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Fantasy.

Dancing light and shimmering dreams
The Darkness has awoke.
It follows me about my mind
At night it does provoke.

It beckons, it calls, it taunts me so.
Eternal night, with ember glow.
Where it takes me, we shall see,
It's only just a fantasy.

Like I said, I'm not very good, but right brained people like to have fun.
Here's another one I did.

Little Dictator

There is a little dictator sitting on my couch.
She only comes just past my knees, but she can scream and shout.
So away we take the tyrant,
to where the tyrants go,
Later I will check on her and give it one more go..

When I open up her door she blocked, laying on the floor,
She runs to me to hold her, I can tell she wants no more.

Welcome back to our Republic,
Welcome back to my domain,
Welcome back my angel,
I'm glad your back again.

With her blanket and her kangaroo sitting on her lap,
I wonder,
are all tyrants cranky, when they've had a nap?

Stinker

Baby doll eyes that sparkle
The dimple in his smile,
His look of innocents grabs you
You want to hold a while
He sees you through the doorway
He runs on little feet,
He runs you think to kiss you,
then says "mom your breath stinks."

OK...one more.

WHERE ARE YOU?

Where are you?

I am the song that drifts through out your day.
The voice that tells you your OK.
The shadows as you walk on by,
I'm always watching you.

Can't you feel me?

I am the stillness of a heart that skips, the daydreams of azure and gold.
I am the whisperings of golden leaves, and trickling brooks,
and swirling winds,
Yes the coolness of the morning dew a kiss to all I touch.
I often touch you...


Where are you?

I am here...I wrap my world around you.
I am here...Gently blowing in your ear.
I am here...Surrounding your thoughts with dreams...
and caressing you with my rain...It is me, and I am here.

I am here,
And I am you.

Sea Creature

Shovelling the ocean with a teaspoon.

So, that's how it is.

A weary drop at a time.

It can never be done,
never do any good,
all it does
is make you tired.

Why do you need the ocean water?

To survive, to put upon the back
of a stranded creature,
scarred and gasping.

If that creature dies,
so will I.

Can you not move it
closer to the ocean?

It is too heavy.

Can you not find a larger receptacle
to carry water in?

There is only me, the ocean,
the beach and the creature
in all of existence.

The creature cannot move?

No, it cannot.

Can you call for help?

I have called a weary hundred thousand times
until my voice broke and my throat
was hoarse from all the shouting
and the creature nearly died
because I spent what energy I have
on screaming, not on ferrying the water.

Can you not dig the sand?

It is too slippery
and I have to keep bringing water
all the time or else
the creature dies.

What does the creature say?

It doesn't say a thing,
it is suffering too greatly.

Have you not considered
putting yourselves out
of your never ending misery.

I stop and my head begins to hurt.

I turn to look at the blackened,
red burst crusted alien creature
and I go to it and talk to it sincerely
and it opens a weary eye
to look at me.

Would you rather die? I ask it
and it nods its head so slightly
that I have to ask again.

But how can I sit here and watch you die?
You are all I have in all the world -
without you what would there be,
just this shore, this ocean,
I cannot be here by myself.

I keep you so that there is
some measure of purpose
for my being here at all.

Please don't leave me,
please, please don't die!

I love you desperately, needfully,
I cling to you with everything I am
and I will do whatever you ask of me -
just please, oh please don't leave me here!

I cry and cry and my tears touch the creature
and where they fall upon its
blackened, burned, charred skin
it soothes there
and healing
is taking place
like magic.

Round spots of healing,
revealing an opal blue green skin
of sea smoothness
where there was
wound upon wound.

This was the salt water
which the creature craved,
a salt water not found in the ocean,
a salt water that carried such strong magic
you would never know or guess
just how much healing transformation
it has the power to procure.

I can heal you, I thought,
I can really heal you and perhaps when healed,
you'll heal me back
and there's a chance of something else,
a chance of life
beyond the never ending toil and suffering
here on this barren shore.

A great sadness wells within me -
I cry and cry and heal and heal and heal
and cry and heal and cry
and finally the creature is restored
entirely in its sleek and ancient beauty -
it lifts its head and it begins to
sing a song of beauty,
of compassion and of love
and as it does, the sky begins to rend
and through it came a cornucopia of life
of sea and land and sky and
thus transformed the barren shore
to lusciousness and teeming,
to colours, sounds and textures
rich and full of majesty
together in a symphony
of life.

I didn't write it, but always liked it.

What was your inspiriation for sea creature?

hahahaha good stuff. I like em.

Thank you.....Once in a while I can get a little creative....

OH...btw, I didn't write the last one..if you look at the bottom of it, you'll see....I just liked it.

Oh thats still cool then....

very much so^^^!

The sea creature is a story about healing and loving yourself....I'm glad you all liked it...I did too...

Indeed. More?!?

OK...at the beach with some creative thoughts.....not sea creature kind though.

LET HER SLEEP.

Don't wake her......
Let her sleep.....

Crimson fields filled with fragrant poppies
Intoxicating.
Burning sky of fire..refreshing waves electric..

Shhhhhhhh...
Let her sleep...........
Don't awaken her.

Blowing wild encompassing her
pulling her, pulling her away...........

Another pot of coffee, a gathering of mail
another day, another day.....She dreams her days away....

She lights a fire in the hearth
Colors crimson and ember glow.
She peeks outside the window sill
the moon bight with Venus.

Shhhhhhhh
she's sleeping....
Don't wake her

Hold me closer Hold me closer, she whispers in th night...she is far away....

Shhhhhhhh..don't wake her.
Only this moment... honey on her lips.
Only this place, forces of nature blend together bound...

Another pot of coffee, gather the mail another day another day.
She dreams her days away.
Going to the lake...Bronze, Beauty, dark chestnut hair..midnight eyes..

Shhhhhhhhhhh
She's sleeping
don't wake her

Let her sleep
Let her sleep

She's dancing....dancing....dancing....dancing....
Dancing in the moon lite...

Earth Met Sky

Deep within the fiery Earth was life.................
It pulsed up untill it met the sky.
They intermingled and formed eternity..
The invisible, the dimension...next door
And it cried..............


Blue..

Blue is a funny color
Eyes, sky, waves,
Blue can be the dark night before the dawn
And blue can be just the blues.............

Originally posted by debbiejo
OK...at the beach with some creative thoughts.....not sea creature kind though.

LET HER SLEEP.

Don't wake her......
Let her sleep.....

Crimson fields filled with fragrant poppies
Intoxicating.
Burning sky of fire..refreshing waves electric..

Shhhhhhhh...
Let her sleep...........
Don't awaken her.

Blowing wild encompassing her
pulling her, pulling her away...........

Another pot of coffee, a gathering of mail
another day, another day.....She dreams her days away....

She lights a fire in the hearth
Colors crimson and ember glow.
She peeks outside the window sill
the moon bright with Venus.

Shhhhhhhh
she's sleeping....
Don't wake her

Hold me closer Hold me closer, she whispers in the night...she is far away....

Shhhhhhhh..
She's sleeping
don't wake her.

Only this moment... honey on her lips.
Only this place, forces of nature blend together bound...

Another pot of coffee, gather the mail,
another day another day.She dreams her days away.
Going to the lake...Bronze, Beauty, dark chestnut hair..midnight eyes..

Shhhhhhhhhhh
She's sleeping
don't wake her

Let her sleep
Let her sleep

She's dancing....dancing....dancing....dancing....
Dancing in the moon lite...

Sorry for the ohhhhhhhhhhhhh..changes....me do things like that.

Me

Mine is me
Mine is all
Rip it not
no
no
no
Turn away, have you .
Rip me not.
I have a cry, I have a cry
no
no
no
I will feed it not, I will not
The grains will not contain me
the sand of time not
I am...
Feed not the thing ...Not within Me
Love cast on beauty unknown
Whispers of thoughts
Tears of compassion
Kill me not...mine not you.
For I am within
Save me within...Will you not be there.
Saltine tears...saltine tears...saltine tears...

Mine is me..

Wow... wow... um, your poems are very much dreams... wow...

Drifting......

Capsizing I fall.....
drifting deeper and deeper still
falling the light dims slowly....
and the calm intrudes upon my soul.
lifelessly I sink...heavily and washed......drifting......and soft
Serging....aimlessly....wondering...travels.

Ah, yes....I've found you my love.

The Sculpter

Molding clay surging fingers.
prompting pleasure of the mind
What shall I make says the potter
what shall I make for mine....
He takes it home....not be alone...
The treasure comes alive,
He breathes the breath of life upon it
Together in their mind.....

Good job debbiejo, keep going...

You cometh home to claim thine own
While lockeths away you left thyne thrown
thyn servant doth dine, and weave for thee
whilst travel a wilds I've heard of thee,
No key, no key you left for me.
You cometh now....I give my plea.

You cometh with haste giveth thee mine fate,
because of a male heir me not make.

My neck is fair and clean my Liege,
I pull-est my locks, awaiteth for thee

My heart doth tremble, my heart doth flow
For I was Queen, and my love bestowed.

Um, wow. Feeling like an english queen as of late, babe? (poor taste reference to tower of london....) (sorry... just couldn't help myself )

Wow you have some really good stuff!

OH, thanks...I've never taken poetry as you can tell, I don't know the rules of it, but sometimes I think its fun....I have more fun writing allegory stories though...

OH. English Queen...Lol...That just popped in my head, but now that I look at it...It has toooooooo much rhyming in the beginning...I like old English though...Kinda cool to read stories in old English.

Originally posted by debbiejo
OH, thanks...I've never taken poetry as you can tell, I don't know the rules of it, but sometimes I think its fun....I have more fun writing allegory stories though...

OH. English Queen...Lol...That just popped in my head, but now that I look at it...It has toooooooo much rhyming in the beginning...I like old English though...Kinda cool to read stories in old English.
Yeah it's something you can play with, just go completely wild, do whatever, cuz it doesn't have rules

Originally posted by debbiejo
You cometh home to claim thine own
While lockeths away you left thyne thrown
thyn servant doth dine, and weave for thee
whilst travel a wilds I've heard of thee,
No key, no key you left for me.
You cometh now....I give my plea.

You cometh with haste giveth thee mine fate,
because of a male heir me not make.

My neck is fair and clean my Liege,
I pull-est my locks, awaiteth for thee

My heart doth tremble, my heart doth flow
For I was Queen, and my love bestowed. old school poetry not heard it for a while

I think Old English stories and poems are Romantic....though not that poem....I love Medieval and such.

Originally posted by debbiejo
OH, thanks...I've never taken poetry as you can tell, I don't know the rules of it, but sometimes I think its fun....I have more fun writing allegory stories though...

OH. English Queen...Lol...That just popped in my head, but now that I look at it...It has toooooooo much rhyming in the beginning...I like old English though...Kinda cool to read stories in old English. Originally posted by debbiejo
I think Old English stories and poems are Romantic....though not that poem....I love Medieval and such. haha not what i meant, but cool all the same. haahaa! Yes, the medieval period is definitely the best, imo... ha...go figure. What all have ya read from that era?

Originally posted by debbiejo
I think Old English stories and poems are Romantic....though not that poem....I love Medieval and such.
Me too

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha not what i meant, but cool all the same. haahaa! Yes, the medieval period is definitely the best, imo... ha...go figure. What all have ya read from that era?

Can't remember though it was generally fictionial, magical kinds of things....One book I think, which is out of print was "Clock Orange"..strange name....but was neat.

OK...another rhyming poem....

ANGEL OF DEATH

Angel of Death come sweetly,
Lift me to your lair.
Spill your darkness deep within,
For I am waiting there.

You've taken maidens long before,
And left their men in sorrow.
For I have opened up my gate,
So take me not tomorrow.

For Demon dark take my light,
My Holy light for your delight.
Spill your seed within my soul,
And let my essence flow.

Angel of Death I greet thee
Holy and completely.
I open my wings,
The Earth rejoice.
The Angel of Light has made her choice.

Originally posted by debbiejo
OK...another rhyming poem....

ANGEL OF DEATH

Angel of Death come sweetly,
Lift me to your lair.
Spill your darkness deep within,
For I am waiting there.

You've taken maidens long before,
And left their men in sorrow.
For I have opened up my gate,
So take me not tomorrow.

For Demon dark take my light,
My Holy light for your delight.
Spill your seed within my soul,
And let my essence flow.

Angel of Death I greet thee
Holy and completely.
I open my wings,
The Earth rejoice.
The Angel of Light has made her choice.
Oooo very nice... sorta reminds me of The Shadow Lover by Mercedes Lackey

^ Sorry...I haven't read it...can you post it for me.,..tried to look it up...but couldn't find it....

Sure I can

The Shadow-Lover
Mercedes Lackey

Shadow-Lover, never seen by day,
Only deep in dreams do you appear.
Wisdom tells me I should turn away,
Love of mist and shadows, all unclear --
Nothing can I hold of you but thought --
Shadow-Lover, mist and twilight wrought.

Shadow-Lover, comfort me in pain.
Love, although I never see your face,
All who'd have me fear you speak in vain-
Never would I shrink from your embrace
Shadow-Lover, gentle is your hand
Never could another understand.

Shadow-Lover, soothe me when I mourn
Mourn for all who left me here alone,
When my grief is too much to be borne,
When my burdens crushing-great have grown,
Shadow-Lover, I cannot forget
Help me bear the burdens I have yet.

Shadow-Lover, you alone can know
How I long to reach a point of peace
How I fade with weariness and woe
How I long for you to bring release.
Shadow-Lover, court me in my dreams
Bring the peace that suffering redeems.

Shadow-Lover, from the shadows made,
Lead me into shadows once again.
Where you lead I cannot be afraid,
For with you I shall come home again --
In your arms I shall not fear the night.
Shadow-Lover, lead me into the light.

Well thanks....I like that one.....

hhahaha... well. groovy work, Deb.

Originally posted by debbiejo
Well thanks....I like that one.....
You're welcome And I like it too

great poems

Mine fate was not so clear...my love was near, with you....
you clung to my breast...
My deepness gold....
A god and goddess eternity.

OH...how you loved to unravel me....thrown down at your feet.
Surprised were you not when you slay me...

Bewitched were you not by me?......my jeweled navel, my haunting deep eyes, my charm, my lips of sweet honey and wine....

You I had, you I enticed....you I gathered into my web.
But, OH..you....oh you....my warrior charm....entered my web and destroyed it......you like a spider my King...

Wrapped me round....Your feet I kiss, my breast you hold.....
Endless tales of stories you told.....you kept me tucked within your heart.

Let them not know.....let them not see....Our future will hold an asp for me ....

Mine own heart doth sing to you, my glory....a treasure...none have won over it...not many....Let it not....let it not end with sorrow.....

careful, oh my love.....Abundant flowing with gods pleasure ..you my divine.
OH come to me again after siege....I wait I wait I wait....

I wait, I wait, I wait...

i love your poems great flows to em

Originally posted by debbiejo
Mine fate was not so clear...my love was near, with you....
you clung to my breast...
My deepness gold....
A god and goddess eternity.

OH...how you loved to unravel me....thrown down at your feet.
Surprised were you not when you slay me...

Bewitched were you not by me?......my jeweled navel, my haunting deep eyes, my charm, my lips of sweet honey and wine....

You I had, you I enticed....you I gathered into my web.
But, OH..you....oh you....my warrior charm....entered my web and destroyed it......you like a spider my King...

Wrapped me round....Your feet I kiss, my breast you hold.....
Endless tales of stories you told.....you kept me tucked within your heart.

Let them not know.....let them not see....Our future will hold an asp for me ....

Mine own heart doth sing to you, my glory....a treasure...none have won over it...not many....Let it not....let it not end with sorrow.....

careful, oh my love.....Abundant flowing with gods pleasure ..you my divine.
OH come to me again after siege....I wait I wait I wait....

I wait, I wait, I wait...

I wander who you are talking too.

It's historical......don't know???????....OH how I love metaphors.

Very cool. love the ancient feel to these works. haha ancient poems for an ancient heart, eh? what a match. more please!!!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Very cool. love the ancient feel to these works. haha ancient poems for an ancient heart, eh? what a match. more please!!!
So that's where ya got your dA name hehehehe

But I, too, would like to hear more yes

Originally posted by Coldfire
So that's where ya got your dA name hehehehe

But I, too, would like to hear more yes heh. well, that and an old poem of mine, that I can never post... yes, more!!!

should of been born when strangers could feel......Spirits of dancing....Would of been..could of been...What you really are...

Strong, Oh so wise,
Vigilant...so mighty....
Integrity...loyalty of all that is wise.
Lead on the battle ahead.
Confident of their certain demise..

And Yet tender, kind hearted.
Protector of all that's mine...yes mine fragile.....oh my love.
Let me soak in thyn heart.....always....
You should of not been born in this century...Not know any like you.

But In my garden on Mt.Olympus I've seen you...you misplaced...I did.
time, time, time...

Doorways to open...might you find ....find...find......Lillie's of the field....

So many many things I want to tell you........
So many things I would share with you...........
So many many things.....I would tell........

But it's a time of far away............
A time of long ago...............
A time, a time,a time...

What you were------What I was.........

what we were once were....hangs inside my soul forever.

Originally posted by debbiejo
should of been born when stangers could feel......Spirits of dancing....Would of been..could of been...What you really are...

Strong, Oh so wise,
Vigulant...so mighy....
Integreity...loyality of all that is wise.
Lead on the battle ahead.
Confident of their certain destroction..

And Yet tender, kind hearted.
Protected of all that's mine...yes me.....oh my love.
Let me soak in thyn heart.....always....
You should of not been born in this century...Not know any like you.

But In my garden on Mt.olimpos I've seen you...you missplaced...I did.
time, time, time...

Doorways to open...might you find ....of Vurtue....Lillies of the field....

So many many things I want to tell you........
So many things I would share with you...........
So many many things.....I would tell........

But it's a time of far away............
A time of long ago...............
A time, a time,a time...

What you were------What I was.........
notworthy Very very nice. Reading these is almost like hearing soft whispers of a lover at night.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
heh. well, that and an old poem of mine, that I can never post... yes, more!!!
Mysteriousness O.o lol
Originally posted by debbiejo
should of been born when strangers could feel......Spirits of dancing....Would of been..could of been...What you really are...

Strong, Oh so wise,
Vigilant...so mighty....
Integrity...loyalty of all that is wise.
Lead on the battle ahead.
Confident of their certain demise..

And Yet tender, kind hearted.
Protector of all that's mine...yes mine fragile.....oh my love.
Let me soak in thyn heart.....always....
You should of not been born in this century...Not know any like you.

But In my garden on Mt.Olympus I've seen you...you misplaced...I did.
time, time, time...

Doorways to open...might you find ....find...find......Lillie's of the field....

So many many things I want to tell you........
So many things I would share with you...........
So many many things.....I would tell........

But it's a time of far away............
A time of long ago...............
A time, a time,a time...

What you were------What I was.........

what we were once were....hangs inside my soul forever.
wow.... that was really good!

Ok a new one.....I love nature....and I love metaphors...so here it goes.

WINDS

The deepest woods
smell of leaves, maple and oak.
Oh deepest kind, there I sit in your splendor and grandger.

Hearing, calling, awakening me.
The voice of what is.....crisp and intoxicating.
Winds blowing fragrance unknown to to see, but me.

There I sit inhaling deeply,
Feelings flowing over whelm me....
Where?......Can you indulge me?
Fill me. Breathe me in as I do you....

There I sit in my affections....waiting...

I am moved, oh so with you
Carry me away, oh wind.
Take me so and place me where I should go.

There I sit...my eyes closed.

Swirl oh winds and pull me, draw me near,
as I do you. How my heart sorrows.
For I can't feel you, not for so very long....

There I sit, there I feel,
there I dream of going with you................

Oh swirl around me oh winds.
My fingers feel you.....you touch them.....

Oh winds you slip through me......
Oh winds.........

Originally posted by debbiejo
Ok a new one.....I love nature....and I love metaphors...so here it goes.

WINDS

The deepest woods
smell of leaves, maple and oak.
Oh deepest kind, there I sit in your splendor and grandger.

Hearing, calling, awakening me.
The voice of what is.....crisp and intoxicating.
Winds blowing fragrance unknown to to see, but me.

There I sit inhaling deeply,
Feelings flowing over whelm me....
Where?......Can you indulge me?
Fill me. Breathe me in as I do you....

There I sit in my affections....waiting...

I am moved, oh so with you
Carry me away, oh wind.
Take me so and place me where I should go.

There I sit...my eyes closed.

Swirl oh winds and pull me, draw me near,
as I do you. How my heart sorrows.
For I can't feel you, not for so very long....

There I sit, there I feel,
there I dream of going with you................

Oh swirl around me oh winds.
My fingers feel you.....you touch them.....

Oh winds you slip through me......
Oh winds.........


dang.... this makes me feel like a woman is holding me whilst her hands caress my chest and hair, and her kisses flutter upon my neck and face... haha wow.... very very nice.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
dang.... this makes me feel like a woman is holding me whilst her hands caress my chest and hair, and her kisses flutter upon my neck and face... haha wow.... very very nice.
Wow got imagery from first debbie's poem then from you Will haha eek

Good stuff girl

Just call it like it feels ladies... hahaha...

SOULS

Inside a soul triumphed waits
For spirit never hesitates...
She listens to the wind........

It longs to live and flow so free
never in captivity.
She touches with her hands..........

Eternal questers touch force with light
No one can capture her delight...

Never can a soul be forced...
Never never to remorse
Never can it be unlinked...
Unless she desires it so........

A soul is always free..Blissful through the eyes that sees.

For time is only eternity....
Beyond this time, beyond this thought,
A spirit holds not what it ought....

It flows, It's free, sparks life from me....
Enters layes deep with thee....

How many souls and spirits free,
Find your own, and join with me..

You think you might to capture mine,
Ah....you might if you're divine!

Touch the wind, and you touch me..
Feel the sun, the warmth on thee...

Embrace the earth, the goddess whole,
enjoy the fruits of all untold....

QUEST

You can not forsake me...no never could
The key is with not me though........

Oh what shall we do.....OH,

Gone and away, on quest that he may,
many a year he goes....

OH dearest mine longs to sing of thy songs...
but though has forgotten of me???..Yes?

The tower is dark, And I fail to see....
What's to become of me....

Chasity belt so locked and so felt,
OH, how I do wish You'd unlock me.....

Ah...but the truth of thy youth has taken you.
Just as my tower holds me soooooooo....

My heart be with you my knight ship....
Unless you triumphed show....

The guilds and guards can see only a glimpse
Of a damsel in castle not known....

Don't fret my knight of me here so,
For my dwellings do never do hold...

Forget me not, for immortals don't stop,
I leave when ever I please....


I

Originally posted by debbiejo
You can not forsake me...no never could
The key is with not me though........

Oh what shall we do.....OH,

Gone and away, on quest that he may,
many a year he goes....

OH dearest mine longs to sing of thy songs...
but though has forgotten of me???..Yes?

The tower is dark, And I fail to see....
What's to become of me....

Chasity belt so locked and so felt,
OH, how I do wish You'd unlock me.....

Ah...but the truth of thy youth has taken you.
Just as my tower holds me soooooooo....

My heart be with you my knight ship....
Unless you triumphed show....

The guilds and guards can see only a glimpse
Of a damsel in castle not known....

Don't fret my knight of me here so,
For my dwellings do never do hold...

Forget me not, for immortals don't stop,
I leave when ever I please....


I

ok.... the last 2 are great, but i got some personal questions on this one.... so plz answer the pm quickly... ha..

OK....I guess...we do have similar poetic thoughts....yes....Me do not copy....Nope...write from real life experiences....and throw in history...just love that....Learned that writers have to feel to write....took a course in that...writing that is.....but no poetry class.

Originally posted by debbiejo
OK....I guess...we do have similar poetic thoughts....yes....Me do not copy....Nope...write from real life experiences....and throw in history...just love that....Learned that writers have to feel to write....took a course in that...writing that is.....but no poetry class. hahaha yeah. not accusing you of copycattin, just... well we discussed it. hahaha no need to drag it out here.

Well....send me yours...Love to read it...really....flowers

ha.... cant... i am ok to be vulnerable in all but this one poem. never shared it prolly never will. sorry. nothin against anyone just.... only the woman who haunts my dreams knows the poem. i wrote it in a dream, and she read it. it is meant for a wife.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ha.... cant... i am ok to be vulnerable in all but this one poem. never shared it prolly never will. sorry. nothin against anyone just.... only the woman who haunts my dreams knows the poem. i wrote it in a dream, and she read it. it is meant for a wife.
If it means that much to you she'd better damn well like it! yes

Originally posted by Coldfire
If it means that much to you she'd better damn well like it! yes
hahahha.... well, i dont really think i gotta worry about that too much. im not lookin at seein a woman that deeply involved in me. hahaha! oh man...

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahha.... well, i dont really think i gotta worry about that too much. im not lookin at seein a woman that deeply involved in me. hahaha! oh man...
Don't worry hun, you'll find her yes

Perceptions....

Somewhere waits.....
Somewhere things are as the bubbling brooks....

Ever bubbling down and curving around
tenderly touching and caressing...

Merging, blending, melding.....

Somewhere steaming and evaporating......
going on forever in eternity......

Holding, twisting, becoming as one.....
Somewhere OH somewhere...where????

Ah look...Why are you smiling????
Why are you looking at me this way?

All I see is black flowers......

NO....all you see is purple.....

See?????

Aaaah....niceeeeeeeeeeee, yes.

Purple, scarlet, and sunset ember.

haha wow.... lotta visual imagery that makes me think of a hotsprings, set amidst lilies of the valley. cool.

Well, I am a nature lover......thankie

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha wow.... lotta visual imagery that makes me think of a hotsprings, set amidst lilies of the valley. cool.
that's not... dammit bad me!

I liked it tho

Originally posted by Coldfire
that's not... dammit bad me!

I liked it tho getting dirty again girlie! hahaha! Originally posted by debbiejo
Well, I am a nature lover......thankie Ditto. i love to go down to the creek and just watch the fish and water... wind blowing the grass around, insects flitting, buzzing... is a very peaceful place. and good for inspiration.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
getting dirty again girlie! hahaha! Ditto. i love to go down to the creek and just watch the fish and water... wind blowing the grass around, insects flitting, buzzing... is a very peaceful place. and good for inspiration.
shush you bag



I like nature too

Originally posted by Coldfire
shush you bag



I like nature too aww what's wrong with me??? I'M not the one being crass... naughty

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
aww what's wrong with me??? I'M not the one being crass... naughty
Not until now anyway

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior

We're so bad

and yet i dont feel too bad to be so bad.

CHANGES

everyone told me so.....
New things come and old things go.....

Changes...seasons...times and place
Forever seep down in a place,

Can't change the past, nor never would
Can't place the future, where you could

Changes changes changes be,
It's only fruit on same ol tree,

Not really change, but still a part,
same one tree, and same one part

Fall, and summer, spring and summer,
Calm and windy, rain and wonder....

Still the changes time does flow,
But trees don't change from seeds it holds....

Once a nick to slice a tree,
will always carry long with thee.

Flowers sweet and fields of bloom,
will never take away the loom...

OH changes, fragrance, tender leaves,
It's only till the dreamers dream...

Life is short, but spirit long,
If that you Hear the Natures song.

wow i love your poems!!!... i envy you so much >.< anywho... your great... i didnt have time to read them all but i will eventually

Thank you....that means so much....I just get in the mood sometimes...Sometimes even years before I feel like writing...though I love to write allegory stories.

Originally posted by debbiejo
CHANGES

everyone told me so.....
New things come and old things go.....

Changes...seasons...times and place
Forever seep down in a place,

Can't change the past, nor never would
Can't place the future, where you could

Changes changes changes be,
It's only fruit on same ol tree,

Not really change, but still a part,
same one tree, and same one part

Fall, and summer, spring and summer,
Calm and windy, rain and wonder....

Still the changes time does flow,
But trees don't change from seeds it holds....

Once a nick to slice a tree,
will always carry long with thee.

Flowers sweet and fields of bloom,
will never take away the loom...

OH changes, fragrance, tender leaves,
It's only till the dreamers dream...

Life is short, but spirit long,
If that you Hear the Natures song. haha... neat. yes, dream a dream with me, and in dreams shall we ever be. winkiss

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha... neat. yes, dream a dream with me, and in dreams shall we ever be. winkiss
Are you cheating on me William?!?!?!?!

JK JK


I have no idea why I said that

And I liked the poem btw debbie

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha... neat. yes, dream a dream with me, and in dreams shall we ever be. winkiss

Ahhhh...you got the metaphors of what I was talking about......... .....Sometimes things only happen in dreams.....When the moon is high, and spirits wonder..

Originally posted by Coldfire
Are you cheating on me William?!?!?!?!

JK JK


I have no idea why I said that

And I liked the poem btw debbie oopss..... i've been caught! bag Originally posted by debbiejo
Ahhhh...you got the metaphors of what I was talking about......... .....Sometimes things only happen in dreams.....When the moon is high, and spirits wonder..

yeah.... ha... or if you are insane in your membrane, and your mind is already gone... yes. only in dreams may we be ever truly free.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
oopss..... i've been caught! bag

yeah.... ha... or if you are insane in your membrane, and your mind is already gone... yes. only in dreams may we be ever truly free.
I can't believe you of all people would do this to me William! *swoons dramatially with hand over forehead*

Originally posted by Coldfire
I can't believe you of all people would do this to me William! *swoons dramatially with hand over forehead*

*catches her as she swoons* you know there's enough Big Willie to go around! hysterical naughty

Umm... yeah. i just thought about how that sounds....

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
*catches her as she swoons* you know there's enough Big Willie to go around! hysterical naughty
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Umm... yeah. i just thought about how that sounds....
hysterical ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!

You two crack me up...........Next time bring a pizza....

Originally posted by debbiejo


You two crack me up...........Next time bring a pizza....

hahaha well, how bout a coke !

Celestial Play

The moon is very bright to night.
just below is Venus.

OH, Venus how you do your plight
to search for ones delight,

But wait look see a comet flee
quickly though Orion...

Virgo looks just past the west
To see it hit Orion's chest.

Oh Venus know the moon does see
What you do in secrecy.

Who cares the gods who looks and waits,
Another fest to celebrate.

Bless the sky, the milky way,
Let immortals have their play

Toast your glass and let you say
Venus had her night away.

nice..... really neat.

Well, if you do look outside now...you'll see Venus just near the moon, and that night I did see a shooting star....so it all worked in....OH my...how I love the heavens....Of course you have to add on mythology....

and thanks.

Originally posted by debbiejo
Well, if you do look outside now...you'll see Venus just near the moon, and that night I did see a shooting star....so it all worked in....OH my...how I love the heavens....Of course you have to add on mythology....

and thanks. yw, and thank YOU ! hah havent seen venus yet, is cool to know. and yeah,the heavens.... mmmmmm. .... so beautiful. so ..... man, just to lay back and take in infinity, viewing the world in a different way..... just beautiful.

Well Venus it one of the first very bright like star that is the moon now...you'll see it...can't miss it...very bright.

Venus is also considered the goddess of love in mythology...

Originally posted by debbiejo
Well Venus it one of the first very bright like star that is the moon now...you'll see it...can't miss it...very bright.

Venus is also considered the goddess of love in mythology... yes, i saw it, and heyyyy baby! naughty hahaha yeah, venus. on the half shell or not, she is a beautiful goddess.... aphrodite.....

Here's one a friend wrote...I thought it was good so I'm posting it...

MY ROSE

My love is a rose, standing out from the rest,
Her color the brightest, her frangrance the best.
But a rose set aside and not bathed in the sun,
Soon pales in its color and waits for the one
Who should care for and nourish the delicate flower
To honor and Cherish and protect it from harm.

Though lonely and weary, the flower stands tall
Adapts as it must to handle it all.

Excuses were many, comforts were few,
My head, not my heart telling me what to do.
Empathy a word I would hear time to time
Not wanting to know and not seeking to find
Anger and bitterness, putting myself first,
Neglecting you now and making it worse.

Originally posted by debbiejo
Here's one a friend wrote...I thought it was good so I'm posting it...

MY ROSE

My love is a rose, standing out from the rest,
Her color the brightest, her frangrance the best.
But a rose set aside and not bathed in the sun,
Soon pales in its color and waits for the one
Who should care for and nourish the delicate flower
To honor and Cherish and protect it from harm.

Though lonely and weary, the flower stands tall
Adapts as it must to handle it all.

Excuses were many, comforts were few,
My head, not my heart telling me what to do.
Empathy a word I would hear time to time
Not wanting to know and not seeking to find
Anger and bitterness, putting myself first,
Neglecting you now and making it worse. I like it muchly. very true too how the rose, as all things, fade when kept in darkness.

SEASONS.

Autumn blows away...away all.....gone
Petals fall, blown away....so far they go......away....

Beauty dies, cold is now near winter...oh so sad,
Swiftly goes the seeds, swiftly goes the fragrance,

Though birds savor the food they give...yes life....
the tundra is now approaching sleep.

Nights are cold, colder, coldest.....like ice...
Grass frozen, trees bare, as do memories.....

Night Sky's filled with the stars....Yet they don't feel...no
they can't....for they are removed by distance....tears...

Falling stars, comets, Venus who looks down....
Just as the others of Mythology once again..

Sleep tender one...sleep the rapture of hibernation,
Sleep tender one....Sleep and don't yet wake,
Sleep tender one, oh my tender one...my heart emptied

Safe you are inside your soul...sleep forever.
Never to awake...never to awake...never to awake...

Lest the new buds caress thee and touch my soul.

ANGELS

My heart is thrown up to the heavens....
my light was shining...........

my light fades now......
let who ever finds it plant it.
plant it deep... plant it .....in the depths.
deep deep for ever so...deep.....

Let it grow down deep into the earth Mother...
Let her caress it as only she can do....

Bath it in her warmth, love hers never failing...
I looked like an angel...dancing.....once.........

For she takes care of all the angels, the lost ones,
OH, she never demands....no no....no....all her time,

All her time...eternity....

Eternity for angels....

great stuff!

Well thank you much....Melancholy mood I guess.

Originally posted by debbiejo
Well thank you much....Melancholy mood I guess.
Yeah I find myself writing in a melancholy most of the time, even though I don't feel melancholy... guess it's just what I write about best or something *shrugs* lol

LIGHT

Perfect emotion, perfect rythum of life ahhhhhh
swaying, gliding, dancing....through ones senses....
Like passionate pearls....shared a space.

Beneath the wet water slides, caresses professes...
Transforms, as the light never dies...Soft yet burns
Never wants, never wastes, light flies high. ...Nor hides..

And then came me.....
And then came ahhh you........

Hey.....eternal lightttttt...will flame my site with seasons lust.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh.....A Star......

Let me look into your eyes...A starrrrrr.....
Let me look into your soul .....From far....
Let me look deep......A starrrr....

Lightness spills for the burning....
Desire....

neat!

That's really cool debbie

Gypsy Fire

The midnight sky is the enchantress
That unlocks my desires.
Her stars ignite my passion
free to find its equal.
Her moon lights the path to my love
and my heart is fulfilled.



Romance

Seductive and sweet, my lips do say
Romance be mine, a time to play
I fascinate, bewitch, enchant and allure
The mysteries of love to experience for sure
My passion is peaked
and returned in kind
To frolic and flirt, inhibitions unwind
When time is done and desire fulfill
All are released and all not still.


A few short ones..

nice

Wow I really like those two!

Thanks mucho......

I LOVE THE NIGHT

I love the night.
sharing thoughts and endeavour's
know one to know my wonders
darkness only knows...
Sharing temptations in your eyes.
The ones in my dreams.
Forgotten, sometimes misplaced
A glimpse, a light, a scent,
a memory....Oh my a song....a season.

TASTES

Taste my heart
wrap yourself inside me
catch my desires of you
let me play, let me have some fun with you.
Let me put my spell on you..entice.
Feel me..taste me, smell me, breathe me.
Licking my lips..tasting yours.
Seeing deep in your eyes.
Don't look away..for you can't.
Yes, me too....I am part of you.

They're all so beautiful..... i love your abstract poems..... they really do capture something.... so very good.......





king

Thanks goddess in training.....I love the abstract...because I am....

finally can get on... argh!! nice work debs.

THE NIGHT

I love the night
Distant souls seem to soak up the sorrow....
Distant could seem to soak up the light.

Ever touching ....
Ever seeking.....
filling filling what is not there.

Wandering in the night...
breathing what fills.
All that spills into me..

Come it from far
No mortal can keep it so
Come darkness like a dark star

Is it any wonder how it all acts
Is it any wonder the poisons it leaves.....
Is it important the facts
Is it important how it cleaves...

Dissolving into dust, the winds....
Only to blow on the next it sees
Ahhhh how it ends....
The point to see it be....

Oh the light
The light
The light
dims..........

The winds blow again.
Changing from night to dim

The night

SHADOWS


Fantasy that fills my mind
So often taken, am inclined.

Figures say that your not there
Leaves me feeling such despair.

I wish I may, I wish I might
Wish upon that star at night.

But see it as I often look
It's only such a fable crook.

Turn the shadows that I see
Will never make me feeling free.

Memories that make me slave
Will never come take me away........

ISLAND MIND

Yes I know the secrets of the Island mind
One that settles for lies

The one that lives outside the lives
The one that travels in disguise

Yes I know the secrets of the Island mind
The one that travels to shores,

The mind who's life needs a fix
The one who never tires of kicks.

I never tier of the Island mind
The place where plays are real.

The Island mind wants it sent
It's never an irritant.

Come come Island mind eccentrics
The nexus of the Matrix.

Nice

mmm hmmmm!

Good stuff debbie!

I was in a little mood...Thanks..I'll have to think of more.

Originally posted by debbiejo
I was in a little mood...Thanks..I'll have to think of more.
Same with me... maaan was I in a mood yesterday.... but I need to write more poems too, sometime...

i second that motion, eye!

Originally posted by bogen
i second that motion, eye!
But of course

SWEET LOVER YOU SHOULD OF CAME OVER.


"Lover, You Should've Come Over"

Looking out the door i see the rain fall upon the funeral mourners
Parading in a wake of sad relations as their shoes fill up with water
And maybe i'm too young to keep good love from going wrong
But tonight you're on my mind so you never know

When i'm broken down and hungry for your love with no way to feed it
Where are you tonight, child you know how much i need it
Too young to hold on and too old to just break free and run

Sometimes a man gets carried away, when he feels like he should be having his fun
And much too blind to see the damage he's done
Sometimes a man must awake to find that really, he has no-one

So i'll wait for you... and i'll burn
Will I ever see your sweet return
Oh will I ever learn

Oh lover, you should've come over
'Cause it's not too late

Lonely is the room, the bed is made, the open window lets the rain in
Burning in the corner is the only one who dreams he had you with him
My body turns and yearns for a sleep that will never come

It's never over, my kingdom for a kiss upon her shoulder
It's never over, all my riches for her smiles when i slept so soft against her
It's never over, all my blood for the sweetness of her laughter
It's never over, she's the tear that hangs inside my soul forever

Well maybe i'm just too young
To keep good love from going wrong

Oh... lover, you should've come over
'Cause it's not too late

Well I feel too young to hold on
And i'm much too old to break free and run
Too deaf, dumb, and blind to see the damage i've done
Sweet lover, you should've come over
Oh, love well i'm waiting for you

Lover, you should've come over
'Cause it's not too late

Not mine, but good..........Jeff Buckley.

Oh Crap, I didn't know you write Deb. good stuff.

Here I am posting lyrics again.........but this is a cool song.....by Weezer.


WEEZER LYRICS

"Island In The Sun"

Hip hip
Hip hip
Hip hip
Hip hip

When you're on a holiday
You can't find the words to say
All the things that come to you
And I wanna feel it too

On an island in the sun
We'll be playing and having fun
And it makes me feel so fine
I can't control my brain

Hip hip
Hip hip

When you're on a golden sea
You don't need no memory
Just a place to call your own
As we drift into the zone

On an island in the sun
We'll be playing and having fun
And it makes me feel so fine
I can't control my brain

We'll run away together
We'll spend some time forever
We'll never feel bad anymore

Hip hip
Hip hip
Hip hip

On an island in the sun
We'll be playing and having fun
And it makes me feel so fine
I can't control my brain

We'll run away together
We'll spend some time forever
We'll never feel bad anymore

Hip hip

We'll never feel bad anymore
No no
We'll never feel bad anymore
No no
No no
No no

My eyes weren't looking for someone
But my eyes fell upon you.......

A sweet voice meant nothin,
cause your's I couldn't hear.

My hands couldn't touch your face,
my lips couldn't lick your lips.........

My heat couldn't blow upon you.....
No.....It couldn't

Like another planet..........that's how far you were........
Like an illusion that's how I was allured........

But in breath of this planet which always is........we all are,
yet not.........

And Dear John,..........keep on keeping it on.........

I like the last line, but I always thought it was tongues that lick lips, not lips that lick lips...

You like this......???

Oh, and it's the tongue, lips and face....................btw..........didn't know you visited here...............glad you at least looked at my widdle poems...........did you see them all?


Thanks.

I like the humor of that line. Isn't 'keep on keeping it on' a lyric from a song, though? Intentional intertextuality? Ooo. I'd be interested in seeing this 'tongue, lips, and face' licking technique...It sounds bizarre. Maybe Bardock would like it. And AC.

Of course I visit here; I own the place.

Waters

Tell me again without guilt,
tell me again........

Touch my soul with the wind.
Natives felt it, yet it is gone.......gods have said..........

Waters so deepened black.. currents strong led you away..Like Neptune....yet he is strongest not........but led you back go port,

A Siran calls upon the rock........singing in the Venus moon..................sing songs........yet knowing

Sailors she will not take...

it gives me the sense of being...spiritual and one with...nature.

I doooooo like nature.....

Ok, here's another that just popped into my widdle head.


My Date.........lol

The first time I ate you, you really tasted yummy.
The second time I ate you, you tasted kinda funny.
The third time I ate you, my lymph-nodes started to swell
The last time I ate you, you tasted just like hell!!

Hey...what do I get mentioned for in random threads...

Originally posted by debbiejo
My Date.........lol

The first time I ate you, you really tasted yummy.
The second time I ate you, you tasted kinda funny.
The third time I ate you, my lymph-nodes started to swell
The last time I ate you, you tasted just like hell!!

debbiejo swallows.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
debbiejo swallows.

Well, no man in Michigan who didn't know that.

Is Michigan the world?

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
debbiejo swallows.

NOT.........It's metaphorical...

You metaphorically swallow their semen? How does that work? Is it still good for your skin?

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Is Michigan the world?

In this case, yes.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Is it still good for your skin? Yeah, that's a lie that's been told for centuries...

Only if that is the same way you get your dates.........LOL


And yes.....this is a Ms. Michigan thread.....But foreigners are welcome to post...

Originally posted by debbiejo
Yeah, that's a lie that's been told for centuries...

It's only a lie if lies are actually truths.

Originally posted by debbiejo
Only if that is the same way you get your dates.........LOL

I metaphorically swallow my dates? That sounds fun, but not really. I prefer to astound my dates with my charm before deciding that I'm too good for them, so I'll wait for something better. True story.

A Little

A little Sun Shine in my wine makes me feel so really fine.
A little wait and little take, like an oven let me bake.
Pull me out don't be late.......Or the court will be your fate.

I will sue you up to hell or is that down I cannot tell.
I am Suess or am I not..........I sure like to rhyme a lot.

Originally posted by debbiejo
A Little


Pull me out don't be late.......Or the court will be your fate.



That's not a reliable form of birth control.

Really?????


I always thought the impact would be worth it..........lol

Because I know
Tempting as it may be to give up all my spirituality, I cannot not
I cannot because I know..........
When the birds sing in my ear, a hawk, sparrow, jay, ........no no no....For they have something to say...
When I see the stars and moon.......no, I will not disbelieve........The crescents on it's sleeve........no...........I will still believe...
When the arrows fly, when the accusations want to kill, when there is no hope........I will still believe.........
Why? Because I know..................Because I know............Because......

ONE DROP


A droplet falls down into the succulent earth.
It waits and feels itself sliding down.
Down it travels into the dark, every curve and crevice....soothing ......
It's wetness is welcomed, enjoyed, and savored.....
Gratified they are too meet and mingle to make life.......

Wow that last one rocks

Thanks........

nifty ^_^

cool way to talk about dirt and water huh...........lol