My poems

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yodafan

yodafan

Coldfire
Oooo you're good!

yodafan
Thanks smile

Coldfire
No problem. Write more please!

Tassie
Nice. Love's a nice one. ^^

yodafan

vaya_the_elf
Very nice.

Mainstream
my turn my turn

I was hoping

I was hoping I'd live forever
I was hoping I'd never feel pain
I was hoping no one would shed any tears
standing over my grave.

I was hoping to be enternal
my candle would always burn bright
I was hoping to always live in the sunshine
and never to be victim of the night

I was hoping I'd live forever
I was hoping I'd never die
because I won't go to heaven because of all my sins and lies

I was hoping I'd live forever
because if I die
I would end up in hell
but at least I'd know why. big grin

yodafan
Nice one, thumb up

Mainstream
thanx

Tassie

Coldfire
Good job Mainstream and yodafan; those are both really good

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