my version of harry potter 7

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yoda545
hey i am going to write my version of harry potter 7 post wat u think about it

daeri
Everyone does it, why not write something else..? smile

Hermione202
ok then . post away

misslilsweetie
post post post post post lol

yoda545
Ok here it goes
Chapter1- the dark mark

Harry potter lay asleep in his bed snoring loudly. He yawned and woke up. Through the gap of the curtain the sky looked dark green. Harry blinked and walked towards the window. He pulled the curtain open and looked to see privet drive was lit up by the dark mark.

yoda545

yoda545
more tomorrow is it good blink confused

misslilsweetie
wow it was good bit fast but good! post more

yoda545

joelsef
it is moving a little bit too fast, but yea, its pretty good!

HPRox90
It's really good! Post more soon!

misslilsweetie
POST!!!!!!!!!!!! BEFORE I EXPLODE!!!!!!!

Hermione202
Iys a bit fast (now i know what people mean when they say that about my story) but its really good !

yoda545

misslilsweetie
great.......and umm next time can u pls put quation(SP?) marks....its hard to understand it without them..srryy

hotsauce6548
From now on, you're going to need to use paragraphs, and quotation marks. Right now the story is virtually un-readable.

hk_*^^*
its goode

HPRox90
Yeah, keep posting!!!

jlee17xoxo412
cool story, keep posting

gregmontanza

gregmontanza

jlee17xoxo412
dude why do u keep posting in other peoples thread. Thats like, so not cool

Saratn
you aren't supposed to do that without permission from yoda545. jlee is right...

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