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Aww that was so cool! I was definitely laughing at the end! Keep up the good work!!

I actually was laughing from the second stanza! I want more, Smod.

I loves it! Write more write more!!!

Very nice. I rarely respond to other poets threads however seeing that you are a beginner I would extend a hand of friendy critiscm. You poems seem to surround around comedy. Including ones that may be tragic. It's good to see but do not rely always on rhyming schemes. All in all your poems are very nice and the end thought is very clear to see. Keep up the good work, and don't forget to stop by my poems...

That's really cute, Smod I had no idea you were a talented poet, as well! Always had a way with words lol

That's really nice, Smoddy. I love it. I especially like the last couple of lines. Great job!

Tassie: Such a way with words indeed.

Smods...I lovers them...keep writing

Thanks guys
Originally posted by PrinceofBlades
Very nice. I rarely respond to other poets threads however seeing that you are a beginner I would extend a hand of friendy critiscm. You poems seem to surround around comedy. Including ones that may be tragic. It's good to see but do not rely always on rhyming schemes. All in all your poems are very nice and the end thought is very clear to see. Keep up the good work, and don't forget to stop by my poems...
Well when I wrote it I kinda SANG it first...

Originally posted by Smodden
Thanks guys

Well when I wrote it I kinda SANG it first...
you can sing??!!??

why....you are multitalented

so, do you do what i do when i sing? slide across the floor with nothing but a shirt and your skivvies tom cruise like?


or....did i say too much???

Well.... mayyybe... shifty lmao! That takes talent tho Feanor Not everyone can imitate Tom Cruise

^oh yeah....

^It can help the creative process

hahahahhahaHAHAHaHAhA!!!!! lol laughing man, you and the other posts here Smod, great humor. Love it man. And your randomosity(copywright that word, charge anyone who uses it a banana!) is great and seems truly random, not planned! keep working man!

Awww! That was so cute!
Wonder what 'Melissa' would think of it now

Thats adorable Smods I lovers it

Lol if I may use the same word as Elessea.... I lovers it too

cry ... that reminded me of my post preschool days...actually 4rth grade to be exact

and actually it wasn't me who had the crush, it was the girl

which would explain my aversion to blonde overy aggressive girls with names like sandra...

awww.....I know. Isn't it funny how occurances and encounters with people like that can have such an impact on us and shape who we become in the future?

yeah....so now when i see an assertive blonde, i go into a corner sucking my thumb


mommy

Yeah life's funny that way

you're not....a blonde, are you cold?

Originally posted by Coldfire
What?? Me?? cry I AM NO BLONDE!!!!!!!! cry cry Why would you think that??!! um....because i've a fixation for all things non-blonde?

cry i've upset you....please don't tell PoB

Originally posted by Coldfire
A fixation for all things non-blonde??

Awww no you didn't hug It just totally surprised me, since I've never been called blonde before I won't let him get you don't worry nosweat phew....if he had.....laurie would have to pounce on him

...yeah but, Laurie will....she'll....glare him to death, YEAH!!!

Originally posted by Coldfire
What?? Me?? cry I AM NO BLONDE!!!!!!!! cry cry Why would you think that??!! hhahahhahahah!!!!!

you guys are all the goofy i need in a day! hahaha!

yes you will....i know it

i've been a recipient of your glare many times bag

*wants more poems*

^^So do I; And pip and I don't like to be kept waiting sneaky2

^^ yeah well...hes is at college for a week or so he should be back soon though

Yeah, so i heard Congrats, Smod -- No sense in congratulating thou in Tig, for the post shalt be buried before he returns ermm

^^well...most likely not...Tig is really really dead lately

but yes, CONGRATS JOSH

wow, people lie so well over the internet, cool poems

lie?