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here is my poem that I wrote...


It feels like you've slowly drifted away
Ever since you walked out that door
My heart still aches for you each day
But I know you're coming back no more

Oh! How I miss seeing your face
And the way you used to look at me
You did not leave a trace
Or even say good-bye to me

Now I cannot sit around all day
I really should move on
But I just wish you'd come back today
And tell me why you're gone


I sent that poem to www.poetry.com and they are publishing it in a book

Good poem, and congrats on the book deal.

Originally posted by CrazyInLove
here is my poem that I wrote...


It feels like you've slowly drifted away
Ever since you walked out that door
My heart still aches for you each day
But I know you're coming back no more

Oh! How I miss seeing your face
And the way you used to look at me
You did not leave a trace
Or even say good-bye to me

Now I cannot sit around all day
I really should move on
But I just wish you'd come back today
And tell me why you're gone


I sent that poem to www.poetry.com and they are publishing it in a book tha's some awesome sh!t becca

nice work on the book deal

That's a great poem! So close to my heart as well yes And congrats on the book deal hun hug

Thanks guys!! Glad u like it

Are you gonna post some more for us?

Well, I don't really have anymore.

Aww well if you don't have any, you don't have any

Yup But, if I write anymore, then I will definately post them


Becca

kk sounds good

awww... I like it

Originally posted by CrazyInLove
here is my poem that I wrote...


It feels like you've slowly drifted away
Ever since you walked out that door
My heart still aches for you each day
But I know you're coming back no more

Oh! How I miss seeing your face
And the way you used to look at me
You did not leave a trace
Or even say good-bye to me

Now I cannot sit around all day
I really should move on
But I just wish you'd come back today
And tell me why you're gone


I sent that poem to www.poetry.com and they are publishing it in a book

It's a great poem, but (and I hate to be the bringer of bad news), poetry.com is a sham. They 'published' a poem of mine, sent me mountains of correspondence about conventions, readings, award ceremonies... it's all lies. DO NOT send any money to them, you'll never see it again and you certainly won't see your work published. I didn't send the money they asked for and I didn't go to the ceremonies etc... please don't fall foul to their promises.

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
It's obvious that when you wrote the 2nd and 3rd parts, you're mind had wandered a bit, as it does not follow the 1st. The overall thought remained, but the format and rhythm do not. I suppose it's hard to concentrate when one is inundated with mixed emotions and fleeting thoughts of...oh who knows!!!

Write what you feel in your heart, but don't let the mind wander off its course. Your first was better.

yeah, lol, I didn't really like it, but for some strange reason I still posted it I wrote my first poem about a dear thing that I lost last May.

nice stuff, agree some with nun... course, he'll get on me now bout my wandering style... please, write some more! welcome to will's boring sunday.