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Vaya's poetry! Join the fun.

I'll post some of my poems in here, and you guys can comment if you like. Also feel free to share your poems to.

This is a poem I wrote today.

This is no Love song by: Me

This is no love song.
Even though my heart aches to give you one.

There are no love songs For you.
No! None for you.
Because all those silly love songs
are simply not good enough for you.

No! This is no love song.
Not for you.

If you want something special
Then let me tell you..
This is no love song, but
I do love you.

No! This is no love song.
They just would not be good enough.
No! They just are not good enough.

If you want something special, or
something different then take my heart.
Because this is no love song, but
I do love you.


So you can't have a love song.
They just not good enough, but
you can have my heart.
Because I love you.

Cute. Have you written more?

That is cute! I would like to hear more as well.

nice. intiguing style. I really enjoy the duality in the seemingly simple wording yet complex emotional context. now, get back on the keys and type more!!!! hahaha

Here is another one.


Title: The Beauty of this Hidden Heart.
The beauty of this hidden heart, springing from the darken mind.
A wind blows of a cloud, chilling to my ears.
Then I heard the mellodies of silver bells.
A voice from out of the darkness cries "The breath of god will be here tonight".


Longing for a hidden heart, but where is the Heart?
For I seek this heart.
Is it far? Or is it near?
I want to see the beauty it shares.

Searching for what is fair. It seems to me that its not near.
I heard it is like pure soul, with beauty that cannot be told.
If only I could find this heart.
but its lost in the dark.
For many years I have searched.
Nothing has been found.
Hopefully I will find that heart I yearn to seek.
For I will treasure its every beat.

nice.....nice...NICE...... i like. i like a lot!!! More.. must have more vaya.....

The Hunter by Me

The Man is watching me from the beach.
He will always be watching me.

It's a beast, not a that looks at me so.
I shuddered to think its watching me.

This beast admires me, and believes I am a beautiful.
For not only does this beast want my body, but my soul.

Interesting. more...

This one is weird. I wrote it a few years ago.

Title: Tortures that they thrist

The souls that knew it well
That I suffer in pain, was indeed my parents.

They think of me as a horrible biran.
They tormented me for hours.
Death is near!
Bright hope its self has fled at last.
Bow down in sorrow, and in shame.
My hope has flowed away.

Oh, the tortures that they thrist.
Their tortures are my worse pains.
Chilling, and killing me in every way.
As my soul starts to break.
I began to weep.
While I weep life fades away.

Oh, God please! Take me away
from the tortures my parents has put
upon me.
Please! Please take me away.

kinda at a loss other than wow... hahaha

It has a lot of meaning to it

My only friend is going away.
He never says he was my friend.
Nor that he will miss me.


He is a soldier.
No emotions is what he goes for.
All I want is for him to miss me one time.
He is one of my only friends

What will be come of him?
Will I ever have anymore friends?

Loneness can be so cold, but yet its not so bad.
When you are lonely you can't be hurt.
No you can't be hurt.

But will I ever have anymore friends?
Will he ever miss me?

Only a soldier knows.

I like. been a soldier, and this gets me in the gut... Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
My only friend is going away.
He never says he was my friend.
Nor that he will miss me.


He is a soldier.
No emotions is what he goes for.
All I want is for him to miss me one time.
He is one of my only friends

What will be come of him?
Will I ever have anymore friends?

Loneness can be so cold, but yet its not so bad.
When you are lonely you can't be hurt.
No you can't be hurt.

But will I ever have anymore friends?
Will he ever miss me?

Only a soldier knows.

That poem is ok ...its not really one of my favorites.. just got bored.

pretty hard-hitting boredom sweets.

Who shall be sent by me


If the world is dead, and all is lost
Who shall be sent?

Is it me, or is it you?
Will the world come to the ways of the old
Or will it perish?


Shall there be death, or will there be light?
Will you go and fight?

Not with swords, or with guns.
They will not matter in the end.

Only words, and kindness shall break the evil.
Who will be sent?

Is it me, or is it you?
Who will stand up for what is right?

Kindness is the only way.
When the light shines down
We will all be taken back by the light so bright.

So who shall go, and who will stay?
Will it be me, or will it be you?

Does anyone have a clue?

As long as we stand, and fight.
Not with swords, or with the guns.

We will be saved.

Hmm... nice! Irregular style, great message.

Thank you.

Just wrote it.

Now YOU need to write more... hahahaha. can you do one on the forest?

Maybe later

no, now!! schnell! hahah ok.

Come see my weeping willow
and my lazy lion.

In the forest where elves roam.
They is one elf who is unknow.

One who likes to be alone.
You can see her when she dreams.

She has a tree that guards her dearly.
He likes to dance, and play with his branches.

Everything is happy, but beware of the fairies.

For not everything is what it seems.
In this elven forest. There is queen.

Her name is Vaya.

Watch her play, watch her laugh, and you will find a smile at last.
She loves her forest. Where she can relax.

None dare to bother her.

All the dragons gather to meet her. She is only in dreams, but in good ones at that.

This Vaya loves the forest, and loves the animals. She would not trade anything to stay where she is.

She loves herself, and her people. All her friends are her deepest treature.

You can find her in her dreams, and in her forest. She loves to play, and to laugh.

So stop on by, and have fun at last.

*hops of the horse* ok, where's the fun? Party hearty, anyone?
haha great, Vaya. Cool imagery and nice light-heartedness. I like.

*laughs*

The party is in my forest of course.


Glad you like my poem.

Lead me to the forest babe, I'll put off the knight and become the knave. hahaha loved it all. write more soon.

He laughs when no one else laughs
Maybe he is crazy.

Yes crazy. Thats what he is.
For he always gets the last laugh.

His jokes are not funny. Who could he be?

He wears way to much purple, and his skin is ugly.

Evil is what he loves, and what he enjoys.

He even abuses the ones he loves.

This lost soul might never come back. At least in his mind he has
a good laugh.


This man looks way to funny, and even smells like fish.

Where did he come from? Where will he go?

He makes a good show. All i know is beware of this guy, and remember
he will always have the last laugh.

hmm... starts out kinda haha and ends up twisted. leaves me wanting more, and wanting to know who or what you are describing.

I might tell you if you give me chocolate .. *laughs*

*evilly grins* chocolate I have, but It shall cost. Are you willing the forest boundary to cross? heh heh heh....

You can go to my forest. All are welcome

Title:Fathers knows best


We use to be close. Some how we drifted apart.
Now we are just tense. Nothing much to say.

Other than the fact I yearn to be little again.
If only I was yours when I was small.
Then maybe you would love me like you do Sis.

I know I have two fathers, and I know fathers know best.
What has happened to us?
Can I ease the past?

Am I bothering you? If so I'm sorry
For I yearn to be your loving daughter.

All I want is to be loved, and to be with you.
How can we get back to where we use to?

I know I'm only adopted, but you might as well be my father.


Love you always. Like daughers do, but please tell me
how to get you do love me to.

wow. nice, very poignant.

Thanks. Just wrote that today to

cool.

snoring, drooling, it does not matter
as long as I'm a sleep.

While I sleep I dream of dreams.
Dreams of sleep. Cause sleep is good.

If I wake let me dream. If i sleep let me be.


Those who wake me Let you be warned. ..

I won't listen. Just keep sleeping on.

So let me be.

I'd rather sleep, then be bothered by you.

Sleep is good. Sleep is cool.

This poem is getting dull so I will go sleep some more.

Ooo you're good Vaya

hahah nice...

Thanks

I'll probably write another one soon.

That one I was just really sleepy.

I hear your name, and I miss you.
Pain fills my head.
I never want to lose you.


I know we will part.
If only I could be with you.

You are my love, and my hope.
So please take me with you.

I shed tears for you.
When I'm a lone I can still see you.


I hear your name, and I miss you.
Pain fills my head.
I never want to love you.
No.. Never!

You are my love, and my hope.


We are so prefect, and I never want to leave you.
Take me with you.



Can't tell you to go, and I can't tell you to stay.
All I know is I want to be with you.

You are my love, and my hope.


I never want to lose you.
No, never!

cry That ones really good!

Glad you like it *smiles*

As DO I

*smiles*

Thank you.

You try knock me down, but i won't let you
My tears I shed would never be for you.
Can't knock me down.

When you throw your worse.
I'll stand right back up, and says your worse is not
good enough.

Hurt me
Abuse me
Scream at me

It does not matter.
You can't pull me down.
I'll stand right back, and just smile.

Can't you see?
None of my tears are for you.
Your worse is no good.

You can hate all you want, but your hate
is just a cover up.
I know your real battle is not me.
It's you.

Keep on trying to pull me with you, but I won't go.

Your worse is no good.
Can't knock me down.
Because I have God in my heart, and
his all I ever needed.

Maybe someday too.. You will find him.
Until then just remember I've got something you don't.

I'm unbreakable.
You worse can do no harm.
Can't knock me down.

10Finally, be strong in the Lord and in his mighty power. 11Put on the full armor of God so that you can take your stand against the devil's schemes.

Ephesians 6:10-11 (NIV)

Originally posted by Drackett
10Finally, be strong in the Lord and in his mighty power. 11Put on the full armor of God so that you can take your stand against the devil's schemes.

Ephesians 6:10-11 (NIV)

Thanks.

I know what to do. Just sometimes you get caught up in the moment of things, but I always pull myself together in the end.

Vaya, great work. glad to get back on and see new stuff here!!!

This is a tale of a girl.
Who lives in her own world.

A girl who fears everything, but yet nothing.
For she struggles to breath, but she still dreams.

Dark was her world.
Shadows keep her close, and her mind was clouded with fear.

Everything she loved turned to bad.
So she became sad.

This is about girl who struggled to breath.
A girl who was alone.

Her death came close so many times.
The darkness kept her close.
She longed to be somewhere else.


This girl was alone.
With no one at her side.

Kicked down, and broken
She struggled to breath.

Lost, and dazed.
Without any hope.

Death came so close, so many times.
She strugged to breath.

This girl was not just anyone.. She was me.

The tale goes on.
Yes the tale does gone.

She found hope at least.
In a way she never dreamed.

She found her father who loved her.
Without a care of what had happen.

This girl bowed before him, and she prayed.
To have her father was like no other.

He gave her hope.
Let her live.

She found peace.
She found friends
She found love.
And she found family.

Most of all she lived.
She found hope in her father.

She could breath again.

cool. nice deepness, no heavy words.

I Love it

Thank you

A day without you.
Makes me long more for you.


Remembering how you hold me, and how you love me.
Just missing you.

A day without you is not that much fun.


Embacing you is all I ever want.
It's all I ever dream.


A day without you its just no fun.

So hold me.
Embrace me.

I won't mind.

Because A day with you is the most fun.

A Day with the one you love Is fun isn't it

Originally posted by Drackett
A Day with the one you love Is fun isn't it

Sometimes I'm wrong.
Most the time I regret.

When will I learn to never look back.
Why can't let go?

What I'm I all about?
I'm just me, but who is me?

I think I know.
Although What should I be?

I'm never good enough.
Not in the least.

No one seems to understand.
I'm just me.

To many things
All in my head.

Things that are, and things already to be.

What should I do?
Where should I go?


I'm never good enough.
Where's my home?

Please let me be.
I don't belong anywhere.
Not in the least.

These tears I cry are all the same.
I'm so cold, and it always rains.

Nothing ever right.
Not when I'm in sight.

So let the rain pour.
Let me soak it up.
That's when I remember how this came about.

On the ground.
Around the mud.
I begin to fall, and life turns around.

Here I am.
On the ground.
Feet cold. My head tired.


I see a light.
To my right.
Turn and glance, but I lose sight.

Where did it go?
How do I follow?
I'm so cold.
and life is to hollow.

Great stuff

Thank you

Nice M'lady. A lotta despair in the poems... very personal. I can nod along with each. If it IS your experience, all I can offer is a helping hand up outta the mud and the promise that the rain will end.

I'm glad you could relate to my poems

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
I'm glad you could relate to my poems

ha ha ha.... *shakes head* hey, join the Helpless Romantics Club!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ha ha ha.... *shakes head* hey, join the Helpless Romantics Club!


Sounds exciting *laughs*

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Sounds exciting *laughs*
No, really. Haha i actually made a thread called that on the off topic forum. ahhahahahah!

Did not notice it.

I need to write another poem. Just have not decided on what.

hahaha how bout ...... Jakk?

Maybe

In a dream of dreams.
With nothing but faded memorys.


Seems to me life is to short.
and all i have are dreams.

Dreams of me, and dreams of you.
Maybe dreams I never knew.

All these dreams seem so fun.
All because life is so dull.

Dream a dream, and I'll dream with you.

Keep me in mind when you dream.
For I love to dream, and to dream with you.

You will be in my dreams to.

Cool. dreams. good stuff.

It was just something quick

haha!

I want to write something meanful, but not sure what

Why not?

I like your poems a lot Vaya Hope you come up with a great idea soon

How bout one for your children if you ever want/have/had any.

Originally posted by Coldfire
I like your poems a lot Vaya Hope you come up with a great idea soon

Thank you


As for the children. I'm not sure I want children or not.

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Thank you


As for the children. I'm not sure I want children or not.
hahhaaha! yeah, that is a life changing experience and decision. may all your dreams become reality someday, Lady Vaya.

Your too

The seasons fade
while life changes
Still no call

Thinking of you
Where have you gone?

Do you remember me?
and all the days we shared.
Were have they gone.

Months become seasons, and seasons become years

Do you even give a damn.


Life is good.
Even though I'm without you.
I've found a lover who is like no other.

He loves me, and I love him.
Do you remember when we were lovers?

No. I don't miss it.
No. I don't want you back.
All i want to know is your ok.

My new love, is better than your love.
Never leaves me, and never doubts me.

Do you feel shame? or jealous?
I've finally got love, and he is like no other.

No I don't want your love.
I've got all the love I need
He is my new love, and our love is perfect

So don't try to get me back.
I'll never go back.
For I have a new love, and his love is better.

That was soooo good

Thank you

hah, warms me heart it does yarrrr (for personal reasons...) I like it. haha thumbs_up thumbs_up

Now you got me wondering

Lol same here

Trying to think of a new poem to write. Just not sure what the topic
should be

Damp is my face, because have no one to turn to.
Without friend, without anyone who will care.
You were my friend, but now you go.
Please remember me, and I'll remember you.

Lone is my forsaken room.
Thoughts of you, and of all those who ever
knew me. Where did they go?

Whom shall me my friend.
Does anyone care?

You are my friend.
Let's hope it never ends.

For I will remember you, and if only you will remember me.

So lets say goodbye, but yet lets not.
For our friendship should go on.

You were my dearest friend.
So lets hope it never ends.

So long, and goodbye
You were close to me, just hope you will remember

very great stuff

Thanks

Very nice

thanks

deep emotion... cool. Wonderin bout what???!!!

It's about one of my friends who is leaving

When I dream ...

your there

when i dream

it seems like a fantasy

So I dream

for me

Dreams are made to dream

You never leave when I dream

Everything is so simple when I dream

So dream, and dream again

Dream of me

because I dream of you

It's so simple

You are with me when i dream

So take me with you.

and dream a dream

catchy

it sucks

if thats what you think

haha dreams are my thing babe. like it.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha dreams are my thing babe. like it.
They're my thing too. Sometimes that's all I think my life is is dreams lol

yeah, and waking sucks ! hahha!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
yeah, and waking sucks ! hahha!
Very much so lol

I love to dream. Although this poem I feel like its one of my worse ones.

since me myself is a dreamer... i think its okey

Thank you

Little turtle why are you scared?
Don't you know the worm is not scary.
It may wiggle, but its not hairy.

Little turtle why are you scared?
Can't you see the other turtle is friendly.
Maybe he just wants to play, and he does not smell.
So why do you run away?

Little turtle why are you scared?
Is it something I wear.
I give you food, and you still run.
Don't you know I'm just here for fun.

Little turtle don't be scared.
You are my turtle, so please don't run.

hahaha! funny and different.

Thanks

Alone in my room
and thoughts of you.
How could ever be so good?

You are inside of me.
Dreaming with me.
I know you are my love.

Missing you for real.
It has not been long, but it seems so long
When will you hold me again?

These thoughts of you keeps me dreaming.
Thinking of how you hold me so tight.
and how I love you so much.

Can it get any better than this?
All I want is for you to hold me, and keep me.
Dreaming of love, and how I am blessed.

So hold me again! and keep me for real
Your my love, and lets keep it like this.

very very cool.

In a World where love never ends.
Dreams never fade.
and the clouds look like clay.

I see you everyday, and in every way.
Where there is only us, and all the creatures that are around.

We play all day, and kiss in the rain.
Never sad, or gray.

Acting like children, but in fun sort of way.

Embracing each other each, and everyday.

Never tired. Never bored.
Keep on playing, and Embracing until their we are no more.

All alone. Without a care.
Only creatures around us.

In a world like no other.
Were we can love each other.
Were the creatures roam freely
and we play like children.

It's all so cheerful here, with you here.
All the sudden I began to wake, and the world begins to fade.

If I want to go back. I know just what to do.
and i think I shall. It's my life, and I dream of world that is like no
other.

The most important part is I dream, and remain with you.

also very cool. haha more please! i want thirds! hahaha

A boy who is all lone.
Only thinks of his troubles.
Lost of love one, only makes his pain close to him.

He has no one.
Alone, and down.
See's a way out, but not sure what is right.

Thinks of all his pain.
All the pain, and the love one lost.
He wants to end his pain, but does not know if its right.

Holds a gun to his head, and thinks to himself
He thinks to himself.
Alone, and scared.
Wants to get rid of this pain, and his life.
Not sure if its right.

Who will help him?
He is not sure that its right.
Is there anyone one to tell him?

He pulls the tigger, but not at himself.
He pulls the tigger, but not at himself.
Lost, and scared.

Does not know whats right?
Did anyone not tell him..
Tell him their was father..

It was to late.
He pulled the tigger anyway.
but he was not sure it was right.

Was their anyone their to tell him?
That there was another way to end his pain, and to tell him
of his father.
It was to late.

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
A boy who is all lone.
Only thinks of his troubles.
Lost of love one, only makes his pain close to him.

He has no one.
Alone, and down.
See's a way out, but not sure what is right.

Thinks of all his pain.
All the pain, and the love one lost.
He wants to end his pain, but does not know if its right.

Holds a gun to his head, and thinks to himself
He thinks to himself.
Alone, and scared.
Wants to get rid of this pain, and his life.
Not sure if its right.

Who will help him?
He is not sure that its right.
Is there anyone one to tell him?

He pulls the tigger, but not at himself.
He pulls the tigger, but not at himself.
Lost, and scared.

Does not know whats right?
Did anyone not tell him..
Tell him their was father..

It was to late.
He pulled the tigger anyway.
but he was not sure it was right.

Was their anyone their to tell him?
That there was another way to end his pain, and to tell him
of his father.
It was to late.

umm.... whoa. being that I have sat with gun in mouth, this poem hits hard....

Lets hope that never happens again

hahaha..... well, I try to keep myself in line, and positive. having loving friends like JJ and all helps alot!

Life seems to hard when you are not near.
Where should I go, and where shall I stay?
All I need is your embrace.

Keep me close, and hold me tight.
Don't let go until I die.

All things are clear when your near.
So why do I fear?

Heartaches are hard.
So lets not end.

Fear is not my friend.
When you are close everything is clear.

So hold me close, and hold me tight.
Don't let go until I die.

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Life seems to hard when you are not near.
Where should I go, and where shall I stay?
All I need is your embrace.

Keep me close, and hold me tight.
Don't let go until I die.

All things are clear when your near.
So why do I fear?

Heartaches are hard.
So lets not end.

Fear is not my friend.
When you are close everything is clear.

So hold me close, and hold me tight.
Don't let go until I die.


very lovely.......very lovely indeed.

Thank you

Glad to see you online again.

The rain it falls so gently.
Even as it falls I still hear the birds.
The still sing of songs no gets.

As I hear the thunder, and see the rain.
I still hear those birds, and their songs.

Now the rain starts to pour, and I barely hear the birds.
Wonder what they are saying? Wonder if they are scared?

I only hear one bird as it begins to really pour.
That one little bird is keeps singing, and it never stops.

What would it be like to be a bird?
Would you keep singing?

Yes.
I'd like to think I would.

When it pours lets hope I would.

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
The rain it falls so gently.
Even as it falls I still hear the birds.
They still sing of songs no gets.

As I hear the thunder, and see the rain.
I still hear those birds, and their songs.

Now the rain starts to pour, and I barely hear the birds.
Wonder what they are saying? Wonder if they are scared?

I only hear one bird as it begins to really pour.
That one little bird is keeps singing, and it never stops.

What would it be like to be a bird?
Would you keep singing?

Yes.
I'd like to think I would.

When it pours lets hope I would.

Great stuff Vaya

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Life seems to hard when you are not near.
Where should I go, and where shall I stay?
All I need is your embrace.

Keep me close, and hold me tight.
Don't let go until I die.

All things are clear when your near.
So why do I fear?

Heartaches are hard.
So lets not end.

Fear is not my friend.
When you are close everything is clear.

So hold me close, and hold me tight.
Don't let go until I die.
awesome job, M'lady. very awesome...

Thanks to both of you

What footprints do I take?
May only seem I'm in spot, but maybe I'm not.
Do I even know?

Can I make those footprints bigger?
Let everyone see the footprints I have to give.
If only I could give much more.

Footprints seem so little, but I know over time
they can change even the biggest of things.
For small things also matter.
So where do i leave my footprints behind?

All over us and KMC. hahaha! good poem!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
All over us and KMC. hahaha! good poem!
Lol yes Tis very nice si

Love your poems.

Thanks everyone

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Thanks everyone
Your very welcome Post some more soon please yes

I will.

Just have to think of what I want to write about .. lol

Lol yeah I've been there many a time yes

You cry every day, and every night.
All the memories that we shared you did not care.
So much was lost, and now you care.

Only when all is striped away will you want what was.
You cry every day, and every night.
Why did you lie?

Now you are alone.
There is no one their.
Who do you turn to?
What can i say?
I did not want to cause such pain.

So sorry that I hurt.
Did not know that you lied.

I can't help fight your tears that are inside.
You waited to long, and we said our goodbyes.
Can't you see I've gone on with my life.

You should have not lied.
Now you cry every day, and every night.
You let me go, and you had to lie.

Don't know how to help you, but I'm sorry I don't love you.
You do need help, but I can't love you.

All I can do is listen to you.
Thats not all you want, and thats not all you need.
You want it all, because you lost it all.

Like I said before I can't love you.
You had me once, and you let go.
Now its time you let go.

I Like it

winkiss thanks kisses

aww i feel so loved

I like it... very sad...

Thank you

Yes was very nice yes

Did you post your poem yet?

Ouch...... that poem is awesome Vaya.

Thanks.. Here is one about my lizard that died today

Poor Poor lizard
So broken down.
Pale beyond belief.
So sick you are, and if only I'd have help.

I'll miss you, and so will your mate.

Let's hope you had you like your lizard life
and I'll say a prayer for you

Did not know you suffered so.
I'm so sorry, and I hope you were not in a lot pain.

Now I put you in the ground, and you well never wake again.


Your mate is so lonely, and I feel so sad.

Lets hope you like your lizard life, and lets hope I will see you again.

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Did you post your poem yet?
Mmmhmm

And your poor lizard

I miss her.

She died yesterday

I like your poetry. My condonlences (is it like this??) It's always a tragedy when a pet dies. I see them like not only friends but also as my children.

A friend that departs
It's always a hole in our hearts
Let's hope that a better life comes to them
Since we had to break ways

A bit out of the sky but that's what came out keep it up

cheers

Originally posted by Darth_Rankkor
I like your poetry. My condonlences (is it like this??) It's always a tragedy when a pet dies. I see them like not only friends but also as my children.

A friend that departs
It's always a hole in our hearts
Let's hope that a better life comes to them
Since we had to break ways

A bit out of the sky but that's what came out keep it up

cheers


Glad you like them. I have one about an elf. Did you see it?

Well actually its about me kind of.

Sorry for your loss, sweets. Great poetry.

Thanks.

I do miss her, but i think i will be ok.

Sorry... hope you are ok.

I will be. Thanks for your concern though