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Im writing a poem on here because not a damn person is ever on the poetry forum, so its going here

Anticipation

She doesn't know how I feel
She can't
I wish she could see inside my head so she could understand

Beauty doesn't even begin to describe her
If only others saw her through my eyes...

This is the worst feeling I have ever had,
but I feel so wonderful that I can't sleep at night
Could this emotion be a bad thing?
I ask myself: if I could feel nothing for her, would I?
Never

I would give anything
I would give any earthly possession and material thing I have ever had
I would give my life

She wants someone to return love to her
It is right in front of her eyes
Does she see me?
....not the way I see her


now rate it for me, and everyone else is allowed to have their "feelings" rated also

I like it, you obviously put alot of heart into it and i respect that... nicely done

gracies

, I'm really bad at writing poems, i do it anyway though....

What do you mean nobody is on there?

I write there alot.

-AC

I read stuff in there a lot, I just post infrequently. But quite a few people do go in there.

but what did you think of my poem?

thats sweet.

Originally posted by Maynard-is-god
Im writing a poem on here because not a damn person is ever on the poetry forum, so its going here

Anticipation

She doesn't know how I feel
She can't
I wish she could see inside my head so she could understand

Beauty doesn't even begin to describe her
If only others saw her through my eyes...

This is the worst feeling I have ever had,
but I feel so wonderful that I can't sleep at night
Could this emotion be a bad thing?
I ask myself: if I could feel nothing for her, would I?
Never

I would give anything
I would give any earthly possession and material thing I have ever had
I would give my life

She wants someone to return love to her
It is right in front of her eyes
Does she see me?
....not the way I see her


now rate it for me, and everyone else is allowed to have their "feelings" rated also

that's lovely...alot of feeling in it

thats my bitchy, wahh wahh, poem