jerlark386
I've been thinking about a alternate scene. When George Lucas cuts the scene off at the part where Hooded Vader is about to kill the younglings, and the audience the audience is left crest fallen, how about this. The younglings instead of dying as the audience assumes actually kicks vader's ass. This should be amusing.
What Really Happened at the Jedi Temple
Scene 1
Hooded Vader enters through the blast door into a room full of padawin learners. Some peek from their hiding places, hoping anakin would lead them to safety. A youngling boy steps forward.
Chubby faced boy: "Theres too many of them Master Skywalker, what are we going to do" ?
Their hope is instantly betrayed as Anakin eyes ignites his saber not to defend them but to strike them down.
The youngling steps back. Anakin advances, deliberately. Slowly step by step, he marches toward madness. The dim room is illuminated by the grim blue light from anakin's saber. Their short lives appear to be at an end when suddenly a tiny saber ignites.
Chubby faced boy : Oh. So its a fight you want. Well then its a fight you get.
All the remaining younglings ignite their sabers in rapid succession but not simultaneously. (for maximum impact.)
Youngling girl: Bring it, coward!
Chubby faced boy: Well it looks like you'll be needing to change your name after this Skywalker.. You certainly won't be able to walk anymore.
Anakin: whua?
Chubby faced boy: Raaaaaaagh! Go for the kneecaps!
Chubby faced boy does Yoda style flip over Anakin's head and Anakin barely manages to block in time. Another youngling does a roll on the floor nearly takes away Anakin legs. Soon after, Anakin is blanketed in attacks coming in from all directions. Anakins rapidly spins and dodges but is unable to make a single offensive move. The room begins to look like a light show.
Anakin : sensing he will soon be overwhelmed, force pushes the students aways backflips out the cirlce of younglings surrounding him and runs away like a little *****. He seals the blastdoor as he exits and melts the controls with his saber.
Scene 2
Audience sees a single saber sticking out of the middle(approximate) of the blast door. The crack between the two doors begins to melt.Other sabers appear at the hinges. The sabers dissappear and the door is kicked open. At the front is the chubby faced boy. As the rest of younglings emerge, a group of storm troopers appear. The storm troopers quickly file themselves into ranks.
Clone 1: "All jedis are enemy of the republic. Blast them!".
Chubby faced boy: Ignites saber and proceeds to make short work of the nearest storm trooper.
2 other younglings charge forward, deflecting lasers back at the troopers in a attempt to reach the farther ranks.
Youngling girl: Does an akimbo off wall and in one neat flip lands ontop of a clone's shoulders with her lightsaber in his head.
At last the rear and side flanks are taken care of and theirs just one cluster in the middle.
Chubby faced boy: Pitches his lightsaber and uses the force to make it travel like a boomerang( a circle like pattern). The saber slices several clone soldiers in half. The saber returns back to the boy.
A pile of dismembered bodies practically carpets the floors. The quiet serenity of death settles into the corridor. Oh but wait a handful more of troopers is approaching!
Chubby faced boy: Chucks the saber once again.
*camera follows the saber in slow motion as it travels towards the troopers. it speeds up again when saber slices off their heads."
The scene ends as the saber appears to continue its motion and travel past the audience.
Great sound effect too,by the way.
End scene 2
What Really Happened at the Jedi Temple
Scene 1
Hooded Vader enters through the blast door into a room full of padawin learners. Some peek from their hiding places, hoping anakin would lead them to safety. A youngling boy steps forward.
Chubby faced boy: "Theres too many of them Master Skywalker, what are we going to do" ?
Their hope is instantly betrayed as Anakin eyes ignites his saber not to defend them but to strike them down.
The youngling steps back. Anakin advances, deliberately. Slowly step by step, he marches toward madness. The dim room is illuminated by the grim blue light from anakin's saber. Their short lives appear to be at an end when suddenly a tiny saber ignites.
Chubby faced boy : Oh. So its a fight you want. Well then its a fight you get.
All the remaining younglings ignite their sabers in rapid succession but not simultaneously. (for maximum impact.)
Youngling girl: Bring it, coward!
Chubby faced boy: Well it looks like you'll be needing to change your name after this Skywalker.. You certainly won't be able to walk anymore.
Anakin: whua?
Chubby faced boy: Raaaaaaagh! Go for the kneecaps!
Chubby faced boy does Yoda style flip over Anakin's head and Anakin barely manages to block in time. Another youngling does a roll on the floor nearly takes away Anakin legs. Soon after, Anakin is blanketed in attacks coming in from all directions. Anakins rapidly spins and dodges but is unable to make a single offensive move. The room begins to look like a light show.
Anakin : sensing he will soon be overwhelmed, force pushes the students aways backflips out the cirlce of younglings surrounding him and runs away like a little *****. He seals the blastdoor as he exits and melts the controls with his saber.
Scene 2
Audience sees a single saber sticking out of the middle(approximate) of the blast door. The crack between the two doors begins to melt.Other sabers appear at the hinges. The sabers dissappear and the door is kicked open. At the front is the chubby faced boy. As the rest of younglings emerge, a group of storm troopers appear. The storm troopers quickly file themselves into ranks.
Clone 1: "All jedis are enemy of the republic. Blast them!".
Chubby faced boy: Ignites saber and proceeds to make short work of the nearest storm trooper.
2 other younglings charge forward, deflecting lasers back at the troopers in a attempt to reach the farther ranks.
Youngling girl: Does an akimbo off wall and in one neat flip lands ontop of a clone's shoulders with her lightsaber in his head.
At last the rear and side flanks are taken care of and theirs just one cluster in the middle.
Chubby faced boy: Pitches his lightsaber and uses the force to make it travel like a boomerang( a circle like pattern). The saber slices several clone soldiers in half. The saber returns back to the boy.
A pile of dismembered bodies practically carpets the floors. The quiet serenity of death settles into the corridor. Oh but wait a handful more of troopers is approaching!
Chubby faced boy: Chucks the saber once again.
*camera follows the saber in slow motion as it travels towards the troopers. it speeds up again when saber slices off their heads."
The scene ends as the saber appears to continue its motion and travel past the audience.
Great sound effect too,by the way.
End scene 2