said as she stomped away. Inside, i asked if i could go and i can. So, i decided to call and tell PJ. "Hello?" i heard Anna say. "Hi is PJ there?" "No hes not. May i take a message?" "Umm no ill call back later." "Okay,..wait is this Blair?" "uhh yes?" "This is Anna, i was wondering were calling to say you were coming tonight?" "Yes, i was." "Okay good, and i no you dont know alot of people down here, so i was wondering if you wanted to come over early and get ready here? the boys are all going to one of their houses before so we will have the place to ourselves wanna join?" "YEAh! id love too" "okay see you around 8. bye" "Bye." then we both hung up. Later that night i asked to go over early and i could. When i was going threw my closet to try and pick out my outfit i had no idea what to wear. I didnt no what they whore to events like this. I packed about 4 different outfits and went over to the Watson's house. i rang the door bell and waited for an answer. "Hellooo, how can i help you?"said a cute guy who was tan had blonde wavy hair and green eyes. "Umm is Anna here?" "Yeah sure,"he said in his southern accent, that most everybody had here, as he yelled up to Anna. "Im Crain, adn its a pleasure to meet you." He said as he stooped down one knee and kissed my hand. I dont think i have ever blushed more, and just then Pj comes around the corner. "Hey Blair!,"He said making his way over to me to give me a big bear huge, and ofcourse i hugged him back. Its kinda fun to see guys falling at your feet for you, not that i still wasnt blushing. "Hey, are your cheeks okay they look red?" Oh god, gulp. "Oh uhh i guess i got too much sun today."i said trying to cover them up with my hands. "No, no, it looks good. Your turnin into a real southerner." Up in Anna's room i had the girls, Anna, Paige, Caroline, and Catherine, help me pick the best outfit, and i lent a couple of shirts out for Paige and Cathrine to where. I ended up in my black halter, tight jeans, knee high boots, and i let the girls do my make-up.
O.A.R21
Aww fun! sounds like a eventful night ahead!! GREAT JOB CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!
HPfanatic
fun fun! keep it up your doin great!
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When we came downstairs it was a full on party. There were people everywhere. I was walking threw the room and i could feel the eyes burning on me. I walked by Paige, a 5'6, totally gorgeous, blonde, and girl eyed girl, PJ came up beside her and wrapped his arm around her. He obviosly didnt see me, i thought. Then, i heard him say, "So, i see you have met Paige, my girlfriend." I stopped dead in my tracks. WHattt..how could he? Well, i mean its not like he lied to me, but still i thought we had something. Just then Crian walked up with a cup of punch. "Hey! glad you could make it!" he said handing me the punch. "Thanks, hey are they really dating?" i said gulping down the drink, that gave me a rush of adrinaline. "Who? them," Crain said pointing to Pj and Paige. "Yeah, have been for a while now, why?" "Oh no reason, remember im new here i dont no alot about people yet." i said thinking about the punch and what other ingredients could be in it. "Oh yeah, sorry. So you wanna go meet some people from around here?" The rest of the night was a blast. I remember meeting lots more people, Crain flirting with me and me flirting back, and lots more of that punch.
O.A.R21
Ahaha hmm i wonder what could be in the *punch*??
KEEP going its so awsome!
trackChk890
hahah me too

...haha thanks!
O.A.R21
you are soo welcome!

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The next day i woke up in my room around 12 with a pounding headache. Downstairs I found a note that said that they had gone to church and didnt want to wake me because i had gotten in late last night. Wow, i dont even remember coming in. Wait, i remember falling asleep at the party, how did i get here? There, also, was a number on my hand... I had a great time call me! 641-1841. "Oh God, i need food. And something for his headache." i said putting my head in my hands on the counter. I made waffles, grabbed a water bottle, and went back upstairs. I watched the tv for a while but nothing good was on, so i decided to find out who i had had a great time with. I grabed my cell phone and dialed the number."RRRRinggg, rrrinnggg,
O.A.R21
yikes, major hangover huh! Cant wait to read more!
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"Hello?" I let out a sigh of relief to hear the familiar voice of Crain on the other end of the line. "Hellooo?" "Oh yeah, Hey Crian, its Blair."
"Yeah, whats up?" "Not much just found your number on my hand. You no you could have, like signed it or something." "Yeah but that would take all the fun and mystery our of it." "Yeah, whatever. Oh yeah, do you remember me falling asleep at the party? How did i get home?"
"Well you fell asleep on my shoulder, and you live right next door so i figured i could just carry you home." "Seriously! you carried me home! did you carry me into the house too?" "Well, you woke up enough atleast to walk to your room from the door." "Omgsh i so sorry you didnt have to do that!!" "No, it was fine. The party wasnt much fun without you, though." I could feel my checks burning, and i glad that we were talking on the phone not face-to-face. "Aw, thanks. By the way, do you have a job or know anyone who is going to work at Bluegill?" "Yeah at a surf shop, and i do no people who work there why?" "cause im suppose to start working as a waitress there, Tuesday." "Ohh, what times your shift because i could give you a ride, because my jobs real close to Bluegill." "8-12 in the morning." i said dreading getting up that early. "Perfect, i start at 830, but dont get off 'till 1." "Oh, thats okay, i can get a ride home. Well, thanks again for last night! that really was sweet of you." "No problem, hey what are you doing today?" "Umm, i dont think anything, why?" "Have you ever been parasailing?" "Uhhm, no why?" i asked suspiciously.
trackChk890
sorry yall its not much, but no is reading it..
O.A.R21
FUN i love to parasail! aww cant wait to see what her reaction is once she finds out what it is!! KEEP GOING

HPfanatic
ya keep going..

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"You seriously want me to do this?" i asked watching someone be let out and up above the water."Yeah, it will be fun come on. Ill be with you." Crain said taking my hand. Okay, at first i was just trying to get back at Pj for leading me on by flirting with Crain, but now i think i actually might like him. "Oh alright, but how much is it? I mean ill pay some for it-" "Dont worry about it. This is where i work. Its free for employees." "Awesome!" i said squeezing his hand.
trackChk890
sorry not much..write more in a minute
O.A.R21
Awww so cute! Write more please!
trackChk890
"Omg! that was amazing!" i said as we landing back on solid ground. "Yeah, iv done about a thousand times, but it still gives me a rush." Back at home i babysat Adalaide because Aunt and Uncle were gone out to eat. "So, you wanna go out to the beach while the suns still up?" I asked Adalaide, so maybe i could layout in my new bathing suit. "YAY!! yay!" she said jumping up and down. She is so full of energy. I changed into my bathing suit which fit me perfectly at my curves. Which, I have to say is good because i am a 34C, but in no way am i fat. I still run every morning, and do crunches at night. I mostly am trying to stay in shape for track season. Down at the beach i layout our towels and we start having our picknet that i packed when all of a sudden a football comes flying out of no where and lands write in my lap. I take the football and turn around and guess whos there, Pj. He looks kinda taken aback to see me in a bathing suit, and i have to say hes not so bad either. Toned, tanned, and muscler...yummmy! No, just remember he has a girlfriend. "So, i guess this is yours?" i ask holding the football away from him. No one says you cant try. "Yes." he says with a smile that makes my legs weak. "PJ!!" i hear Adalaide yell as she runs over to hug him. He picks her up and starts running down the beach with her, so i have no other choice but to go after him. "Wait, what are you doing?" I yell after him as i start following him. I can see more of his friends on the beach outside his house. When he stops outside his house Anna comes out. "ANNA!" Adalaide screams as she tackles her. "So, can i pulease have my football back now?" he says trying to act all annoyed, as he turns around and smiles at his friends. I look over and see Anna and Adalaide playing in the sand. Okay, 2 can play this game. "Youll have to come get it!" i yell as i turn and run off torward the water with the football. "Oh yeah," Pj say when i feel a rush come over me, and im in the wet sand beside the water with Pj on top of me. "Ahhh," i scream laugh my head off. Pj stays on top of me, "Can i have my football now?" i smile. "Yeah, sure." i say pushing Pj off me when a wave comes and swamps both of us with water. Pj stands up soaking wet and sticks out his hand to help me up. "Thanks" i say when im up on my feet. "No, problem." he says as he picks up his football and we both start to head up to this house.
trackChk890
thanks hpfanatic! i might post more later!
luv_danrad*^^*
wat she said^ IT SO GOOD!!!!!!!!! keep it cumin!!
trackChk890
thanks yall!! i will later tonight after homework...urgggg!
luv_danrad*^^*
eeeee!! it's march break!! u got h/w 4 that??? hee hee.! that suks.!!
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"So, I heard Paige and your brother are dating." I ask Anna while were laying out watching Adalaide and the guys playing football. "Yeah, but i dont really like'um together. I mean i like them both but when there together its just akward. You no?" she says as she takes her eyes off the guys and looks over at me. "Id like it better if yall were together than him and Paige." I could feel my cheeks burning, so i turn my head to see what Adalaides doing, and shes still tryin to build a sand castle. Why does whenever someone says Pj's name i blush, and how can i like Pj and then again like Crain? As soon at that thought crosses my mind Crain comes up beside me, and squats down to talk. "Hey Babe," He says."what are yall doing?" He, also, looks good in a bathing suit, but he has a different look to him. He is more of the surfer type you no tan, blonde hair, and green eyes. Not saying theres anything wrong with that, heck no! And thats what makes it so hard. "Oh not much, laying out." Anna answers squinting into the sun. "Okay, well ill talk to you later Blair." he says as he gives my leg a squeeze then runs off to join the guys playing football, and I feel that same rush come over me as i did with Pj. I lay there watching him run off. About an hour later my phones rings and its Aunt and Uncle telling me that there home. So, i tell Anna that im going to take Adalaide home and she says i better come back because their having a bonfire later. At my house, I changed into blue jean shorts and a dark brown fitted screen tee grabbed my purse and phone, and headed out the door. As i made my way back down the beach i could see the fire going and Anna sitting in some guys lap i dont no. I walked up said hey to Anna looked around and was glad to see that Paige wasnt here. Suddenly, there was an arm around my waist i turn around to see you it is, and Crain takes his hand tilts my head where im looking striaght into his eye bends down and kisses me ever so softly on the lips, it makes my whole body tingle down to my toes.
trackChk890
whats march break? do yall get like all of march off, luv_danrad???
O.A.R21
I sware you are a awsome writer! The ending made me smile on that one! KEEP IT UP! Your doing so awsome!!

HPfanatic
i have spring break, but that's not till april, i think it's somthin like that.
i love the story, it's so good.
trackChk890
yeah we have spring break next week yay!!
HPfanatic
lucky! i think i have a whole moth to go.
trackChk890
For a few seconds she just stood there in awe. "I'v wanted to do that since the first time i met you." And with that he kissed me again, but this time it was a real kiss that lasted for a good 3 minutes atleast. "Wow," i sorta whispered as i looked down thinking about what just happened I was still in Crain's arms i looked back up at him, and simply smiled. "Im glad you finally did." And then i put my arms around him and even though i couldnt say what i felt i think he knew.
trackChk890
sorry not much will write more...but i got to go eat dinner now!!
HPfanatic
this is so sweet. in_love
trackChk890
The rest of the bonfire kinda flew by becuase i was having such a great time with Crain and Anna. Though, when me and Crain would snuggle up i couldn't help but notice Pj giving us weird looks. But, why should he care about me and Crain he has Paige, right? After the bonfire Anna asked me if i wanted to stay over with her and Paige and she told me that she was going to get Pj to invite Crain and Devin, who is Anna's new crush, to spend the night with him. I called home and they said i could. So, Anna, Paige, and I were now in her room deciding what to do now. "So, whos this Devin guy he looked pretty yummy from afar." I said to Anna who was braiding my hair, while, Page sat on the other end of the bed watching tv. Devin was not the tallest but tall enough he had light brown hair with brown eyes and pretty tan he actually was cute in a cute puppy dog way. "Yeah, he is. But, Im not sure if i like him. Hes just fun to mess around with." "Oh theres my Anna, the hoe. Hahaha, im just kidding Anna. Your not a hoe!" "-oh you no what we should do when the guys get here?" "-huh?-" paige and i said at the same time. "play 7 minutes in heaven!"
trackChk890
Haha thanks hpfanatic! i will post lots tomorrow if we dont have alot of homework!! nighty night!
HPfanatic
night, good luck with the hmwk, me too.
luv_danrad*^^*
SO GOOD!!! yay!! crain and me gurl!!
trackChk890
okay! i have 2 major test tomorrow and i have alot of studying! So im going to post right now and then go study!! i might beable to post more tonight but dont count on it....this is what i wrote today when i got bored in class!!haha
HPfanatic
nice, i did that today.

trackChk890
We were all sitting in a circle in Pj's room in akward silence waiting for someone to start the game. From left to right it was Pj, Paige, Devin, Anna, Me, then Crain. "Oh hell, ill start." Anna says grabbing the bottle. When it was finally my turn, Paige and Pj, Anna and Devin had already been in the closet. I spun and hopped for the best. Uh oh, i think as the bottle comes to a slow stop on Pj. I was mortified i didnt no what to do i just sat there lookin from the bottle to Pj. Pj got up and came over to help me up. As we were walking out of the room i look over to Crain. He looked really dissapointed, so i tried to give him a reasuring smile. But, in a way, i was kinda glad he looked dissapointed because it meant that he really did like me. Though, i couldnt help but feel abit of excitment and nervousness that i was going to be in a small clost all alone with Pj. "Uhhh.." i mumble in akwardness as we enter the closet. Pj didnt waste anytime he came right at me with his hands on my hips and his body pressed against mine. "No...no..I just..cant.." i say pushing his hands off me while i hit the back of the closet. "It just that you have Paige and im sorta with Crain now-" "Shhhh.."Pj buts in puttin his finger on my lips to get them to stop talking, but it didnt make him slow down any. The next thing i no im making out with the hottie from next door! "You cant deny that you didnt feel something between us, Blair. I know i felt it the first time i met you." He said after about a minute of kissing. I looked down, I honestly didnt no what to think anymore. I had to get away. I ran out of the closet wipping my mouth and straight into the bathroom next door. My knees felt weak, my head was spinning out of control, and my heart felt like if it beat any faster it would burst, but it sure wasnt slowing down. After i washed my face with cold water i felt better then there was a knock on the door. "Hey Blair?" i heard
Pj say. "come on out Blair. I wasnt That bad was i?" I opened the door and couldnt help but laugh. "No.." I say as we start walking back down to the room. We both know that noone else can know what happen. "It will be our little secret.." Pj whispers into my ear then gives my arm a squeeze before we enter the room and split up to sit down. I sit next to Crain and Pj next to Paige. I see Anna eye me suspicsiouly, but i dont care because suddenly i no what im going to do.
HPfanatic
aaa..... keep going.

trackChk890
The rest of the night was much more fun! I only went into the closet once more, but it was a different experience this time. "Iv been dieing out there for us to end up in here together." Crain says as he comes closer and starts nuzzling my neck with his hands slowly creeping to the inside of my shirt. "Whoa, whoa," i say as a stop his hands and he backs up. Thats why i like Crain more that Pj, i realize. Because he listens to what i say and acts liek he cares about what im saying."i dont even no where i stand with you" "Well, i like you. And by the signs you have been giving me i think you like me too, right" he says kinda looking nervous about my anwser. But, i dont say anything. Instead i stand on my tippy toes, grab his shirt, pull him toward me, and kiss him with all my might right on the lips. "Well! id take that as a yes!" Crain says coming up for air after awhile of making out. The next morning the girls and I beat the guys down to the doughnuts, so we start chowing down. As were eating Crain comes up and gives me a kiss on the check then goes and sits with the guys on the couches. Later i went home. I took a hot shower and thought about how great my summer was going so far. This mornings my first day of work, whahoo, i think to myself as i rally myself out of bed at 7 oclock. "Hey Addy," i say as i see Adalaide sitting at the breakfast bar eating cereal. She gives me a wave back. "Oh yeah, my friend Crain is going to give me a ride to work. Im sorry i meant to tell you earlier but i guess i got side tracked, is that okay?" I say to Aunt B while shes cuting up a bannana to put in my cereal. "Oh yeah sure thatd be great. But, whys he giving you a ride does he work with you?" "No, but down the street at some surf shop. He has to get there at 8:30 so he said that he could just give me a ride. but, ill still need to be picked up at 12 unless i find a ride." "Oh okay sounds good." Aunt B says giving me a kiss on the check as i leave the house. We arrive at Bluegill and i dont see anyone around. But, before i could get over to the kitchen door it swings open and guess who comes out whistling. "Heyyy, Blair. You must be the new girl Miss Lindsay was talking about." Pj says walking over to me. I nod my head. "Ah, well come with me." he says putting his arm around my shoulders and guiding me into the kitchen and through a room marked 'Owner'. "Here Miss Lindsay, i think iv found our rookie." And i see a young, pretty, brown haired women turn around. "Oh good, i was wondering when i was going to see you." she says then motions me to sit down and tells Pj he can go.
trackChk890
hahah that all for now! i HAVE to go study!
HPfanatic
ok go study, thanks for writing more. it's so good, i love it.

trackChk890
taking a break my head hurts from studying!!! thanks hpfanatic im glad you staying updated with it!! i will write more tomorrow after track i hope!!
luv_danrad*^^*
oookkkkkk ill check again 2morrow! so good! keep it up!

trackChk890
Heres some more!:
trackChk890
"Around here we dong assign a permanent person to a table group or to be hostess. We trade out every two weeks." Lindsay says as she shows me around and describes the table order."First since your new this summer im going to let Anna help you your first time being hostess." When the store opens im very glad to have Anna helping me because i keep getting mixed up about what table are in what groups and which ones are taken or open. But, over the next 2 weeks i eventually got the hang of being hostess. Though, it wasnt getting anyless akward between me and Pj. But, i was glad he was there because there was something about him, like, i could just relax around him. I felt so comfortable about asking him for help if i was connfused or lost. Then again, i was dating Crain, and he still had Paige. So, there was no chance of us ever hooking up. Though, sometimes i think about what it would be like if things had ended out differently. Crain was still picking me up every morning, and im glad because i think i really like him, too. "Hey Miss Lindsay," i say when the last customer leaves at noon and my shift is over. "am i going to be a waitress next week or what?" I start collecting the papers and organizing the hostesses podeum at the entrance of the resturant. "No, Im letting Anna be a waitress and you can try being a hostess all by yourself. Think you can do it?" She says helping one of the guys clear of a table. "Yeah, sure!" i say, as I am actually excited. I look up from the podeum and Crains sitting in his car waving for me to come out and join him. I feel myself smile and my whole body is tingling with anticipation to go meet him. I usually get picked up or get a ride home from one of the guys here, because Crain works untill 1. "Oh, uhh...Miss Lindsay I'm..uh..done. Bye!" i say grabbing my stuff and rushing out the door. But shes go busy with whatever shes doing she doesnt even look up. "Yeah, okay. See you Monday!" she says. I get out to the car and give Crain a kiss then run to the other side to get in the front seat. He leans over and we start kissing. While were kissing it takes all the doubt about him out of my mind. "Uh, oh." i look up to see that Pj had pulled up beside us. "Naughty, naughty!" I could feel my face turning bright red. And my chest starts beating like mad. What the hell was he doing spying on us like that, i think to myself, but really want to scream it at him. "Sorry yall, i was just suppose to come and tell yall that Blair's got to come in tomorrow, Saturday, to help me with a birthday party." i wasnt looking at him, but i could see him smiling because he thinks its funny that he has embarrassed me. Well, i dont give him that satisfaction. I look him dead in the eyes. "Oh, okay well thanks. See you then." i say coldly then turn back to look straight ahead. After that he says bye to Crain then drives off. "Are you okay?" Crain asks as were driving down the road. "Yeah, GREAT!" i say taking his hand that is not on the steering wheel. "but, whyd you pick me up? i thought you had work?" "I have something special to show you!" he says looking over at me with a smile that makes my stomach drop.
luv_danrad*^^*
SO GOOD!!!!!!! (as usual.!) can u check mine??
trackChk890
THANKS!! yeah sure!
luv_danrad*^^*
r u postin more 2nite??
trackChk890
probably not! i will tomorrow! sorry guys i like thinking about what should happen threw school then when i come home all the ideas come out and i write!!
HPfanatic
tisk! tisk! Day dreaming in school. lol just kidding. can't wait to read more!!
lingling1214
Your story is coming along well. I can't wait to hear what the surprise is!!
O.A.R21
AWSOME GREAT JOB!!
trackChk890
Crain arrived promtly at 8 later that night for our first "official" date. We had been to parties together before, but not just a one on one date. So, now he says were going to have our first date. He wouldn't tell me where were going, though, just to make sure that i brought a jacket because we would be outside. "Well, hellooo." Crain said as i openned the door to great him. I was in my new dress that me and Aunt Becky had bought the other weekend. It's a 50s style strapless thats light pink with darker pink polka dots I, also, was wearing hot pink pumps. Crain had a single white rose that he handed to me as he came in. "Aw, yall just look soo adorable." Aunt B said as she turned the camera towards us. "Wheres Pj?" Adalaide said as she came up infront of me. "Addy this is Crain. He's one of my new freinds." I said to her. "humh" she snorts as she crosses her arms. "Oh Adalaide where are your manners, young lady?" Aunt B scolded her. "Im sure she would like you. She just doesnt no you yet." She told Crain. When we pulled up to the public beach access entrance i asked Crain what we were doing here, but he wouldnt tell me. "Hold on, stay here ill be right back!" he said grabbing something out of the back adn walking down to the beach. When he came back to get me he made me cover my eyes. He lead me out to the beach where he uncovered my eyes and i stood there in awe. "You did all this for me?" i asked as i looked around. He had set up 2 teki torches, to keep the misquitos away i guess, with a picnic cloth inbetween with food all spread out over that. "Well, your not like all the other girls Iv dated. And i think you definetly deserve it!" he said as he came up behind me and wrapped his arms around my stomach and I layed my head against his chest. I felt so good right now. Like nothing else mattered, not Pj, not work, nothing. "Now, come on lets eat!" I said after standing there wrapped him his warm body. The rest of the night was wonderful. We ate, laughed, and played in the sand. But, all through the night my mind kept wondering back to that sensational rush i got with Pj's body on top of me some how i wanted that feeling again. Eventually it was time for us to go. "Thanks!! so so much that was the most fun i think i have ever had on a date!" i said to Crain as we walked hand in hand to my door. "I thought it was great, too." He said sliding his hand to the side of my face when we started making out. When i opened my door after Crain had left i found a surprise visitor inside the house.
trackChk890
"Oh my, what the...why are you here?" I asked Pj who was sitting in the den watching tv because it was around 1030 and Adalaide is asleep. "Oh well nice to see you too." He said coming over and giving me a kiss on the check. Why, i have no idea. "Gosh, guys are so confusing. One minute i feel like i have sorted everything out and the next im back to square one." i thought to myself as i went over to the refrigerator and grabbed a sprite. "Your Aunt and Uncle decided to go out to the movies and needed someone to babysit because you were gone. Oh, and by the way, you look.." He said looking me head to toe. "amazing.." Wow, i couldnt beleive him. Crains one of his best friends, he has a girlfriend, but he still has the nerve to flrt with me. Now, i was just becoming annoyed with him. "Yeah, so how are you and Crain? Me and Paige broke up. It just wasnt working." Pj said as we both sit on the couch, though i made sure i sat on the opposite end of him, so that he didnt get the wrong impression. "Were great! really.." I said trying to sound cool yet casual, but i could see it in him that he wished i would have said that we were through. The next day i found out that i didnt have a ride into the resturant, so i had no other choice, but to ask Pj. Not that i really minded riding with him. I still think he is hot and all. Its just that whenever im around him my stomach turns to knots and my heart stops beating really fast, but in a good way. I dont no how to explain it when I look at him it gives me a happy feeling all through my body. But, then again, I also get some of this feeling when i see Crain, just not as much.
O.A.R21
WRITE MORE your story is ADDICTING!
O.A.R21
Haha im jk, but it is really really good
trackChk890
The party was great. The kids had alot of fun and i got tipped majorly. I, also, had a great time with Pj. The next 3 weeks flew by. Crain and I were doing great, going out on dates having a great time. I , also, had gotten the hang of being a hostess and waitress. But, saturday night Crain was suppose to come and pick me up for a date, but he never came. "what the hell!!" i thought to myself. He had been late before, but he had called. He never had just not shown up and not called. So, i decided to call his cell. "Umm, Crain." I said hopping to hear his voice. "Uhh, no. Hes busy right now. ah hahahehe." i heard some girls vioce laughing as i hung up with tears forming in my eyes. I called again, but i didnt say anything just listened. "Helloo, helloo.." i heard that same vioce again. Right before they hung up I dont worry im here!" that i know for a fact was Crain. I called Anna, but her cell was off. Aunt B had gone into town with Adalaide for something, and Uncle Frank was at work. So, instead of just sitting at my house crying to myself I ran over to the Wyatt's. Pj opened the door while i was standing there crying. He didnt ask any questions just came over too me and and wrapped his arms around me. "Its okay, shhh.." he said trying to sooth me, "come on," he started leading me inside past his friends that were in the living room and up to his room. "Its okay, tell me. Whats wrong, Blair." I couldnt talk yet i was just blubbering. So, we were just sitting there on Pj's bed with my head in his shoulders and his arms wrapped around me. I just couldnt believe that Crain had cheated on me after we had been dating for about a month. After i had filled Pj in on what had happened he hugged me and told me that he would find out what the hell Crain was thinking doing that to me, which made me feel so much better. But, i still didnt even understand why he had done it.
O.A.R21
Interesting, WHAT A JERK crain's a typical guy! Poor Blair weep!!
HPfanatic
awww.. that's sad. i wanna hear more. lol
lingling1214
OMG TRACKCHK890 YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE.... I REALLY WANT TO NO WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT....
luv_danrad*^^*
crain suks.!! plz rite more!! i wanna no wat's gunna happen!
trackChk890
Sorry yall!!! im leavin for a vacation today in like 30 minutes so i wont beable to write till monday or tuesday!! but TRUST me it will be gooooood!!
bookworm4lyf
i trust u! i can't wait! keep on going girl!
luv_danrad*^^*
i dun wanna wait... but okay~~ ill check on wednesday.
trackChk890
okay sorry for the wait!!! im back at home and i have sooo much to type! yall are going to love it! (i hope

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HPfanatic
YAY! we will love it, i'm sure!!

trackChk890
Theres some....and heres more!!!
trackChk890
sorry it took awhile for the second part...had to eat and do chores before i could comeback to the computer! ill post more tomorrow..tonight im really tired
yall reply and tell me what yall think of it!!
trackChk890
sorry not much today but ill post more later today!
HPfanatic
awww.... i'm so glad this worked out like this. i wanted them to be together. good job.
trackChk890
Thanks hpfanatic! glad someone is keeping up with the story
HPfanatic
poor girl. sounds awful, cool with pj tho.

potter_luver48
thats so good! post some more! im really liking this story!
HPfanatic
that's so cool. she really scored! lol
trackChk890
Haha ..yeah but im going to make something drastic happen soon!!

so you better keep up!
potter_luver48
i cnt wait!
trackChk890
sorry not much...im busy today....might beable to post more later!! i started a new thread by the way its called My Ordinary Life check it out and tell me what ya think!
BlondieX48
this is a reallyl good story i'm really enjoying it! keep going!
trackChk890
Thanks guys! ill write more today i promise!!
potter_luver48
okey dokey! take ur time!
potter_luver48
aww no! i hope they don't break up! that would be SO sad! they were such a great couple!

HPfanatic
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! they can't breack up, i hope he's just officialy asking her out.
BlondieX48
yea i agree with potter_luver48 although i will always agree with her on the account of she's my Best Friend for LIFE! LUV YA potter_luvver48! LOL
potter_luver48
Originally posted by BlondieX48
yea i agree with potter_luver48 although i will always agree with her on the account of she's my Best Friend for LIFE! LUV YA potter_luvver48! LOL
aww! ur my bestest friend 4 life! LOL

trackChk890
Haha! you never know!!

...wink wink...hahah! dont worry it will all work out in the end...maybe?!?!

trackChk890
theres alittle more to keep yall going! hope ya like it..
fantasygirl
I hope u cont. I just finished reading it.
BlondieX48
that's really good! at least he wasn't leaving her for some other girl!
HPfanatic
yes, thank you! it'll be sad when she leaves.
fantasygirl
Yeah. I was hoping they would finally go out on an official date.
trackChk890
Yeah..but yall dont no whats going to happen!

potter_luver48
hmmmmm....the suspence is killing me!
HPfanatic
NO!!! that's so sad i hope he's ok. *sniff sniff* i'm gonna cry
fantasygirl

wawaha!
potter_luver48
that's so sad

O.A.R21
omg thats awsome, he kinda deserved it ahahah im evil sorry! WRITE MORE CHILD!
O.A.R21
haha oops ~ thought that pj was crain. . well if it were crain he would have deserved it!
BlondieX48
thats SO sad

O.A.R21
AHAHA woohooo GO BLAIR!!! YAY im sooo glad Pj's better!!
fantasygirl
WOOOHOO too! That was cute!
BlondieX48
OMG! It's absolutly Wonderful that they're together again!
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