My battle: ROTS Anakin versus Darth Maul

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SnakeEyes
Thought I would try my hand at writing a battle! (Keep in mind that I am much younger and inexperienced than some of the other famous authors here AKA Janus and Nefarus).

*Assume that Darth Maul lived through Episode One and so forth*

Darth Maul versus ROTS Anakin (dark):

Anakin’s mind was focused on one thing and one thing only. He had to defeat his former Master. He not only had too, he wanted too. Anakin was not the same. Darkness filled every part of his twisted soul. Every human emotion; every feeling had been replaced by pure hatred.

As he approached the fiery planet of Mustafar, he thought about Obi-wan. How had his closest friend done this to him? He soon cast aside these feelings, deeming them unimportant. It doesn’t matter anymore.
Nothing mattered. He would do what must be done.

Soon after the landing, Anakin felt something. Something out of the ordinary. He drew his lightsaber, preparing himself for anything. Anakin reached into the Force, sensing all around him. He could feel another presence and at that moment, he knew it was not Obi-wan. A figure approached him from the shadows and Anakin could feel the Dark energies flowing through the robed man.

“Who are you!” demanded Anakin.

The figure was silent.

“Tell me…Now!” Anakin felt hatred again.

Finally, the man removed his hood, revealing a decrepit visage. “You are despicable. Why would my master even believe you to be worthy… You even bear the blade of a tainted Jedi.”

Anakin had heard enough. He raised his saber as he charged the figure. Maul rapidly emitted both blades of his saber and deflected the first oncoming blows. Anakin was much quicker than he had thought. He had potential indeed, Maul thought as he redirected another stab from Anakin.

Darth Maul swiftly dodged another swipe as he leapt onto a nearby cliff. Anakin followed, getting more annoyed each moment the Sith Lord was still breathing. He called upon the Dark Side to aid him.

“I can feel the rage within you, but I am afraid it won't be enough,” taunted Maul.

Anakin disregarded the words and pressed on. Soon, Maul was striving to parry every slice that Anakin was dispensing. Maul soon realized how much power Anakin really had as the blue blade slashed more rapidly than anything the Sith Lord had seen in his previous battles.

He knew that if he had any chance of coming out alive, he would need to trick his enemy into defeat. Maul evaded a slash only to be battered in the face by his opponent’s boot. Anakin let Maul recover. He wanted him to die slowly.

Maul realized that Anakin was toying with him and was deeply insulted… even irritated. He called upon the Force to hurl a series of rocks in Anakin’s direction. Without even raising a single finger, Anakin redirected the path of the stones and easily kept them away from him. Anakin approached slowly, causing Maul to panic. Maul utilized his extraordinary abilities and attempted to slay the former Jedi. Anakin blocked each swing, stab, slash and swipe with ease.

Anakin leapt into the air, dodged a blow that would have taken off both of his legs, and hacked the handle of Maul’s saber in half. Maul looked down at his sizzling handles with trepidation; unsure of what the outcome of this encounter might be.

Maul raised both of his blades and looked up to meet his adversary. Anakin could feel the fear that now surged through Maul’s veins; and he could see a glimpse of it in his sinister yellow eyes.

Anakin moved faster than conceivable, as he approached Lord Maul. He ducked under a swing effortlessly and brought his saber up towards Maul’s midsection, piercing his torso. Maul sank to his knees as Anakin deactivated his saber.

Using his last degree of energy, Maul attempted to make one final stab at Anakin. Anakin seized Maul’s hands and constricted until the sabers fell to the ground. Using his mechanical hand, Anakin clutched Darth Maul’s esophagus, compressing his neck… and enjoying it.

Darth_Nefarus
short and sweet. very similar to how I had them fighting

SnakeEyes
BUMP

Mandos
eek!

Darth_Glentract
hey, can I print this out and show it to my friends at school. I would tell them someguy named snakeeyes wrote it.

SnakeEyes
Yeah that's fine with me. You guys like it?

jedimaster2000
it was awesome

SnakeEyes
Thanks...
I can't wait to hear jackstain's response...

Darth_Glentract
thanks

Darth_Glentract
why does maul keep dying in these?

Darth_Nefarus
Because Maul never got to hit his full potential.
Don't worry, you'll all be happy with my Maul vs. Jango which will be ready soon

Darth_Janus
Very nice. Don't downplay yourself for being young, man... You have some good talent here.

I want it back when you're done... lol

Darth_Nefarus
lol

SnakeEyes
Originally posted by Darth_Janus
Very nice. Don't downplay yourself for being young, man... You have some good talent here.

I want it back when you're done... lol

lol, thanks. You should write some more battles too. You and Nefarus are like the KMC battle superstars.

Darth_Janus
Bah, don't give me too much credit. My ego will deflate by the time I finish talking with relatives... lol

I plan on writing more, actually, I think we both do. Any requests, Snake eyes?

Naga Sadow
wow, this 1 was great.
guys would u mind if i post them on my clan website?

named www.x0tt0.com

i would ofcourse tell that u are the authors.

SnakeEyes
Hmmm, let me think... howabout:

Kyle Katarn versus Quinlan Vos
Jango versus Boba
ROTS Obi-wan versus Mace Windu

one of those would be cool...

SnakeEyes
Originally posted by Naga Sadow
wow, this 1 was great.
guys would u mind if i post them on my clan website?

named www.x0tt0.com

i would ofcourse tell that u are the authors.

Nah, I don't mind

cool smokin' cool

Naga Sadow
ok, tnx.
and u got a lot of tallent for story writing, keep up the great work.

SnakeEyes
Any requests on what I should do next?

Darth_Janus
Hm. I'll have a go at Mace versus Obi. Maybe you could try Dooku versus Mecha Vader? I think that, because of Dooku's reserved and nonaggressive style, Mecha Vader would better be able to hold his own, then against an agile opponent like Mace or Maul.

jackstain
couple of things....snake eyes ur awesome, but i think nefarus wuld do it more justice....but i liked it.

only thing though....maul would(yes lose) but never be afraid, ever.
at anything....and wuld put up a better fight than that.

overall, good though.

im actually a very good writer, so i will have to write one soon here guys.

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