EARLY HOGWARTS james and lillys story

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kaz larner
EARLY HOGWARTS james and lilly
The train speeded down the track and still james thought about the girl he had seen earlier.
He hope they were both in the same house. James turned when the door opened and a boy walked in
'hello my names serious black, you are?" he asked as he took a seat across from James.
'Im James potter' he said shaking serious's hand.
'so which house you hoping to be in then?' serious asked as he opened a box of berty bott's every flavour beans
'well i don't mind really ' James said as he looked out of the window.
The door opened again and another boy appeared. "erm....is it ok if i come in here?" he asked
'yeah sure take a seat' the new boy sat next to James. they boys started to talk and found
out they had a lot in common mostly the tricks they played on people. It was getting dark when Serious stood up to leave
the room to find something to eat when the door opened and someone ran into him.
'hey watch it' he sai to the little boy.
'im sorry its just those people are trying to turn me into a snail' he said

O.A.R21
Great job i like it alot! ( I think its spelled like sirus though)

hk_*^^*
i luv it!! i hope u keep riting~!!

raenef v
Originally posted by hk_*^^*
i luv it!! i hope u keep riting~!!
it's SIRIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
everyone gets it wrong....
supurb!!!

kaz larner
ok i'll try and remember how you spell it now... i was told that you spelt it serious sorry
so its sirius?

kaz larner
oh yeah i might write anything cuz i making it all up as i posted it...
so do u really like it?

raenef v
wonderful!
brilliant!
perfect!
get the point?
if anyone disses this story then they face me!

yeah and it's spelt like the dog star's name
sirius
ironic that he turs into a dog!

crazykim
hey kaz its good!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kaz larner
thanks
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crazykim
told u id chec it out!!!
smilesmilesmilesmilesmilesmile

The_Dark_Lord
This is better than mine.

crazykim
urs is good 2

kaz larner
James and sirius looked at the group of boys looking in to each room.
'hey, you two seen a lad running round....anybody would think he was scared of us.'
the small chubby one said to sirius.
'what you want him for?' james asked he said glaring at the tall boy.
'we just wanna talk to him....no harm in that is there?' he said with a evil grin.
'he went that way.' sirius said pointing to the front of the train. the boys started to
walk in that direction. james turned to go back into the room where the boy was
hiding. when he heard sirius say 'don't hurt the boy to bad....alright.' then he followed
james into the room.
'ok so im james and this is my friend sirius who are you?' he asked to two strangers
'im remus lupin' said the dark blonde hair boy.
'er....im.....peter...pettigrew' he said glancing towards the door. 'erm....thank you for everything'

kaz larner
im guessing but i bet i wrote his name wrong but if you could tell me how you spell it.....it'll help big grin

raenef
Originally posted by kaz larner
im guessing but i bet i wrote his name wrong but if you could tell me how you spell it.....it'll help big grin
whose name?

kaz larner
peter pettigrew i think i spelt it wrong

raenef
Originally posted by kaz larner
peter pettigrew i think i spelt it wrong
no i think it's right...

hk_*^^*
its good and its spelt rite.

raenef
Originally posted by hk_*^^*
its good and its spelt rite.

yes it's really cool!
no one else has done another before arry story!

fantasygirl
Loving it already!! ( Just got to work on ur conventions.)

crazykim
yeah its really neat

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kaz larner
cool i just gotta think of wha to happen next lol
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crazykim
laughing out loud

fantasygirl
Ok! smile

hk_*^^*
havent been on 4 ages. good 2 b bak on. plz cuntinue the story.!

kaz larner
u like it that much then?

hk_*^^*
very~. smile

hk_*^^*
luv uk. wish i can b there 2 c dan rad.

kaz larner
lol well i don't see him that much laughing

raenef
more plz!

kaz larner
The train finally stopped at the station. "So what now?" peter asked looking at sirus.
"we get in the boats and go th hogwarts." he said
"you sure know alot about hogwarts" James said looking around at the others students.
"yeah i do.. you wanna know anything about anyone i can tell you." he said following the other
students towards the lake.
"ok who is that?" James said pointing towards the girl he had seen early and that had plagued
his thoughts.
"er... thats Lilly Evans.. why so interested...do u fancy her?" sirius said with a grin
"no i don't just wanted to know" james said as remus and peter laughed behind him.

crazykim
yes more plz.

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crazykim
hey we crashed at the same time

crazykim
sure is cool

kaz larner
ok what r u talking about?

hk_*^^*
more plz!

raenef
wonderful!!

hk_*^^*
MORE!!MORE!!!

kaz larner
Originally posted by hk_*^^*
MORE!!MORE!!!

chill chill lol i gotta think what i should do next big grin

crazykim
Originally posted by kaz larner
ok what r u talking about?

i mean that u posted the very same second i typed the mes.

ni meant to say urs is cool

kaz larner
Originally posted by crazykim
i mean that u posted the very same second i typed the mes.

ni meant to say urs is cool

ok cool big grin big grin

crazykim
big grinbig grinbig grinbig grin

kaz larner
i dunno what 2 do next... wait i have an idea but needs work bye

hk_*^^*
okey dokey

raenef
great!

crazykim
hope u can post today
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misslilsweetie
MORE PLEASE!

hk_*^^*
so..um, n/e ideas yet?

kaz larner
"lilly wait up.. i'll sit next to you" renee said as she ran toward lilly.
"ok..." she said as she noticed the boy from earlier looking her way.
"what ya looking at?" renee said as the moved closer to the boats.
"you see that boy thats looking at us... no don't look" she said when renee turned to follow lillys line of vision
"well how can i see him if i can't look at him, silly" she looked over at the group of boys now laughing
"let me go findout their names..." she said
"no... wait..." but it was pointless lilly watched as renee went over to the boys.
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james watched as lillys friend came over to them. "hello im renee thats my friend lilly" she point to
lilly and then turned back to them and asked "whats your name?"
"im sirius this is james, remus and peter" sirius said and he started talking to remus about something else
"ok, well maybe we'll all be in the same house" she smile and walked back to where lilly was standing.
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"ok their names are sirius.... he's nice he's talking to remus" she said pointing at the two boys "and the
little one is peter and that other one is james" she smiled and waved at james and sirius.
"and what else did you talk about? with james i mean?" lilly asked as she sat in the boat next to renee.
"well i said that i hope we all in the same house... why do u fancy him?" she said making kissy nosies

The_Dark_Lord
It's great please put some more up. smile Happy Dance big grin

fantasygirl
LOL!

kaz larner
ok ok calm down big grin big grin big grin

hꖻ
i dont know none of u!
why am i here
why am i posting here


ur all werid i say WERID!!!!!

IM OUT!!!

kaz larner
ok... so if u dont know us or anything why u posting?

The_Dark_Lord
Yeah why are you posting if you think we are all MAD. cool cool

kaz larner
we r not mad.. well i dont think i am big grin

crazykim
none of us r mad
that guy is mad smilesmile

kaz larner
hahahahahahaha yeah we are all fine! big grin

crazykim
anyway kaz whenr u gonna write more?

kaz larner
i dunno yet big grin

crazykim
oh well ill wait

The_Dark_Lord
If we're weird why are you here????????

hk_*^^*
moi still waitin..

The_Dark_Lord
I'm still waiting to...

fantasygirl
WAITING......... I'm usually a patient person but this is driving me nuts!!!!!!!!

kaz larner
ok ok i'll try and post some soon.....
CHILL! laughing

The_Dark_Lord
I can't chill i need MORE.

kaz larner
lol dark lord i think u can chill for a couple of hours cant ya?

crazykim
were all waitin...
cuz its so good
but we waitin very long

The_Dark_Lord
It's been a couple of days.i need more. big grin big grin big grin big grin big grin big grin big grin

kaz larner
lol i'll try my best big grin sorry ppl i didnt know sad

kaz larner
"no i don't its just i seen him before and was interested" lilly said sticking her tongue out at renee,
just as james look over at them again.
"is that anyway to look at the boy thats gonna be your husband in the future." renee joked
"Lilly and james sitting in a tree K..I.S..S..I..N..G. first comes love second comes marriage
then comes a baby in a babycarriage" she whispered to lilly.
Then she sat in the boat as they moved futher on to the lake, she noticed that james and the
others were in the boat next to them.
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"well....what are you waiting for james talk to the girl." sirius whispered to james.
ok ok what do i say...? you say hello you dummy..... james thought to himself, he opened
his mouth to say something but the words wouldn't come out.
"h.....h.....hello." good now you have to hope she doesn't think your a complete monkey.
"hi im lilly " she answered she smiled at him and james felt himself blush
"i'm....er......erm....."
"his name is james" remus told lilly with a smile, lilly smiled back.
james blushed a bit more. what he didn't notice was that the boats were moving further apart
"im james, james potter i hope im in gyffindor house don't you" he said as he leaned closer
to lilly as the boats moved further apart.
"i don't mind which house i'm in....james" she said to him
"what these are my friends sirius, peter and remuuuu............. " he shouted as he fell in the
lake.

kaz larner
happy now?

misslilsweetie
lol its soo good keep going!

crazykim
for now
YES

raenef
more!

The_Dark_Lord
More.

kaz larner
i like only just wrote that part big grin chill!!!

crazykim
come on

The_Dark_Lord
So i need more.

hk_*^^*
MORE!! MOREE!!

kaz larner
CHILL! CHILL! LOL

fantasygirl
I can't chill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kaz larner
lol

crazykim
lol
more more
lol

raenef
nice going potter!!!!!!!!!
lol!!!!!!
need more!!!!!!
great story!!!!!!!!
more!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol!!!!!!!
laughinglaughinglaughinglaughinglaughing

kaz larner
"here give me your hand" lilly said leaning closer to james. james grabbed her hand and allowed her to pull him
her boat. "renee help me pull him on" lilly ordered her friend. They pulled him and he got half way in the boat
when it tipped over. "JAMES!" lilly shouted.
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"im really sorry, about pulling you in the lake." james said staring at his soaked shoes his mum was going
to go crazy at him when she found out.
"it doesn't matter" lilly smiled at him and james knew he had a funny look on his face. and lilly began to giggle.
"and everyone else found it funny"
"yeah they did, my friends nearly let us fall in again cuz they were laughing so much." lilly giggled at james
"wow" she said "look at the school"
"yeah its amazing" james said not looking at the school but at lilly, when lilly turned to look at him he quickly
looked away.
"hey, lilly my name is remus by the way dont think james had time to tell you." remus said and the three boys
began to laugh.

kaz larner
happy again now? lol

crazykim
weeeeeeeeeeeeee
so happy
write more
write more
please??

kaz larner
embarrasment i only just wrote it

kaz larner
lol i will write some as soon as i can big grin

keiji
yes!!!!!!
pull your crush in too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
laughinglaughinglaughinglaughinglaughing

crazykim
yes yes why not

crazykim
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kaz larner
why not what? im confused

crazykim
it was a joke
u know
why not pull ur crush in too

kaz larner
oh ok (still dont get it ) i might write some more laterz

fantasygirl
When will u post more?

crazykim
same question when will u post more

kaz larner
in a bit chill

crazykim
i chillin just cant wait for more

keiji
what i meant was nice going potter! why don't you just pull your chrush into the lake too!
laughinglaughinglaughinglaughinglaughing
moooooooore!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kaz larner
ok when i get on the right laptop i write some more big grin big grin

Hermione202
Hi pleez post more .its great!!!

The_Dark_Lord
Yeah please post. big grin big grin big grin big grin

kaz larner
"wellcome to hogwarts first years, we hope you enjoy your time here and try not to get hurt." headmaster dumbledore said looking in the direction of james. "in the morning you will be given your timetable for the year, by your head of house"he looked around the room. " but for now enjoy this fantastic feast"
All the first years 'ahhh'ed as the food appeared before them. but james was to busy watching Lilly. 'next time you talk to her try not to get her hurt, if theres a next time' james thought he looked down at his food but he wasnt hungry. he turned to his friends when he heard them laughing "whats so funny?"
"look at that kid" remus whispered to james. james looked over at the slithrin table, there was a little boy, with black greasy hair and a thin face. "whats his name again sirius?"
sirius smiled "his name is severus snape" he laughed eviliy "and itseems he likes lilly aswell". james looked over atseverus snape and he instantly hated the other boy.
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Lilly sneaked a look at james and he seemed angry at someone, he was staring at the slithrin table. at a certain boy,
she felt sorry for the other boy because it seemed he didn't have any friends and james and his friends were laughing at the other boy. 'oh no was i wrong about james? is he a bully?, should he be in slitherin house?' lilly asked herself silently then she continued to talk to the other girls in her year.

misslilsweetie
its great post more soon

Hermione202
yea post more

kaz larner
happy now? lol

crazykim
coool
hope you can continue soon

The_Dark_Lord
Much better hope you post more.

hk_*^^*
awesum ^cant wait till u post more

kaz larner
lol i gotta go on my other laptop to write this story so i post soon big grin

keiji
that's why they hate each other.....

kaz larner
huh? do u mean snape and james? then for now yes lol im just making this up as i go along so it might not fit in with the harry potter stories lol

fantasygirl
*chanting* POST, POST,POST, POST......!!!!!!!!!!

crazykim
pleez continue

kaz larner
might b able to write some more 2mora big grin
chill lol

misslilsweetie
uhhhhhhhh i cant stand it any longer! jk jk post when u can

keiji
*waiting*
*pacing*
addiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

crazykim
post!!!!

kaz larner
chill!!!!

crazykim
ok
post!!

crazykim
hihihiihihi
sorry

kaz larner
lol i will post as soon as i can

keiji
crazykim, chill! she'll post more soon!

hk_*^^*
um..wen u posting more?

kaz larner
when i can i will post again

misslilsweetie
ok ill wait....this is hard to wait for....lol...

keiji
think of it this way. the longer we wait.....the better it will be.

crazykim
i guess keiji's got a point
but still..

misslilsweetie
true true

kaz larner
lol look i will try my hardest to post 2mora ok big grin

kaz larner
hi i know i aint been on 4 few days i will try hardest to post some later

misslilsweetie
ok

kaz larner
At the end of the feast when all the food had disappeared the students we to their common room. James waited for Lilly.
"Hi again." Lilly said to James "it was great wasn't it?"
"yeah to bad we have to start our lessons tomorrow" James sighed
"well lessons might be fun, i think magic is great, my sister doesnt though. she thinks im weird." Lilly looked away from james.
"why does she think that, she must be weird to, if you both do magic" james saw his friends laughing at one another.
"well we don't, iim the only witch in my family my parents think its great but not my sister."
"well when you get home at the end of the year you could always play trick on her" James grinned
"what kind of trick?"
"well does she know we not allowed to do magic outside of school?" James paused while Lilly shook her head.
"just pretend you going to put a jinx on her, that will stop her being mean." james laughed
"i don't know, maybe if shes really mean i will"
James and Lilly caught up with remus, sirius and peter, and they ll walked to the common rooms
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Later on in the boys room the four lads were talking
"so what you going to do about severus? james" remus asked when he got into bed
"nothing if he starts on me then i'll deal with it"
"not on your own mate, no one starts on my friends" sirius said
"thanks sirius, do you think lilly might like him... more than me i mean?" James asked his friends
"James if i was you i would just ive up on lilly, severus likes her." Peter said nervously
"if you were james you wouldn't have even been able to say hello." sirius said and all the boys laughed
"James i think that you and lilly make a perfect couple... as long a your not near any water" and the boys began to laugh.
Peter was laughing so hard he fell of his bed.

kaz larner
happy now? lol i bet it is so no following on with what i last wrote

misslilsweetie
it does make sense to the other part u wrote its good

kaz larner
yay!! lol

HPRox90
Yeah, this is really good!!! Plz keep writing!!

kaz larner
i will when i can lol ok

HPRox90
This story is great!!! Keep on writing!!!

crazykim
wonderfulllllllllllllll!!

kaz larner
i'll write some more as soon as i can ok

crazykim
okidoki
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HPRox90
Plzz write more!!!

kaz larner
im really busy now so i dont know when i will b able to post sad sorry

crazykim
plz........... post

potty4potter
hey, it was totally gr8, well done!! keep on writing cool

kaz larner
The next day they started there lessons, first they had Charms which was easy enough except James's feather only made it up in the air once
and then ended up shooting across the room almost hitting a student, sirius and the others had thought this funny but James was so
embaressed because Lilly had been watching. Then they had had Potions which Peter had not enjoyed as they were in the same class as
Slytherin and he just happened to be sat next to those boys that were looking for him on the train. Lilly was sitting next to severus at the front of the
class this made James very jealous, so in the lesson he just happened to walk past Severus's couldren and slip something in it and with in second of sitting
down severus's potion blown up in his face. Everyone started to laugh except for severus who stormed out the room. When the lesson had finished James and
Sirius were the last to leave, out side the door Lilly was waiting for them. "That was a horrible thing you did James and i know it was you." She said in a angry
voice.
"Er... we'll see you later mate." Sirius and the other boys left him and Lilly alone.
"Look i was only having a laugh, not my problem he can't take a joke." James said as he started walking to the stairs.
"It still wasnt nice, look please don't be mean to him when he hasn't done anything to you ok?" Lilly pledded.
"ok" James watched her leave thinking 'she must really like him, but i'll make her like me too no more jokes on severus." He carried on walking to his next lesson.

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