Utch-Nay On The Kibble-Lay

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Ou Be Low hoo
A poem by me, me, me to end all things with:

'Odontoglossum Harryanum' was once a thing I eye-balled.
Now it's time has past and Seasons morph,
From clouded sky to sunny rays,
The light in my eyes forever shall never fade.

To rhyme with no reason maketh no foot,
So to boot the crap and eat thyself.
My words said backwards reveal the truth,
Spoon-forced-fed and all uncooth.

The trip to the top is not the tryst.
So forget all leave and love thyself.
My cheese beats two goats from any Ramblesworth,
But to whine all the time and nothing else?

The libertine said "Do it now!"
But to retort the thought lost it's use,
And now grumbles amble beneath the tree
Root and stem, my brothers, sisters...remember them!

And to fit the finale is all but round,
Back-to-front and upside-down.
It has happened and shall finish soon,
So don't forget to leave some room.

The End ain't nigh, the truth was told,
So on it went...and still it goes.
Getting bored, time to stop...
Plank, gank, stank the loaded elf.

Queue applause...

Trickster
APPLAUSE!!!!

That was cool, man!

Ou Be Low hoo
Yes, yes, yes...Thank you, thank you, thank you...

However, I must inform everyone that my ego requires further platitudes otherwise it will stay hungry...

As Bob once said, "A hungry man is an angry man"

Ma belly ain't full, so I still hungry...

Coldfire
Wow, that was good!

lil bitchiness
Awesome. Well done.

Ou Be Low hoo
Thanks, lil b...Where, pray tell, may I find any of your poetic musings?

Oh, and your new avatar goes about a million levels above mine...Good work.

lil bitchiness
Oh, my poems/writings are not anywhere on KMC.

Although one (not particularly creative, yet very critical) piece of writing by me ended up in a one of the sociological magazine issues . Yes! Go me and mah bad self.

I am a prose person, way more than I am poetic, but somehow posting it on KMC never felt like the right thing to do...for whatever reason.

As for my avvy, isnt it just crazy?!

If I put few of them in the row, it becomes far more memorising, as demonstrated by dave here

Ou Be Low hoo
Originally posted by lil bitchiness
somehow posting it on KMC never felt like the right thing to do...for whatever reason.

Shakespeare retold in a supermarket is still Shakespeare...

Ou Be Low hoo
Originally posted by Ou Be Low hoo
'Odontoglossum Harryanum' was once a thing I eye-balled.
Now it's time has past and Seasons morph,
From clouded sky to sunny rays,
The light in my eyes forever shall never fade.

To rhyme with no reason maketh no foot,
So to boot the crap and eat thyself.
My words said backwards reveal the truth,
Spoon-forced-fed and all uncooth.

The trip to the top is not the tryst.
So forget all leave and love thyself.
My cheese beats two goats from any Ramblesworth,
But to whine all the time and nothing else?

The libertine said "Do it now!"
But to retort the thought lost it's use,
And now grumbles amble beneath the tree
Root and stem, my brothers, sisters...remember them!

And to fit the finale is all but round,
Back-to-front and upside-down.
It has happened and shall finish soon,
So don't forget to leave some room.

The End ain't nigh, the truth was told,
So on it went...and still it goes.
Getting bored, time to stop...
Plank, gank, stank the loaded elf.

The originals are sometimes the best...

lil bitchiness
Originally posted by Ou Be Low hoo
Shakespeare retold in a supermarket is still Shakespeare...

Oh the wise one - you are right yet again - you might have just convincced me...

Ou Be Low hoo
Originally posted by lil bitchiness
Oh the wise one - you are right yet again - you might have just convincced me...

It certainly would be good to read something more interesting and imaginative than the current lot of 'emotive' out-pourings that are found here...

"Oh, I look out my window to see,
The flowers falling so soft-ly,
Why am I all alone?
Sitting here with my PC and mobile phone..."

ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

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