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There you were amogst the crowd,

you stood out the most, I wanted you bad,

'Twas November when I met you,

It is forever that I'll keep you,

Why must life be so hard on me,

When I need you all the time,

You drown my problems, you make me happy,

but when It is I want to see you, It cant happen,

You're the first and last one I've ever loved this much,

Why? There are too many explanations,

but Im never letting you go..


I Love Daniel More Than ANYONE In This World! Everyone Should Know This.

Another one I just wrote

Stop The World And Let Me Die,

All I Do Is Fail When I Try,

If there's one thing I want, its only you,

But because I do our time isnt true,

You're my baby and you know it's right,

My time without you is spent on lonely night,

My question is Why,

Why I Cant,

Why I Wont,

I want you at my side,

Forgive all the times I lied..

Interesting...full of hope and despair and just a touch of angst - not unlike many i've read

Thanks.

Is that good or bad, that they arent unlike many you've read? Jw

a lot of poetry i've read about teen angst and heartaches or love, are generally written pretty much the same way....that's just the nature of being a teen

you can express yourself through words, but what makes one stand out from all the rest is: life experience and a mastery of the written word, tempo and cadence....it's either that or i'm just full of verbal diarrhea - take your pick

but generally pour more emotion into it if that's the type of thing you wish to write....read and compare yours to others and you'll see what i mean

*shrugs*

Cool