Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince

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The_Dark_Lord
Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince
Chapter 1

There was nothing unusual about the hot suburbs of Privet Drive.It was the second heat wave in two years and Harry Potter was wondering the streets deep in thought about the events that happened two weeks ago,he had lost the closest person to a father,he had lost his godfather,Sirius Black.not in an ordinary accedent but in a wizards duel.
Harry Potter is no ordinary boy ,he is a wizard fresh from his O.W.Ls(Ordinary Wizard Levels) from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and awaiting his results from his fifth year exams.
Harry dwelled on the thought of what would have happened if any of his friends were hurt badly or worse killed all because i wanted to play the hero.They could died and now look i've lost the closest person to my father all because of me stupid me.Harry kicked a near by lamp post and felt a sharp stabbing pain shoot through hi toe.
The neighbours peered at Harry through their curtains as Harry up the drive to number 4.The neighbours always liked to gossip about the baggy clothes Harry wore and about his unusual lightning bolt shapped scar on his forehead which makes him even more famous because Harry's parents were killed by the worlds most evil wizard who calls himself "Lord Voldemort"to the rest of the magical world his name is so frightening they call him "You Know Who" who was the worlds most powerful dark wizard who when tried to do the same killing curse to kill Harry's parents they were killed but when he turned his wand on Harry,he could not kill him because of the sacrifice his mum left after she got her sef killed that branch af magic Voldemort had forgotten about and when tried he was wipped from his own body not dead but just alive.

The_Dark_Lord
Hi guys come and read my version of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince it starts off slow but gets better as i continue.

sugar&sweet
ok i justed read it and its ok for the begining, better than wat i can do, i wouldnt even no how to start! when r u going to write more? its kool

crazykim
its a good start
hope u write more

The_Dark_Lord
Here is some more i hope you like it.
As Harry got to the from door it opened and framed in the door way was Harry's uncle Vernon he was a big beefy man with hardly any neck and a very large moustache."where have you been?your cousin Dudley has been back for an hour already"(Dudley ,who looks a lot like uncle Vernon.He has a large,pink face,not much neck,small watery blue eyes and,thick,blond hair that lay smooth on his thick.fat head).Harry looked past his uncle and Dudley came waddling in to view.He had someone with him it was a girl,they were hand in hand."Hi my name is Emma.Emma Marshall.I don't want to be rude but who are you?"Harry stood transfixed to the spot Emma had bushy brow hair and she was very tall and pretty with blue eyes.Harry's stomach gave a jolt,for a second he thought it was one of his best friends Hermione Granger a very pretty girl who to Harry's good fortune was one of Harry's best friends."Hi I'm Harry.Harry Potter".Said Harry.He looked into her eyes and thought Hermione doesn't have blue eyes she has brown eyes.But uncle Vernon realised that Harry was staring at Emma so he grabbed Harry and pulled him in the door and took him to his room."why were you starring at Dudley's girlfriend like that?".Said uncle Vernon.Harry looked at his uncle and said."Like what?I just thought that she looked like someone i know.And since when has Dudley had a girlfriend?".Said Harry."Since yesterday,they met in the park by the swings.He was over joyed because he told her his name and they started talking and he asked he round and she said yes.If you mess this up for him i will kill you and i mean it".Harry looked past his uncle through the door she was standing waving at him and then she went along to Dudley's room.For a minute Harry's stomach gave a lurch he was sure it was Hermione."Stay away from them or i will throttle you got it?".Uncle Vernon said.Harry nodded.

dark1365
Welcome! Maybe you should post this in the fanfic area.

General Fiction Area
http://www.killermovies.com/forums/f53

Get a moderator to move it for you.

raenef v
Originally posted by dark1365
Welcome! Maybe you should post this in the fanfic area.

General Fiction Area
http://www.killermovies.com/forums/f53

Get a moderator to move it for you.

yeah...this should be in the general fic area....with all the other stories about HP

The_Dark_Lord
Yeah i just wanted to see if people would read it first.

The_Dark_Lord
I'm sorry for the trouble Dark and Raenef v

RoguePw25
Moved to Fan Fics

crazykim
cool

Tangible God
bling

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