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ill post chapter 2 tommorow

i liked it !!!! but ti me its kind of confusing in the very beging...

some one is here: )

ok

thx for reading

any 1 else here?

hello?

hiya how you guys like my story?

I thought it was pretty neat... cept I was getting a little lost because of some grammar errors.... but no matter lol. Interesting topic tho

hey coldfire u in here?

thx for reading

2nd chapter tommorrow

chapter 3 comes on sunday or monday

there are paragraghs in real version this thing didn't put them in

I like it alot and so does Kikyo(my sis)

1 word awesome keep writing pm me ok bye

This story is well written critias. Just a small suggestion...could you add some detail to the characters in the upcoming chapters? I would appreciate it, I'm trying to figure out what these characters look like.

Saratn u still here?

ill make sure i tell wut chars look like

Character Look Likes

Character,
Ragnoros: (all white) Short sleeve shirt, baggy pants. blank wrist bands, shoes.

Amy: Armored girl (all blue) 



Zoey:  Looks just like the girl only with pink hair.


Recnur: (all blue) baggy pants, torn (former short sleeve) muscle shirt

Stone: brown wrist bands, brown shoes, black short sleeve shirt, black baggy pants.

chapter 4 comes on monday


chapter 4
The Loss of A Friend

any 1 here?

i think i've out done myself

chapter 5

friendship is the strongest
power of all

comin tuesday august 2nd 2005

great job, critias. can't wait to read more tomorrow...

chapter 6

Flash Back


coming august 2 2005

im guessing since so many people view my thread and not reply it must be bad to them

I love them and if ppl think their bad then they a very stupid your a very good writer keep it up

sorry meant to do this last night...
I think your doing a great job. Don't worry if people don't like your story. People like me and cornilna love your story and think that you write good.

chapter 7

The Location of The Cats Eye

today or August 3 2005

This is getting better and better. Let me know when chapter 7 comes.

how is chapter 6?

ok nvm

I thought that chapter six was excellent. Especially with how you talked about the battle him and his father had. It was really intense. Again...good job.

this is getting exciting. you had really good twists to the story.

Chapter 8

The Cats Eye Dijlin

comes today or tomorrow

thx

I love ur story can't wait for the next chapter but I'll just wait *picks up W.I.TC.H. book and starts reading*

how is it?

chapter

evil plan revealed

Is one the worst score?

i don't care what you think its all depends on what i think

I like it a lot critias

chapter 9 comes today

ill be on in a little bit i got to spend some time playing with my dog

Originally posted by FeceMan
Is one the worst score?
That was kind of rude you know Feceman. Some people here like critias's story, and I know I don't appreciate reading that remark. I believe the forum rules were something like no negative comments or something. I don't remember. If you have nothing good to say then don't say it at all.
BTW critias, great job with this chapter. sorry i didn't read it sooner. been kind of busy.

so how is chapter 9?

chapter 10

Friends Aren't Everything

coming today

ill be done with chapter 10 around 5:00 pm

keep writing

agreed. you really have the talent to write stories.

things are really getting interesting now...

thx

no problem. can't wait to read more...

chapter 11 and 12 come tomorrow

im thinking of what the chapter name for chapter 11 should be

thinking thinking thinking

Originally posted by critias
i don't care what you think its all depends on what i think
I was asking about the scale. Not insulting your writing. However, if you continue to address me in such a manner, I will go at it, both barrels loaded.

Originally posted by FeceMan
I was asking about the scale. Not insulting your writing. However, if you continue to address me in such a manner, I will go at it, both barrels loaded.

:: Hands him the ammo ::

well it sounded like you were insulting his writing. This is all just a misunderstanding. I'm sure critias meant nothing about it. He thought you were insulting his story. I did too, it was just the way you wrote it.

ya hes right srry new chapters didn't come today ive been busy

take your time. you'll come with a great name for the chapeters.

srry haven't been on computer was malfunctioning

i need to get started on my story now

goody!!! i've been waiting for a long time. i missed it so much.