I know im posting in here too, and im sorry, but i thought that was retty funny.
Its pretty good. Keep going.
thats a good beginning, wright more soon
Well, since everybody else is disreguarding riku's request, I thought it was the cool thing to do.
It's a good story. Keep writing. I have a suggestion, though. Most people won't go through the trouble of looking for another thread and then commenting in there. Instead, they just won't comment at all, so I would advise to just let people post in this thread.