love poems

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black_goku#1
what is love
love is bright love is like in all its might
what is love
love is pure
to hate, love is the cure
what is love
love is true
but then again its also blue
love is a pain like no other
and though at times your heart may flutter
you long to be alone
for love is a feeling
where pain and pleasure grow
for love is a feeling
as bright and dark as coal
what is love
love is fear
but it is something all hold dear
what is love
love is true
love is all i hold for you






what you guys think and show your own poems too

Coldfire
Lol I think its cute happy And all my poems are in my thread, so if you want you can check them out yes

twin_soul
I really liked that. do you have any more? ^^same goes for me. most of my stuff is in my thread big grin

black_goku#1
oh k ill just keeppostin my stuff feel free to criticize

Coldfire
Yes please keep posting yes

black_goku#1
i found it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

um this one is a bit sad


Faliiure
why do i sweat
why do i fear
why do i dream
why am i here
my whole life is a joke
and i see you laughin
i wish to god id ****in croak
but sadly it aint happin
my life is an example
so heed my warning
i wake knowing this
every morning
im but an example of what not to do
my life is a failure dont be one too

((woah uh thats not what i originally had in mind but what you think))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
i found it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

um this one is a bit sad


Faliiure
why do i sweat
why do i fear
why do i dream
why am i here
my whole life is a joke
and i see you laughin
i wish to god id ****in croak
but sadly it aint happin
my life is an example
so heed my warning
i wake knowing this
every morning
im but an example of what not to do
my life is a failure dont be one too

((woah uh thats not what i originally had in mind but what you think))
I like it eek! Sad as it is... but then again mine are mostly like that these days lol stick out tongue Good job and post some more yes

black_goku#1
Whisper
whisper sotly whisper call my name
go ahead your not insane
whisper slowly call to me
can you feel it ill set you free
whisper sotly whisper true
call my name damnit i dare you

((was kinda angry with this one))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
Whisper
whisper sotly whisper call my name
go ahead your not insane
whisper slowly call to me
can you feel it ill set you free
whisper sotly whisper true
call my name damnit i dare you

((was kinda angry with this one))
Tis good, but you forgot the f in softly wink

black_goku#1
oops i feel dumb
there once was a boy named nate
who was born at a golden gate
well this gate turned black
so he stayed in the back and drank away his fate

((is it bad that i love rhyming and use it in all of my poetry?))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
oops i feel dumb
there once was a boy named nate
who was born at a golden gate
well this gate turned black
so he stayed in the back and drank away his fate

((is it bad that i love rhyming and use it in all of my poetry?))
Don't feel dumb hun, cuz it happens to the best of us smile

Nah it's not bad to use it in everything you write; it's a style that's suited to you, so use it yes

black_goku#1
thank you kindly your the only one reading these though

Cry i cannot for i have hurt to many
and their pain slowly swells
cry i can not for when kindness they give me
i only shout and yell
Cry i can not for i am dead inside
yes its a pity
but i know it with pride
Cry i can not for i am hopeless
i deserve no good
but you already know this
cry i can not for i have hurt
and tears are human they dont pour fom dirt
its all that i am
and its no lie
these are the reasons i dont cry



cry i can not for i am alone
tears are useless
for sorrow is all ive known
and i have no excuses
cry i can not for i am pain and no more
to all that will hear it
your forgivness i implore
Cry i can not for i am a fountain of sorrow
and crying so long
inside im hollow
cry i cannot for my life is a lie
and for all these reasons i dont cry
cry i can not for i deserve to die
and in this case to all goodbye


((hope you liked my poem its my last i fear))

alcoholicpoet
Originally posted by black_goku#1
oops i feel dumb
there once was a boy named nate
who was born at a golden gate
well this gate turned black
so he stayed in the back and drank away his fate

((is it bad that i love rhyming and use it in all of my poetry?))

This is my favorite, short and to the point, good poetry, keep it up.

Tassie
Really good stuff! big grin Simple, but effective. Don't stop! wink

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
thank you kindly your the only one reading these though

Cry i cannot for i have hurt to many
and their pain slowly swells
cry i can not for when kindness they give me
i only shout and yell
Cry i can not for i am dead inside
yes its a pity
but i know it with pride
Cry i can not for i am hopeless
i deserve no good
but you already know this
cry i can not for i have hurt
and tears are human they dont pour fom dirt
its all that i am
and its no lie
these are the reasons i dont cry



cry i can not for i am alone
tears are useless
for sorrow is all ive known
and i have no excuses
cry i can not for i am pain and no more
to all that will hear it
your forgivness i implore
Cry i can not for i am a fountain of sorrow
and crying so long
inside im hollow
cry i cannot for my life is a lie
and for all these reasons i dont cry
cry i can not for i deserve to die
and in this case to all goodbye


((hope you liked my poem its my last i fear))
notworthy It's gonna be your last??!! Why?? confused

black_goku#1
((well im not that good and it seems pointless))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
((well im not that good and it seems pointless))
You DARE to say that to me..... You ARE good, so don't ever let yourself think that. And as you saw, I'm not the only one reading your poems. Please don't stop cuz you think you're not worthy, because you ARE.

alcoholicpoet
Originally posted by black_goku#1
((well im not that good and it seems pointless))

jawdrop Pointless!? Not good!? You just started my friend, and for a rookie poet to be as good as you is quite amazing, please don't quit, that would be like Shakespeare saying "Meh, I'll become a horsebreeder".

Tassie
^ What that guy said laughing!

Coldfire
Originally posted by Tassie
^ What that guy said laughing!
Couldn't have said it better myself yes stick out tongue laughing out loud

black_goku#1
Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
jawdrop Pointless!? Not good!? You just started my friend, and for a rookie poet to be as good as you is quite amazing, please don't quit, that would be like Shakespeare saying "Meh, I'll become a horsebreeder".

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

ok you got me ill stay

i sit in a corner alone and in shadow
what you dont know is im prepareig for battle
see my life is hidden sheltered in silince
but im coming out and im feeling violent
so get ready for a struggle
im coming near
remember my name *****
my name is fear


((oh god you guys are gonna hate me for this poem))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

ok you got me ill stay

i sit in a corner alone and in shadow
what you dont know is im prepareig for battle
see my life is hidden sheltered in silince
but im coming out and im feeling violent
so get ready for a struggle
im coming near
remember my name *****
my name is fear


((oh god you guys are gonna hate me for this poem))
I don't hate you for it.... I thought it was good... I've felt that way before yes

black_goku#1
((really yay it was good??))

once more i sit here
and wait all alone
knowing you drank beer
and are probably stoned
but ill sit here waiting
thats all i can do
for as long as you live
i shall always love you

((sorry chick i really like dont know because she is usually either drunk or high))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
((really yay it was good??))

once more i sit here
and wait all alone
knowing you drank beer
and are probably stoned
but ill sit here waiting
thats all i can do
for as long as you live
i shall always love you

((sorry chick i really like dont know because she is usually either drunk or high))
((you betcha yes))

Awww that's cute happy Too bad she's like that tho sad

((omg I'm in your sig eek! I'll add ya to mine yes

black_goku#1
((yay im on a sig!!!))

Hello loneliness
I am now your friend
Others i will miss
But you`ll be here till the end
hello pain and sorrow
you are now my life
i know youll be there tomorrow
and youll bring me more strife
hello lonlieness
i guess its me and you
i do wish a friend
but i guess your gonna do

((um i kinda like that one))

Pain is not a game
yet i play with it so
With pain theres nothing to gain
yet i continue to grow
So feed me with your insults
and fuel me with your lies
it will make no difference
because pain wont be my demise

((not sure bout that one it was fun to write though))

The day i die will be my happiest
for ended will be a life the crappiest
The day i die all will rejoyice
for never again will they endure my voice
The day i die all will too for
i took pain from all of you
they day i die i will be forgotten
its my fault all the trouble ive got in
The day i die will also be lost
for mine is a life that should never have been crossed

((ok thats it for now))

Elessea
Nice poems yes

black_goku#1
((why thank yee))

dark and grimy no light to blind me this is the home for me
pits of worms that wiggle and swirm this is the home for me
solitude and silince no cruel violince this is the home for me
oh yes this is the home for me

((wrote that when i was like 8))

NunYahBidness
Originally posted by black_goku#1
what is love
love is bright love is like in all its might
what is love
love is pure
to hate, love is the cure
what is love
love is true
but then again its also blue
love is a pain like no other
and though at times your heart may flutter
you long to be alone
for love is a feeling
where pain and pleasure grow
for love is a feeling
as bright and dark as coal
what is love
love is fear
but it is something all hold dear
what is love
love is true
love is all i hold for you






what you guys think and show your own poems too there comes a time when "love" is so overdone that it becomes like sandpaper rubbed against your skin....seriously people, explore other subjects and you may find your creativity flow without flaw.

Coldfire
Good stuff hun smile

black_goku#1
Originally posted by NunYahBidness
there comes a time when "love" is so overdone that it becomes like sandpaper rubbed against your skin....seriously people, explore other subjects and you may find your creativity flow without flaw.
not sure you noticed bro but that was my only love poem on this entire thread infact its the only one ive ever written!

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
not sure you noticed bro but that was my only love poem on this entire thread infact its the only one ive ever written!
Just ignore him hun smile

NunYahBidness
Originally posted by black_goku#1
not sure you noticed bro but that was my only love poem on this entire thread infact its the only one ive ever written! maybe so, for this thread, but not however to this forum. i offered a suggestion in the hopes of maybe showing some originality, but if you wish to ride along on the morose train of "love be thy name, and the sun be thy face", then by all means do so.

intoxicatedpoet
Originally posted by NunYahBidness
maybe so, for this thread, but not however to this forum. i offered a suggestion in the hopes of maybe showing some originality, but if you wish to ride along on the morose train of "love be thy name, and the sun be thy face", then by all means do so.

Damn, you and Floo seem to be the only people on this forum who write in debth criticisms. I guess I'm guilty of the "that's great" cliche' as well. I agree, love can get rather repetetive as an ongoing theme, black goku has alot of promise he just needs to explore other realms than the, at this point, tired theme of love.

black_goku#1
what the hel my thread is called love poems so others could post love poems as well before i knew that all i had to do was read their own threads! if you lame lazy people would read all of my poems you would see that only one love poem exists!! i appreciate critism dont get me wrong but dont accuse me of wearing down one bloody aspect of life namely love when all my poetry tends to be of misery. Get your facts strait before you accuse me of wasting my "Talents" on love poems!
ranting pissed blowup



now on another note thanks for reading my poems

black_goku#1
hopes held high to be let down
smile are shown to become a frown
life is started just so we can die
joy is felt so we can later cry
peace is kept so a war can unfold
youth is a path that leads to old
freedom is found just to lead to confinment
projects in life are finished for another assignment
life is a pattern of despair and hope
its a truggle can you cope?

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
hopes held high to be let down
smile are shown to become a frown
life is started just so we can die
joy is felt so we can later cry
peace is kept so a war can unfold
youth is a path that leads to old
freedom is found just to lead to confinment
projects in life are finished for another assignment
life is a pattern of despair and hope
its a truggle can you cope?
Nice smile Don't listen to what they say hun; just do your own thing and f*** what everyone else says yes

black_goku#1
lol i will do um here is a true story and it explains why love is a hard concept for me sorry bout the errors in it um i wrote this a while ago and never fixed it

The Death of a Friend
Ever since kindergarten I had had a friend. Her name was Stephanie Arroya.
Her hair was long and brown, Her eyes where a forest green. She was beautiful. We were both lonely, so I talked to her. We became friends almost instantly.
Years had past and we were still friends. I was in the fourth grade now and Stephanie and I were inseparable from each other. So no words said she was my girlfriend; we would always look out for each other. We told each other everything and stuck up for one another. I can remember one time we were playing in a ditch. We went down and started to climb along the loose sides. To us it was an adventure, a game, we didn?t think of the consequences. We went to a real slippery area and we couldn?t hold on. We fell but luckily we did not get hurt, actually the only problem was that we had torn our pants. Her parents were furious. She was going to be grounded for two whole months I couldn?t let that happen. I spoke to her parents without her knowledge. I told them it was my fault and that they had no need to punish her. What happened next was so fast. We negotiated that she would not be grounded at all but that she would not be allowed to see me for a couple of years. I didn?t argue and it stunned them. ?NO!? I heard Steph yell. ?Its not his fault. We both decided to climb and we understand what we did was wrong. We learned not to do it again! You can?t make my best friend not see me. We have always been there for each other we?ve been through too much for our friendship to end here!? I looked at her and saw that she had no fear in her eyes she meant what she said.
Her parents looked at each other and said ?ok you can see him in a week.? ?Ok? I said. As I began to walk out the door I herd steph.?No not ok!? She barked. ?I will see him tomorrow? her parents looked at each other and said fine. I was shocked big time. I had no idea she thought about me that way. I was about to go home when they invited me to dinner.
It was amazing. We forgot that that had ever happened. But it showed that we always looked out for each other. It was truly like that. We could not be separated from each other. I was in sixth grade now. We were always by each other in school and were voted cutest couple of the year. Then a tragic day, a day I will never forget came into play.
This day started like any other Saturday. We would talk about what happened the day
Before and comfort each other. I was bored so I suggested that we go see a movie and have lunch together. She said no at first so I kept pushing towards
Yes. ?Too bad.? I was going to buy. Wait she said ?let me go ask my dad for a little spending money.? ?But im going to pay? ?no I?ll help out? I smiled at my victory and surfed the web for movies. ?What do you want to see Steph? she looked up from something she was doing and said ?uh how about spider-man??
?Yeah they will be playing it in three hours though.? She smiled ?so? ?So what are we going to do for three hours?? well you can think of something.? I looked up at her and smiled. She walked over to me and kissed my cheek. ?Why do I have to think of something to do? because you???. Love me. She kissed my forehead and went back to whatever she was doing. I thought about what we should do for about five minutes before my curiosity was killing me. ?What are?
You doing Steph?? she smiled ?I thought you would never ask, remember that picture of you were you actually smiled? Well I am putting it in a place were we can never loose it, my heart! ?Your confusing me Steph? im memorizing you at your happiest moment so I will never forget it.? I was confused and I couldn?t figure out what she was saying so I smiled. ?Steph every time I am with you I am happy. ?I know you are but you have to admit you never smile.? Well lets go get something to eat,? I said.
We grabbed our bikes then looked at each other and dropped them. ?We have two hours and fifty-seven minutes to go let?s just walk,? I said. We began walking side by side. And we began to talk about what we thought was in store for the future. Steph started it. ?Nate what do you want to be when you get older?? She asked. ?I don?t know ?come on everyone has some idea of what they want to be when they get older? well I have always wanted to be a actor for some reason. I think it?s mainly because I want to be remembered for something in my life. What about you I? ?Well don?t laugh but I always wanted to be a doctor.? What type? ?A doctor who works with dieing children. I want to help
Them to feel happy and be remembered as the doctor who cared.? I smiled. ?How is it that you can be so caring about so many people? I don?t know I just have a big heart. I smiled we were approaching a McDonalds but we just kept walking we didn?t really like that restaurant. ?Nate why do you want to be an actor again?? Steph asked. ?Well I want to be remember? ?Yeah you said that but why do you want to be an actor?? cause I like movies and well that?s the thing I really want to do.? We continued on for many minutes about what we saw ourselves as in the future but we got tired of that. Finally we found a burger king and it was pretty close to the theater well what do you want to eat? I will have the #2 with some extra fries Steph told me. So we ate and when we were done we just stared at each other for what seemed like forever. We had an hour left by the time we got to the theater. We bought our tickets and while we waited by playing arcade games. Steph jumped on one of those games were you dance by following the arrows. When she started she was awesome. She didn?t miss any of the arrows and she got perfect on almost all of them. I stared at her and was overtaken by thought man she?s perfect. When she was done we went and bought some kettle korn pickles and of course we got snickers. It was time to find a seat and we got some perfect ones in the back. The previews were so boring. The movie started and she laid her head on my chest. I put my arm around her and kissed her head. I was defiantly in love and nothing could take it away or so I thought.
It was time for us to go home and we wished it wasn?t, for it was such a joy-filled day.
As we bid our farewells and got in our parents cars I couldn?t help but feel struck with an
Overwhelming worry that my life was never going to be the same.
I had made it home before Stephanie and was awaiting her arrival. Hours past
And still no sign of her I went inside with a small worry. I got over it quick cause I figured she was fine. I turned on the television and cursed my brother for the toys he left on the floor when I saw it.
On the news was a broadcast of an accident that had seriously injured some; and Stephanie?s dads? car was involved. I had recognized it due to the ugly
Paint job and could barley think. A soon as the hospitals name was released I ran outside.
It was raining I must have missed the start due to being in my own world of worry and disbelief. I grabbed my bike and started pedaling hard. Thoughts were rushing my head and I knew this was not good.
?4 MILES TILL LUTHREN HOSPITAL? I pedaled faster
And faster till the exit was apparent. The rest of the trip was down hill so I was going faster than I had ever before. 2 MILES, 1 MILE, NEXT LEFT, I passed these signs Quickly and turned into the hospital.
I dropped my bike and ran through the doors.
Drenched I asked a triage nurse where my dear Stephanie was. ?Down that hall room 107? I relentlessly started heading toward the room when she said, ? you might not want to go in there.? Ignoring her warning I walked through the door. What I saw haunts and hurts me still.
In the hospital bed drenched in wet and dry blood was Stephanie. It wasn?t some person I did not know; it was my Stephanie. She was unconscious at the moment
And her face was cut open on the sides. Her eyelids where purple, and they appeared swelled shut. I could barely recognize her; and it hurt to see her that way. Tears burst through my face and a doctor quickly approached me. ?You can?t be in here,? he said
My heart was pounding my blood was burning.
My soul was cold and was aching.
I left the room aided by a nurse and sat in the lobby. How could this happen? I wondered. Why Stephanie? It should have been me. An hour past and I saw Stephs Dad along with a doctor approached.

?When can I see her?? I demanded in a solemn
Voice. ?Soon? was the answer I received. ?What happened?? I asked the doctor.
I received no answer. I looked at him pleadingly. ? Its too soon to tell? he must have seen the frustration in my eyes because his next words were ? go, talk to her? I could barely walk let alone stand. Some how I managed to walk into the room and sit next to her.
?Hey, how ya doing? I asked. She was conscious apparently because she opened her
Eyes and looked at me. I used every ounce of strength to hold back my blazing tears.
She stared at me awhile and weakly smiled. It was making me sick to see her this way
But I smiled anyway. ?How bad is it,? she asked ?Don?t lie? She weakly demanded

black_goku#1
I said nothing and a lone, stray tear fell down my cheek. ?That bad? she asked
As she weakly sat up. I could tell she was in pain. She was trying not to cry and was doing a good job till I embraced her. She cried, ?Promise me something? ?anything? I sobbed
?Always wear your seat belt? ?I promise? I can?t explain the feelings that surged through me all at once. It was like some bad dream that I couldn?t escape. I wished I would wake up in my bed realizing it was only some horrible nightmare; but it was reality. How
Could this happen? How could a day this perfect go so wrong? I wondered if she was feeling the same way or if she was mad at me. Then I wondered if it was my fault. I should have thought of something else we could have done. I could have watched
T.V., or a movie at home. I could have cooked something for lunch.
?Nate, I love you? she said weaker than she spoke before tears burst through me as if I were a fountain of sorrow ?I love you too? just then I felt her breathing stop doctors rushed into the room. I backed out of the room and fell to my knees. ? Charge it to 140
Volts of electricity? ?stand by, clear, nothing sir, again clear nothing call it, time of death?? Death?! My heart paused at the word death. It whispered through my body
And froze my soul. That?s all I remember the rest is bank except for the funeral/burial
So now I?m haunted with a lot of questions. What would life be like if Stephanie were still here? Would I be a better person? Was it my fault she died? I have nightmares about this still.
But again why her? It should have been me. She was so much smarter than me.
She had real dreams for the future. She could have been something i can never live up to. Since she has gone I have spent one an half years being hated by all and I have accomplished nothing. I have only burdened others with my sadness and stupidity in efforts to entertain them. I have made people hate me even more. So I ask is there a purpose to
My life. Why am I still here if nothing I do is important, if all I am is a glitch in the complex patterns of life? Maybe that is my reason for existing. It has to be. Nothing else makes sense. I am to be an example of what failure is. To remind people what mistakes are? Well whatever the meaning of my life is I know one thing. I always wear my seatbelt.

HermioneLover14
I was just done reading all of the poems they are so nice. this last one that you wrote was really sad. sad I have never gone to another forum that wasn't about harry potter until today thats when i found your thread.All the poems are really nice. keep posting. smile

intoxicatedpoet
Originally posted by black_goku#1
what the hel my thread is called love poems so others could post love poems as well before i knew that all i had to do was read their own threads! if you lame lazy people would read all of my poems you would see that only one love poem exists!! i appreciate critism dont get me wrong but dont accuse me of wearing down one bloody aspect of life namely love when all my poetry tends to be of misery. Get your facts strait before you accuse me of wasting my "Talents" on love poems!
ranting pissed blowup



now on another note thanks for reading my poems

Sorry, and your welcome.

Coldfire
Hun it is NOT your fault, you have to believe that. It was one of those horrible twists of fate that happen to many of us throughout our lives.... You are NOT a failure, and you are here for some reason, you just have to find it. If you ever need someone to talk with I'm always here alright? I'm so sorry to hear that this happened to such a good person hug

black_goku#1
Originally posted by intoxicatedpoet
Sorry, and your welcome.
lol tanks :-)
Originally posted by Coldfire
Hun it is NOT your fault, you have to believe that. It was one of those horrible twists of fate that happen to many of us throughout our lives.... You are NOT a failure, and you are here for some reason, you just have to find it. If you ever need someone to talk with I'm always here alright? I'm so sorry to hear that this happened to such a good person hug

im sorry but as much as i want to believe that it wasnt my fault i know deep down inside that i could have prevented it. and whats more is she had so much potential and would have done great things where as i have amounted to nothing. im not a good person ive made too many mistakes and i am not the person i should be/ i really wish she were here now and i was not. She was so much better than me. she just...... she wouldnt have made my mistakes she would have made her life worth it and i just waste my own feeling bad for myself. *literally cries a bit*

black_goku#1
Originally posted by HermioneLover14
I was just done reading all of the poems they are so nice. this last one that you wrote was really sad. sad I have never gone to another forum that wasn't about harry potter until today thats when i found your thread.All the poems are really nice. keep posting. smile
why thank you! glad you enjoyed

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
lol tanks :-)


im sorry but as much as i want to believe that it wasnt my fault i know deep down inside that i could have prevented it. and whats more is she had so much potential and would have done great things where as i have amounted to nothing. im not a good person ive made too many mistakes and i am not the person i should be/ i really wish she were here now and i was not. She was so much better than me. she just...... she wouldnt have made my mistakes she would have made her life worth it and i just waste my own feeling bad for myself. *literally cries a bit*
Nobody is a truly good person hun; we all have our faults, and that's what makes us human. You are young yet, and you will be able to amount to whatever you wish to amount to. Nobody knows what others would do in their place, so don't let that haunt you. Feeling bad is also a part of being human. Take it one day at a time, and it will gradually begin to lessen.

black_goku#1
Originally posted by Coldfire
Nobody is a truly good person hun; we all have our faults, and that's what makes us human. You are young yet, and you will be able to amount to whatever you wish to amount to. Nobody knows what others would do in their place, so don't let that haunt you. Feeling bad is also a part of being human. Take it one day at a time, and it will gradually begin to lessen.
it hasnt lessened and it has been four years im always told i should just move on but i cant. im a screwup and ill admit it boldly. everything in my life i try to do right i end up wrecking. *sighs* ive lost so many people that i love and everything i touch seems to die. i know i shouldnt feel sorry for myself because i deserve this but still it really hurts and no matter how hard i try i eend up in the same miserable spot of failure

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
it hasnt lessened and it has been four years im always told i should just move on but i cant. im a screwup and ill admit it boldly. everything in my life i try to do right i end up wrecking. *sighs* ive lost so many people that i love and everything i touch seems to die. i know i shouldnt feel sorry for myself because i deserve this but still it really hurts and no matter how hard i try i eend up in the same miserable spot of failure
You may have lost a lot of people, and I'm really sorry about that, but you still have all of us on here. And although that may not be so much, it is still something after all.

black_goku#1
Originally posted by Coldfire
You may have lost a lot of people, and I'm really sorry about that, but you still have all of us on here. And although that may not be so much, it is still something after all.
true... yeah well that does help
hug

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
true... yeah well that does help
hug
I'm glad it does hug

DreamingWarrior
Nice work man.

Puddin Pop
black_goku#1 love your poems.

DreamingWarrior
Originally posted by black_goku#1
it hasnt lessened and it has been four years im always told i should just move on but i cant. im a screwup and ill admit it boldly. everything in my life i try to do right i end up wrecking. *sighs* ive lost so many people that i love and everything i touch seems to die. i know i shouldnt feel sorry for myself because i deserve this but still it really hurts and no matter how hard i try i eend up in the same miserable spot of failure
This is when you show the world your true self, your mettle, my friend. Stand tall and be the man, shaking your fist at fate and soldiering on, or staying where you can wallow in the mire of self. You have it in you to succeed and grow into a strong and wonderful person, you just have to recognize and take hold!!!

Coldfire
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
This is when you show the world your true self, your mettle, my friend. Stand tall and be the man, shaking your fist at fate and soldiering on, or staying where you can wallow in the mire of self. You have it in you to succeed and grow into a strong and wonderful person, you just have to recognize and take hold!!!
yes What he said

black_goku#1
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
This is when you show the world your true self, your mettle, my friend. Stand tall and be the man, shaking your fist at fate and soldiering on, or staying where you can wallow in the mire of self. You have it in you to succeed and grow into a strong and wonderful person, you just have to recognize and take hold!!!

but as of yet i really cannot rise up to be more than a blip on a radar screen of sucsess and my reign has always been short! but never the less one day i will rise up to be the person i feel burning inside of me. one day all will know my name. oh and no im not gonna try to take over the world as fun as that wouuld be. im gonna be a great actor one eday.








giggle giggle snicker snort
i love to laugh a funny sort
giggle giggle wheeze and choke
i do all this at a joke
sniffle sniffle weep and cry
i realize the joke is i
sniffle sniffle weep and cry
i wish to god id fu.ckin die
giggle giggle snicker choke
i bet you all wish id croak

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
but as of yet i really cannot rise up to be more than a blip on a radar screen of sucsess and my reign has always been short! but never the less one day i will rise up to be the person i feel burning inside of me. one day all will know my name. oh and no im not gonna try to take over the world as fun as that wouuld be. im gonna be a great actor one eday.








giggle giggle snicker snort
i love to laugh a funny sort
giggle giggle wheeze and choke
i do all this at a joke
sniffle sniffle weep and cry
i realize the joke is i
sniffle sniffle weep and cry
i wish to god id fu.ckin die
giggle giggle snicker choke
i bet you all wish id croak
Oooo actor eh? Well I wish you all the best in that happy

And as an answer to that poem, no we don't want you to croak hun hug

Puddin Pop
Originally posted by black_goku#1
but as of yet i really cannot rise up to be more than a blip on a radar screen of sucsess and my reign has always been short! but never the less one day i will rise up to be the person i feel burning inside of me. one day all will know my name. oh and no im not gonna try to take over the world as fun as that wouuld be. im gonna be a great actor one eday.








giggle giggle snicker snort
i love to laugh a funny sort
giggle giggle wheeze and choke
i do all this at a joke
sniffle sniffle weep and cry
i realize the joke is i
sniffle sniffle weep and cry
i wish to god id fu.ckin die
giggle giggle snicker choke
i bet you all wish id croak Oh...its so cute i luverz them!

black_goku#1
thanks puddin and cold fire yeah thanks wow its been a crazy week but um lets see uh new poem this is gonna be off the top of my head so forgive me if its choppy


Love is blind
but we know its coming
it likes to hide
it just keeps running
becareful your choices
you just may miss
a time where one rejoices
your one sweet kiss
love is blind
so listen well
and if your lucky
youll feel its spell


((ooooh yalls gonna hate me its a love poem i was going for darker but hey its my best at the moment))

Coldfire
Well I'm a lovey dovey sort of person, so I don't mind at all stick out tongue
For just off the top of your head that is good! happy

black_goku#1
Originally posted by Coldfire
Well I'm a lovey dovey sort of person, so I don't mind at all stick out tongue
For just off the top of your head that is good! happy

aw thanks LOL

im outta ideas for now but like ive got a bunch of stuff brewin cuz wow! life really sucks

Puddin Pop
Originally posted by black_goku#1
thanks puddin and cold fire yeah thanks wow its been a crazy week but um lets see uh new poem this is gonna be off the top of my head so forgive me if its choppy


Love is blind
but we know its coming
it likes to hide
it just keeps running
becareful your choices
you just may miss
a time where one rejoices
your one sweet kiss
love is blind
so listen well
and if your lucky
youll feel its spell


((ooooh yalls gonna hate me its a love poem i was going for darker but hey its my best at the moment)) Aw i luv it!

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
aw thanks LOL

im outta ideas for now but like ive got a bunch of stuff brewin cuz wow! life really sucks
you're welcome happy

Yeah I'm kinda out of ideas myself at the moment lol

Puddin Pop
Originally posted by black_goku#1
aw thanks LOL

im outta ideas for now but like ive got a bunch of stuff brewin cuz wow! life really sucks Aww life can only get better. Wow I sound like my mom. We make more soon I'll be waiting!

Coldfire
Originally posted by Puddin Pop
Aww life can only get better. Wow I sound like my mom. We make more soon I'll be waiting!
Me too yes

black_goku#1
wow i been gone awhile sorry ive had a tight schedule anyway life is unjust and hears my poem to reflect on that aspect



My Tears

My tears are not enough,
to wash away the pain
to cast away this Feeling
to purify this stain
My tears are not enough
to take away the hurt
to grant a bath of Healing
to drive away the dirt
My tears are not enough
to tell you that in lost
to make me more Appealing
to melt your heart of frost
my tears are not enough
to help me with the grief
i here am Kneeling
with sudden disbelif
My tears are not enough..........

((hmm lost my train of thought but hope you like it i just feel it doesnt quite capture the feeling im looking for. Oh guys im getting published! isnt that awsome?!!!!))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
wow i been gone awhile sorry ive had a tight schedule anyway life is unjust and hears my poem to reflect on that aspect



My Tears

My tears are not enough,
to wash away the pain
to cast away this Feeling
to purify this stain
My tears are not enough
to take away the hurt
to grant a bath of Healing
to drive away the dirt
My tears are not enough
to tell you that in lost
to make me more Appealing
to melt your heart of frost
my tears are not enough
to help me with the grief
i here am Kneeling
with sudden disbelif
My tears are not enough..........

((hmm lost my train of thought but hope you like it i just feel it doesnt quite capture the feeling im looking for. Oh guys im getting published! isnt that awsome?!!!!))
awww.... I love it hug

((You are?? Awesome!! eek! ))

black_goku#1
im sorry guys i am running on empty

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
im sorry guys i am running on empty
Don't worry hun, I am too smile

snehin
some good work

writers block tis not easy im stuck in my book too

Coldfire
It's sucking soooo badly right now disgust I have half a dozen unfinished poems lying around that I can't seem to finish....

black_goku#1
oh dark pit
lake of torment
thy soul so cold and bleek
what horrid presence
what ghastly curse
has caused you to wax and wane
can the frost around thine heart be thawed
the void that consumes thy breast be filled


((ok i quit but i hope that strikes someones fancy its aboot me so im like talkin to myself))

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
oh dark pit
lake of torment
thy soul so cold and bleek
what horrid presence
what ghastly curse
has caused you to wax and wane
can the frost around thine heart be thawed
the void that consumes thy breast be filled


((ok i quit but i hope that strikes someones fancy its aboot me so im like talkin to myself))
eek! Hey!!! I missed seeing ya around! hug

And I love the wording of that piece! yes

black_goku#1
i missed all of you too ug i have been going through so much crap did you really like that poem? It was very different for me. im still runnin on empty although

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
i missed all of you too ug i have been going through so much crap did you really like that poem? It was very different for me. im still runnin on empty although
Yeah I really did like it yes

black_goku#1
ok ive got nothing that rhymes so how about a sortof journal thing would you guys mind reading a little journal of my life for awhile until i get more poetry ideas

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
ok ive got nothing that rhymes so how about a sortof journal thing would you guys mind reading a little journal of my life for awhile until i get more poetry ideas
Sure, that works for me happy

black_goku#1
nov 12 2005 2:22pm

so i have spent the last two days at home right? theres like a "bird flu?" going around my school and i finally caught it. I hate being sick i never get sick and i have learned that nyquil* is the enemy!!! i have had nothing but time to go online and go through all my emails (432 to be exact) and i came across this chain letter. it was cute and then it said if i didntt send it to five people in 20 mins i would have a cursed love life for the next ten years. i dont believe in these things but i didnt need anymore bad luck so i sent it quick. igot a response that said good job the woman you love will realize how much she loves you tonight. dudes and dudettes i kid you not the girl i care most abodumped her boyfreind and asked me out. ofcourse i said yes. now it could be a coincidense but im happy! isnt that crazy???

Coldfire
wow that is pretty crazy, but awesome at the same time! big grin

black_goku#1
sorry internet down for awhile but have a happy chrismahonakwanza solstice everyone smile okie day i gots ta go but i love ya all

Coldfire
Originally posted by black_goku#1
sorry internet down for awhile but have a happy chrismahonakwanza solstice everyone smile okie day i gots ta go but i love ya all
And I was gone when you came back... darn... ah well... Love ya too hun hug wavey

midneight
((its still blackgoku#1 hi hey any idea how to get your old account when you lose your old password and dont have the same email address?))


A forbidden Path

I traveled down a lonely road and steered towards the right
a lovely little forbidden path full of happieness and delight.
A voice called out so soft so sweet to guide me to the door
She took my hand my arm my heart and made me crave much more
i walked this road indeed my friends with a smile ear to ear
for this special girl you see gave me nothing to fear
An inner strength i felt inside a swelling pool of pride
as i walked down this path my lover at my side.
"i love you" said i in disbelif of my pleasnt surprise
"i love you too" said she tears flowing from my eyes
"i never thought id end up here with someone as great as you. you gave me strength you shed me light when i thought my life was through"
To this a simple smile and kiss and my feelings then they grew.
for in my heart rest a start to a life so grand so new

A shadow crept up this path one i wish never again see
For when this thing this curse this hell came it took her away from me
and now i search this lonely road and i wander towards the right
for chance to find the one of a kind
little forbidden path of delight

black_goku#1
((ok my poetry thread has been sleeping for awhile time to revive))

tap tap tap on a door made of solid wood
a heavy strudy barier
between what i cant and what could
i budge i push i ram i pound
but this door to salvation knocks me to the groung
my fists are bloodied
my face is blue
with all ive studied
i cant open you.

King of Blades

FŽanor
Originally posted by black_goku#1
((ok my poetry thread has been sleeping for awhile time to revive))

tap tap tap on a door made of solid wood
a heavy strudy barier
between what i cant and what could
i budge i push i ram i pound
but this door to salvation knocks me to the groung
my fists are bloodied
my face is blue
with all ive studied
i cant open you. It would do well if you actually used spell-checker before posting your poetry. That said...this piece unfortunately rambles incredibly without sense, rhyme or reason. Apparently this door is a metaphor for either person, place or thing. I'm thinking...person?

black_goku#1
((well then perhaps you yourself are longing for someone. this poem is a gaint metaphore, for what however depends on the reader. im sorry if the speling goes on horribly and im sorry if the poem doesnt quite take to your likeing to be honest i write em up on the spot and post em...the meanings are my moood and upon the reader. and it does rhyme if you look closer. its not perfect but a valid attempt. thank you though did you enjoy my other poems?))

black_goku#1
new poem

help me please
i need you now
im on my knees
asking how
to give me hope
to give me light
to cease my mope
to give me light
aide me now in this my darkest hour
give a bloom to my heart the wilting flower.
help me please i scream to heaven
on a scale of one to ten im lost at eleven
i need someone to help me up
when i scream that uve had enough

Bat Dude
It's pretty good stuff... I'm not really into love poems/songs that I didn't write myself, but they're pretty good... But what does "uve" mean? I assumed it was internet lingo for "you've", but I wasn't sure...

Speaking of songs, how about checking out my Song Lyrics thread? Not to shamelessly self-advertise or anything...

black_goku#1
that was a typo for ive sorry and thank you will do aswell

black_goku#1
my path has darkened, my stride is lulled
by a phantom, i feel controlled
i reach the end of a road yet known
my fears and worries have only grown
i look right and left and right again
on both sides is there hope
or do i walk to the end
of a path so depressing
and so short lived
not worht reminessing
never wishing i did

Jedireaper
Nice.. the rhyming scheme changes halfway through though.

black_goku#1
...i dont quite have my old flare lol....i uses to be a rhyme scheme of ababab and then in the next stanza it would be aabb

Ya Krunk'd Floo
down.

black_goku#1
It took me a long time to find this lol I feel like writting again though

Scribble
You should write some more, I'd read 'em.

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