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poem written for a crush

Your eyes are so pretty,
Im sure your smart,
I won't forget the day that you
stole my heart,
I knew someday I would find a girl,
Who's eyes remind me of the prettiest
pearl,
And today I think I have truly found,
An angel who walks upon the ground.

by: Michael

Awww that's cute hun

lol is that TeenTitans if so nerd.....

no he's not a nerd he's a super nerd

god you people are so mean i liked it critias

Originally posted by DarkDethbringer
lol is that TeenTitans if so nerd.....
Originally posted by GGgrievous725
no he's not a nerd he's a super nerd
Ummm excuse me, but that is none of your concern. It doesn't matter if he likes Teen Titans or not, because that's not what this thread is about. It's about his POEM, so if you have nothing to say about it, then please don't say anything at all. And if you two want to diss it, then use CONSTRUCTIVE critism thanks.

any 1 here?

My life is like a cold damp cave,
I really hate it all,
I'm sick of being treated like a slave,
I'm on the edge about to fall,

I'm sick of all that's happening,
My life really does suck,
My girlfriend tossed away her ring,
And now I'm out of luck,

I really can't go on like this,
My heart can't take the pain,
My love I'll never miss,
And I'll walk down Shadow Lane,

Now I can see,
That there is only one person
to trust,
and to say it I must,
That person is me.

by:
Michael

any 1 here?

I loved them critias keep up the good work
~Winery~

so did I do what u want and work hard and someday ppl will see
~Kikyo~

u girls still here?

I am but my sis had to go to work but she'll be back at 10:00pm my time

do u like yu gi oh because that saying at the bottom of your words are from

yes I do but my sister's sig is right my isn't and I have the WINGED DRAGON OF RA but Kikyo has all 3 gods she's so luckey

Someday the skies will burn,
And it will rain fire,
At that time we all will learn,
That the temerature will get higher
and higher,

Some people will walk into flames,
And some might even die,
Some might even go crazy,
And then the birds won't fly,

Then a light will shine down on us,
And the fire will disapear,
Campers will leave their campus,
One more thing will disapear,
And that is all the Fear.

by:michael

wut u think?

i dont like the last two lines

it was funny but in a good way

one word Excellent ur very good at this
~Kikyo~

thx

any 1 here?

You have good stuff hun

My life is slowly fading away,
My blood is smeered on the walls,
There's nothing left to say,
Notice how my happieness falls,
As anger grows closer to taking over,

It'll keep growing and growing,
No one can stop it,
In my body anger is flowing,
Just waiting to be released,

My heart is being crushed by all my anger,
Happieness does not exist in me,
Neither does love or hope,
It's clear enough to see,
That my life has been fake,

My friends had lied,
Saying i was their friend,
That thought has died,
Because the way they use me,

My life is a wreck,
And far away from my grasp
is fun,
So i'm mad at life,
Now my happy life is done.

clapping Keep up the good work Critias, thanks for sharing